Again, nice work Bachus. You have chosen the words well.

Good summary Oswald. Just two suggestions:

1) move the detail to an "appendix" after the signatures & starting on its own page (page break) when printing the hard copy snail mail version.

2) I'm not sure the description "unnecessary" is the best for the "one faction per player limit" item. I believe Duke John determined the limit is due to how the units were constructed graphically, so the limit is "necessary" from a technical standpoint. However, for our purposes, it prevents epic (2v2 or 3v3) online battle of one faction vs another and the summary should speak to that concern.

All in all, it is looking very good!