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    Rock 'n' Roll Will Never Die Member Axeknight's Avatar
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    Default Re: The Machiavellian Adventures of Princess Eleanor

    Interesting. I think the Alice Cooper song Poison suits this part.

    I wanna love you but I better not touch (don't touch)
    I wanna hold you but my senses tell me to stop
    I wanna kiss you my I want it too much (too much)
    I wanna taste you but your lips are venomous poison


    The Coop is actually singing about a cold hard heartbreaker type of girl, but Fulk knows he's dead if he gets too close just as surely, so this song is a reflection on Fulk's feelings, just like yours was Eleanor's feelings Froggy.

    “Oh, I think she might enjoy the havoc,” he said mysteriously, as if he had a specific person in mind
    I liked this. Perhaps it's not the most subtle of hints, and there have been many others alluding to the same thing, but don't take that as criticism. Its very easy to make your subtle hints too subtle, so you, being the one writing the story and knowing what is going to happen later on in the story, are the only one who can see it. Casting pearls before swine and all . Heh, far be it from me to give you writing tips though. Great part.
    Last edited by Axeknight; 11-09-2004 at 17:34. Reason: The Labour party is getting money in a cash for edits scandal

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