Hey! Thanks Monk! I was wondering if I'd ever know what happened to the poor human defenders... it doesn't look too good for them!![]()
Hey! Thanks Monk! I was wondering if I'd ever know what happened to the poor human defenders... it doesn't look too good for them!![]()
part xxi
Death of a Lord
Intersection – 1st and 3rd streets
14:56 hours, first encounter +7
Hour four of the assault
Marcus coughed violently again as he lay on his back; his stomach convulsing and compressing in on itself as he tried to draw breathe. Suddenly his lungs seized up as he threw his body back onto the hard, hot pavement. So much pain was coursing through his body; each breath he took turned into a nightmare that he was forced to live over again. He could smell it all around him; the undeniable smell only created when human flesh is burned. The disgusting scent was all around him and he had not the strength to stand, it was a miracle he yet still lived.
The wounded soldier’s hand slowly moved; it felt numb as he laid it gently on his chest. There running from a large hole in his once thick armor he could feel a cold liquid; his near lifeless hand twitched slightly as he forced the near dead muscles to act. Slowly his arm moved up and he for a split second held his hand before his eyes. No sooner had he got it there he let it fall, the strain of lifting his limb to much to bear. Even through his now blurring vision he knew that liquid’s site, its smell. The scarlet life-force of all humans was slowly leaving him, and with it he could feel his nerves slowly dying. A slight tingle filled his chest, slowly moving through his arms before trickling down to his legs. Marcus’ bottom lip began to tremble lightly as he blinked; his dark green eyes looking off into the sky above.
His throat was drying quickly as he tried to move again, yet this time he could not even lift a finger. The tingling feeling he felt in his body slowly began to cease, and where it had been there was nothing now. Marcus felt not even the slightest breeze from the gentle wind. The tingling was traveling up his neck as he felt his lungs close suddenly, he tried to draw breath but found he couldn’t. A slight panic overtook him as he struggled to grasp life even as it faded from him. There was so much he had to live for, so many things left to do. This couldn’t be the end! A tear fell from his still open eyes as his vision blackened, he gasped again for air but could find none. Without even the strength to give a parting cry, darkness claimed him at last.
Even as life faded from Marcus a sound took to the air; like the beating of echoing drums the sound of running feet pounded upon the broken blacktop. A soldier quickly rounded the corner and ran as fast as his feet could take him down Third Street; sweat dropping from his brow as he knew he couldn’t escape his fate. His green armor appeared ripped open in many places, blood taking the path down unto his skin. His pant legs were covered in energy burns and a red liquid both mingled now together until one was inseparable from the other.
Leaping over the lifeless Marcus he turned quickly, doing a complete 180. He pulled his pistol up to his eye level and pointing it down the street. His shoulders moved up and down with his heavy breathing, making aiming a near impossibility. He swallowed hard, feeling a growing dehydration as he starred back at the intersection. There was nothing there. The wind picked up and gave a soft, gentle whistle as it passed through the breaking buildings around. An old shop sign made of wood rocked back and forth a few feet from him.
The soldier’s lungs opened up as he drew to him a deep breath; slowly his pistol lowered as a slight feeling of security washed over his mind. Yet even so his head felt light as a feather. His eyes half closed and he had to catch himself from stumbling. As he breathed in the air around he could smell battle, in the distance the sounds of war still echoed, but seemed so far away to him.
As the soldier tried to gather himself a scream filled the air. His eyes shot open as he looked around him, his pistol pointing all over as he tried to find the source of the noise. His feeling of security was in an instant burned and splintered into pieces. Panic overtook him as his eyes darted all around, he himself turning quickly from direction to direction searching for an enemy. His eyes settled on the buildings, he’d seen them burst from them before. Not this time! He thought.
Yet the threat came from below, not the side. The ground suddenly burst open with a slight cry and a sharp, sword like talon came rushing forth. The soldier had not the time to even bring his pistol down before the strange limp cut into his soft flesh; cutting past the tattered remnants of his armor like it was not even there. It moved with ungodly speed yet the soldier felt no pain as the talon cut into him. The nerves around the wound were all dead. Even so he felt his strength leaving him almost at once. The talon lifted him up as a number of creatures began to spill forth from the hole; he rose into the air as a creature emerged holding him high for all to see.
