What they said - nicely done. There are some neat lines in there.

A small tip in return for those grammar ones you gave me; the exclaimation or comment 'o' is always written as 'oh', despite the sound being identical to the letter. "Oh get a life!" It is usual to include a comma after an 'oh' but I don't always bother; if I want the words to be said in rapid sucession I leave the comma out. Most of the time I do include the comma.