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    Arrogant Ashigaru Moderator Ludens's Avatar
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    Default Re: A civil war tale

    Good to see you pick up the story again, Capo. But I wonder, did you take your time to reread this story before you posted it? Because it contains a number of obvious typo's, especially at the beginning.

    So the story is going to evolve into a personal war between Royce and Greenford? Well, I look forward to reading that. Good luck with part four.
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    There are a few, I just noticed that. It's not too bad though. I'll go back and fix tehm later.

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