Neat, neat, neat, neat!

You got Fulk's hair exactly right, both colour and style. You got his mildly cocky pose too. Somehow, don't ask me how, the armour suits him; well, that matches up very smoothly with events about 70 pages further on. I was never entirely sure red would suit Eleanor but it does go quite well with the hair. I should get her to wear it more often. I see you handled the troublesome sleeves very adroitly.

You got the essence of them quite well, they might not quite match the way I imagined them but I doubt anyone ever really manages to capture exactly what another person imagines, especially when said person is crap at describing faces. Essence is more than enough; I'd recognise them if the picture wasn't labelled. The only even slightly negative thing I can say is that Nell's hair should be longer and someone has stolen her girdle but somehow that really does not matter - it's undoubtedly Eleanor.

I've posted a link to this on the paradox forums so my other, now quite large group of readers can come and admire your work. I'll pass any comments on.

You know I have really got to give Fulk change to wear that new armour of his and kick some behind; the sight of him stood there looking ... Fulkish in his mail only makes me more determined. I'm thinking some kind of tournament ....

I shall stop gushing now and start thinking about printing this out.