Blood began to sprinkle down over and around the creature. Running down its arm like a river before it threw down the lifeless defender of humanity. More creatures appeared from the hole in the street when suddenly a huge and ominous snarl took the air. As the final creature appeared from the hole a scream louder than any one single creature can make overtook their senses; and forth from the street burst the Lord of All. He made his own way through the highway of man; cutting through the road and pushing himself through with ease. Debris filled the air as he came into view and looked around, sensing the landscape.
Suddenly an axe flew out of a shadow; the blade of which glowing red as it sailed through the air and found its mark on the skull of a creature. The sound of its bone splitting filled the air as it fell to the ground, leaving behind a mist of greed blood. The creatures turned, their black coal eyes settling upon the alleyway from which it came. Not even they could protect themselves from a feeling of complete shock when from it came a number of warriors. They burst forth from the darkness with amazing speed, all of them wielding axes whose blades glowed with an inner light. They were human but much taller than the Solicians; wearing almost no armor they charged forth screaming at the top of their lungs. The warrior’s eyes were overcome with rage and yet, a strange look of joy at the same time. They were berserkers…
The Lord of All ordered his creatures to charge them, and with single minded obedience they did so. The creatures let out a scream and charged forth, brandishing their teeth and claws that were now covered with Human blood. Yet they saw no change in the berserkers, it was as if the fact these creatures had slaughtered countless humans did not affect them. If anything it made them charge faster. The two sides collided as a berserker smashed his two handed axe into the chest of a creature; cutting the abomination down easily. The creatures attacked with a ferocity not commonly seen, yet so did the berserkers. They matched their close combat skills, and then topped them. Poweraxes swung through the air, rending bow and mutated flesh without problem. Green blood shot from numerous creatures as they were being overpowered quickly. They tried to push their way through the band of berserkers but without luck. Each time they came close the berserkers became of whirlwind of death; their axes swinging through the air as they moved forward, cutting down anything that attacked.
Creature by creature dropped to the ground before them, the berserkers stepped over them as they pushed them back. Cutting through arms, chests, and decapitating at will. They pushed them back as the Lord of All watched, not caring his minions were being annihilated methodically. Yet when the last fell he struck; two of his arms came around as he tried to butcher the berserkers with one swing. Coming to their senses the many of them took cover, save two. Turning to run they found themselves to slow, and were cut down without problem.
Their bodies found a resting place on the ground as their life force flowed upon the blacktop. They moved no more, the Lord of All let out a deep growl that signified its own amusement. It sensed the ground and felt nothing moving, it believed it had killed them all. Confident in victory it began to snake its way back into the sewers below when it picked up a single human.
Toradir stepped out from behind a ruinous building. His deep brown beard catching the warmth of the sun as it reappeared in the sky. His eyes were ablaze with his furry as he starred at the Lord of All, gripping his power axe tightly in his right hand. A bright red glow took to the blade as he looked at the creature’s head; there were no eyes to look into after all. “You killed my men.” Toradir spoke in a menacing voice; his tone was very deep as his fiery blue eyes were like raging gales. Anger flowed from his soul as the Lord of All straightened its snake like body, extending to its full height over him. However instead of fear; all Toradir felt was rage. He looked up at it, his eyes watching every movement it made as he took his battle stance. The poweraxe in his hand was glowing brightly, still dripping with the green blood of his kills. “Make your move!” he shouted demandingly.
The Lord of All wasted no time and brought one of its arms up high, and then brought it straight down in an attempted to kill him in one strike. The sharp, scythe-like limb was easy for Toradir dodge. He jumped aside as it punched through the street down into the sewers. A cloud of dust filled the air as the street collapsed around the section of the impact. Toradir needed not wait long before the creature made another move; it swung another arm around on level with him to cut him in two. The strike sailed through the air and would have killed the berserker if he had not jumped forward at the last moment. The Lord of All instead smashed his arm into a building, destroying its base and sending it crashing down onto its limb. Brick and mortar tumbled down, crushing its arm and causing the creature to howl in pain. “Now’s my chance!” Toradir pushed his body forward, running as fast as he could. A cloud of dust, dirt and debris rose up around the buried limb, into which the berserker warrior disappeared.
