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Quote[/b] (zelda12 @ July 12 2004,20:15)]Why does nobody ever reply anymore
Because the Mead Hall patrons are usually not very talkative. Please give it more than a day.

Your story isn't bad. Especially the bit about the annoying tune was inventive. But I think you need to pay a bit more attention to description. You already told the surroundings of the characters, but you could do it in some more detail. And, for example, don't say they look evil, but explain why they look evil.

Anyway, what happened to 'Death in the shadows'? At this rate we can call the Mead Hall the 'Hall of Unfinished Tales' .