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Death in the shadows reached what I would call the grand finale of the first part of the larger story but just got to far fetched. The kill count got impressively high. If you've seen hot shots part deux you may have an inkling of what I'm talking about. So I decided to vent my creative energies in another direction whilst I tried to figure out how to make it work. Summer holidays start in 1 weeks time so the free time to write will become more common.