The huge creature was too preoccupied to notice Toradir was gone until it felt something moving upon its arm, it turned its head and sensed him moving up its arm. The berserker had climbed upon the trapped limb and was climbing up to his head. For the first time in its existence the Lord of All showed panic, it screamed in fear as two limbs were now trapped. It brought around one of its only arms not used in the fight, sending it straight at his enemy. Toradir smiled as he leapt from the body of the large creature; just in time to miss being killed he fell to the ground. Hitting it he rolled and looked up, ending up back where he started. The creature sliced deep into its arm and cried the loudest it ever had; pain filling its scream. It slumped forward and lowered its head almost onto the street as blood flowed easily from the huge self inflicted wound. The berserker rushed forward as it began to draw its head back. Quickly he grabbed onto the base of one of its mighty teeth, as the Lord of All lifted its head it also unknowingly lifted Toradir.
The berserker held onto the tooth with one hand and his axe in the other, quickly the Lord of All realized what was happening and jerked its head back. Its attempt to shake Toradir succeeded as he was thrown up, but quickly turned from success into failure when the berserker landed on the top of the creature’s head. Toradir found balance on the moving creature as he held high his axe, his remaining men watched as he brought it down into the side of the creature’s skull. Its head flew to the right, reeling in pain. With a cry of anger the warrior lifted it and brought it back around, slamming it into the right side of the creature’s head. Blood flowed easily as with each swing Toradir’s poweraxe cut through the Lord of All’s bones. The berserker then lifted his axe and brought it around one last time, smashing it into the front of the creature’s head as deep as he could. Toradir felt his weapon punch deep, passed the skull and into the brain. The huge creature let out a horrible cry as it lost balance and began falling to the ground. Toradir used his axe, which was deep inside the creature’s head as an anchor to keep his balance. He held on tightly as the creature fell to the ground, hitting the street with a rumble causing the earth to shake. Blood flowed from it like a river; its green sight was satisfaction to the berserkers who had lost two friends.
The Berserker removed his axe as he jumped from the dead creature; his breathing heavy and every muscle in his body exhausted. Suddenly as he did so every creature in the city cried out in anguish. Their minds felt ravaged as their suppressed emotions returned. They felt their Lord’s demise and the fear it had felt overcame their minds. They screamed into the air, searching for their leader vainly. It became clear to them all in an instant their leader was dead, but there was one who could still lead them. Shrill cries filled the air as slowly they began to leave the city, leaving behind a horrible toll of death and destruction.
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"if ya hate Final Exams, give me a hell yea!"j/k
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Sorry guys. Been studying for finals cuz i REALLY need to do good to pass. Here's something though, I hope you enjoy it.
AtPG:was you expecting this?
also added A warning to the start of the thread, i've noticed this thing is really violent and bloody![]()
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I can see it now![]()
Human wins Creature loses![]()
From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
hell yea!"if ya hate Final Exams, give me a hell yea!" j/k
Sorry guys. Been studying for finals cuz i REALLY need to do good to pass. Here's something though, I hope you enjoy it.
AtPG: was you expecting this?
also added A warning to the start of the thread, i've noticed this thing is really violent and bloody![]()
Hehe. I figured it would be down to the wire for good ole humanity. But I suspect it isn't over...
Yeah, it is pretty bloody. Bloody good!![]()
Monk, this is getting better and better by the chapters… the death of Marcus was brilliantly narrated and it moved me.
I got a tear in my eye when the berserkers entered the scene. Let the tide turn.![]()
Status Emeritus
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part xxii
No Escape
5 kilometers south of Solace
00:42, first encounter +8
The sky above flashed with lightning as a low rumble took to the land. Thunder rolled upon the air, rising higher in sound before falling into humble silence that left the world without noise. A mist formed upon the wind as the dark clouds above began to let their rain fall. Slowly the mist formed into rain and before long lighting streaked across the sky as water pounded into the earth. A crackle of thunder rand another streak of lighting flashed across the sky, revealing something that had gone unnoticed by the spirits of the world. Down upon the ground, gliding silently like a black ocean of despair, a mass of creatures moved with great speed away from Solace. Their hides punctured, ripped and cut open; many spilling their life force upon the earth they so desired to burn. Yet they were changed. No longer did they scream out in their anger and hate, no longer did they feel a buried sense of pride floating in their twisted minds. They could feel it when their Lord was slain, like a bursting dam emotion flooded into their minds. Emotion that had lain buried before.
They were so angry, so full of hate for humanity. Never did a being feel such malice toward another as they felt at this moment. Yet, for all the rage burning inside each of them; there was something else they felt. Hidden behind the veil of hate and failure was fear, wrenching their hearts and coloring their minds. Overtaking their actions and causing them to run from their hated enemy. They knew they had failed, and he would surely punish them. They had to prove themselves before their lives were ended.
Suddenly the wind seemed to draw back and like a huge explosion a great blast of sound entered all their minds at once. It overloaded their senses causing them to lose control of themselves. All of the creatures fell upon the earth at once, falling face first into the mud as their open wounds were filled with water and dirt. Others tripped over their fallen comrades, having no time to stop. The sound was sudden and like none they had ever felt before, for it was not heard, but felt. Slowly creature by creature staggered to their twisted feet; their eyes searching the landscape for what had caused such confusion. A thick layer of confusion settled upon them as they could not even find the courage to speak in their horrid language.
Their eyes soon went wide as they felt the sensations they dreaded. Whispers crawled in their skulls, as if someone was speaking to them but no one was there. Shivers traveled up their spines as the wind picked up slightly. Their skin crawled as they knew what this meant, he was near! For the first time in many hours they cried out, shouting into the air their shrill screams echoed back to them over the landscape. They were begging. Their scream died away, but not of their choice. They could feel something hushing them, a voice in their mind at the edge of hearing yet somehow controlling them. Fear dripped from their corrupted souls, and they hated the feeling.
Slowly they could feel the voice changing, first from a distant statement to a whisper, and then hearing it clearly. It spoke directly into each of their minds; ravaged by hatred it was the single voice they did not wish to hear. “So…” its words slithered through their minds like a snake. Try as they might, nothing they could do would shut it out. “You failed your master” The wind died away and the world became quiet. “Solace was in your grasp, yet you fled…” Where was this voice coming from? They cared not; all they wanted was it to stop.
“You may have failed” a laugh overcame the voice as it spoke, “but now I control all of my true brothers. Except you!” Screams echoed out from every direction, the mass of creatures looking all around. They could not comprehend what was happening. “This will soon be corrected” The voice stop as a low rumble took to the earth; the creatures could feel the vibrations echoing through the soaking wet mud. Something was coming, yet it was not human. Their black eyes settled on the horizon as figures appeared in the distance; moving at high speed they could see them perfectly despite their great distance.
Countless figures whose hides were a mix of black and a brownish color raced toward them. Moving not on all fours to obtain great speed, they ran upon their hind legs like a human. Their bodies were thick and covered in what appeared to them a tougher exoskeleton than even their own. They stood hunched over; their heads holding what looked like scales doubling as a thick armor. Their faces were elongated and they held rows of teeth that all appeared sharp. Hanging from their mouths was a large tongue that almost begged for subsistence. Their legs were shorter but only aided in propelling them further as they moved, their arms were long and their fingers thin but sharp as knives. They appeared like the human creatures, only more…advanced.
Among them at the head of their main thrust from the south was a single figure. He was tall and his skin was overcome with a green and brown mix of liquid and twisted skin. He walked upright like a human but appeared to be no such thing. His arms were thin and elongated like the creatures he led, but in his hand he held a great scythe that appeared to be made from the steel of a fallen building. They knew that man; even though they had never seen him in their life they knew him. It was Uriel.
These new creatures seemed to appear from every direction; and from their stance it was clear they wished to do battle. The mass of creatures that had run from Solace were surrounded and there was no escape no matter where they looked. Yet now it mattered not, they damned their fate and screamed loudly; breaking the ‘block’ Uriel had placed on them. Their fear evaporated in a mist of rage as they prepared themselves for the onrushing charge. Lightning flashed in the sky, reflecting in the red eyes of these new creatures. With a cry deeper and more horrid than older species they slammed into their hated brethren who had failed their task. They dug their claws into the creatures and ripped into them, releasing blood and cutting through them with ease.
The survivors of Solace tried to fight back, but these new creatures had tougher hide. As they thrust their hand and limbs forward they found they could not penetrate through. Pain would trace through their limbs before the creature they attacked ripped out their throat, or sliced through their chest. It was brutal, Uriel cut a swath through his former ‘brothers’; cutting them down as he saw fit and wiping clean their failure. They were superior in everyway to the old creatures, and they slaughtered them without mercy.
The last of the creatures that had attacked solace fell with a blood curdling scream, its chest ripped open and blood spraying upon its attacker. The deed was done, and Uriel smiled in sick delight. He turned to his newly bred creatures; they had performed better than he ever thought possible. Their eyes emitted a red glow, a strong contrast to the old creature’s black void. They let out a low rumble of praise to their victory, again very different from the previous creatures that had terrified their enemies. Uriel knew that now nothing could stop him, and he laughed.
Yet before he could even raise his scythe in victory he heard a strange sound. The wind being cut through like a knife as a jet engine thundered through the sky toward him. He turned around and looked up as the rain came down harder. This battle was far from over…
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part xxiii
Allies and Enemies
ORDER battleship, Upper Earth Orbit
01:32, first encounter +8
Nathaniel sighed as his back flattened against the worn down seat inside the cockpit of his mech. The green monitor before him was the only light within the confined space; he watched as line upon line of text displayed technical information. His right eye twitched as he blinked quickly, his only source of light was irritating his sight. As his eyes opened he looked up, the many switches around him were like home he’d been there so many times. Yet pushed between the metal panels, sitting beside the main power switch there resided a photo; a simple piece of paper upon which an image of great importance resided.
Yet it wasn’t of tactical information; some sort of military importance or anything. It was important to Nathaniel alone. Upon the paper a little girl smiled up toward the camera; her blond hair reflecting a ray of sunlight as she held a ball in her hands. It was his little girl; Nathaniel’s one and only child. His eyes slowly closed again as a smile etched across his weary face. He could almost hear her sweet voice when he was silent, calling out to her father. Only another three months and he’d be home for good.
The radio suddenly burst with activity as a voice came flooding through the speakers. “10 minutes to drop. Begin Equipment Checks” Nathaniel’s vision of his daughter was cut short at that moment; he watched her image flutter away and fade into the metal hull around him. Her voice was gone from his hearing; being driven back into his memories to reside. The soldier looked about him as he flipped a number of switches; the onboard computer reacted as it began the start up sequence. A near unnoticeable vibration began moving through the cockpit, one that is only felt by someone who has spent years inside it. It was subtle, but Nathaniel felt it. All too often he had known it. However, for the first time in his many years, he was uncertain about the day ahead of him. His fate seemed elusive, as did this new enemy.
A red window appeared upon his monitor as the onboard sensors came online. It was a message from his commander to all the mech units. The message displayed itself quickly on the screen and was simple. “Solician battle Net Intercepted, Battle progress available”. Following the sentence, a frequency was displayed. The message suggested that they tune in and give a listen. Nathaniel was not one to listen to fighting when he himself was not doing it; but something compelled him. The creatures were, after all, supposed to be ever changing. He needed all the information he could get. “Alright” he spoke in a whisper to himself. “Let’s see what we have here.” His arm slowly extended to the frequency tuner, but strangely he hesitated. A strange feeling traced through his body before residing in the pit of his stomach. He almost didn’t want to hear what may lie behind a simple button push. With a quick sigh he put his mind at ease and pressed the button, adjusting the frequency to that the ORDER was playing the Intercepted messages on.
Static came over the speakers at first; there was no sound that came to him but a slight crackle and a buzzing noise from interference. Yet soon enough sound exploded forth, filling Nathaniel’s mech as well as many others who listened at that moment. A sudden blast lasgun fire echoed out as a voice screamed into the radio “Contact lost: Squad nine!” the radio cut out with a sharp electrical noise as another voice came through “726 is down!” a thunderous boom followed his voice as an explosion sounded nearby. A sudden cry of pain came over the radio as another soldier pleaded for reinforcements on the right flank. Voices cluttered the air waves as many were cut down and their radios stopped receiving; screams of the dying filled every moment before a voice came through. “I’m hit! Losing Containment…Rea-” a high pitched screech cut off his voice and sent a cold chill down Nathaniel’s spine. Someone’s reactor core on their mech just went critical. “I don’t know how long we can last sir” a pain filled voice breathed into the frequency as a lasgun echoed in the background. “They’re everywhere!”
Nathaniel smashed the button on the radio and turned it off. He couldn’t stand to listen any longer. He knew well the battle was going against the Solicians. His eyes slowly moved to the picture of his daughter as he reached out, a single finger moving over her face. “I guess…I won’t be taking you on that trip after all.” He sighed sadly. A tear began to form in his eye as a voice sounded loudly in his mech. “Prepare to drop. Activate mechs… The Emperor protects…” The soldier’s eyes closed slowly as the tear escaped, running down his cheek. He weakly flipped the switch and all systems came online. “And may you’re mother protect you.” he spoke softly as he looked upon the picture of his daughter. A red light began to flash on the side panel, it was time. Nathaniel’s heart slowly began to beat faster as his hands rested on the controls; the tear upon his cheek fell from his face as he guided his mech into the drop pod.
5 kilometers south of Solace
01:55 hours, First encounter +8
The creatures charged again as a wave of purple energy shot forth from the human lines to meet them. Their hides cracking and breaking under the fire as blood spilled into the air, another orchestra of their deep screams calling out into the sky. Yet this time they did not stop their charge. Their red eyes glowing with their growing hate, their teeth covered in a thin layer of red from the kills they had already made. It was time to end the battle. The already overheating lasguns of the Solicians now refused to fire. Their eyes became wide with their fear as the creatures charged ever closer. Yet one by one a smile came across their faces. For just as the creatures were about to fall upon them, out from behind the Solicians came charging the berserkers; led by their Odin mechs.
The weapons of the berserker mechs opened fire into the creatures, ripping into their frontal charge and spraying their life force about as the counter attack burst from all around them. The berserkers holding high their poweraxes and driving them home. The already exhausted Solicians rose and drew their knives, charging in behind the berserkers. Yet even so these new creatures were a breed apart from the old. As the rallying forces of Humanity charged forward, they were met with heavy resistance. Countless creatures wre hemmed down by the close quarter skills of the berserkers, yet even so, against such odds even the best fall. Claws found their home in the chest cavities of many as they tried to hold back the time. Poweraxes dropped from hands and their light faded as their masters passed.
Toradir swung his axe around as hard as he could, breaking through the thick hide of a creature and sending it to the ground. He jerked his axe from its torn flesh as a trail of blood followed his axe’s movement. He turned around in place, bringing his axe around and slicing through many creatures as he created a three hundred and sixty degree range of attack, yet for all his efforts the berserker felt himself tiring. A berserker nearest to him slammed an axe through a creature’s chest, yet even as he did so a limb soared through the air toward him. As the berserker turned a hand of sharpened fingers sliced through his neck, releasing the scarlet liquid within him. Toradir turned just in time to see a creature driving its arm through his comrade.
Anger filled his face as he forsook his exhaustion; he slowly raised his power axe as its blade glowed brightly. Yet even before he could take the first step to charge he felt a sharp pain jab its way through him. The pain took to his veins as he screamed in agony. As he looked down his eyes caught sight of a jagged, scythe-like piece of rusted metal sticking through him; covered in blood that now made its way down his body. Slowly the blade withdrew as he heard a voice close to his ear. It was so full of hate and rage, like he’d never heard before.
“You’re turn to die” the words seethed through mashed teeth as Uriel Took his weapon from the berserkers body and let him fall to the earth. He smiled as he saw his legions advancing. Soon it’d all be his. He’d repay the suffering done to him ten fold, he and his brothers would make Humanity pay for their sins! Yet suddenly the creature attack slowed as a strange sound filled the air. It had gone unnoticed until it was practically upon them due to the battle. Their eyes looked to the heavens and to their horror they saw them coming. More black dots than they could count filled the air; it was the ORDER.
The drop pods came screaming through the atmosphere and smashed into the earth, causing impact craters wherever they hit. Countless pods hit all along the battleground, their smooth metal surfaces still steaming from the heat of re-entry. The creatures smiled sickly, they knew what to expect thanks to their brothers at Arcadia. Or at least, so they thought.
One by one the ramps came down, and to their shock what stepped forward were not members of the Deathwing or an infantry force, but mechs twice as tall as they. Their arms and shoulders covered with weapons and their armor appearing thicker than the mightiest rocks. Nathaniel surveyed the battlefield; it was as if time had stopped with their arrival. Yet that feeling did not last long; the creatures in a fit of rage threw themselves upon the ORDER mechs, yet they only received the full force of the guns of the ORDER as they opened up. Countless streams of energy and projectiles fired all at once at the creatures, ripping their bodies into pieces. However Uriel would not have defeat, he gripped his scythe and charged at the mechs even through they towered over him. His so called brothers rallied behind him, their screams of death filling the air as one by one they were killed following his charge. The bloodied berserkers and Solicians watched as the creatures threw themselves without thought against these mechs. They were ready to die to serve their one and only Lord.
Uriel brought his scythe up as he charged as hard as he could toward the closest mech, piloted by Nathaniel. His anger consumed him as he was ready to rip it apart with his now ungodly strength. Nathaniel was in a state of panic, he had to stop him. He pointed his weapons at him and got a lock, the screen flashed with the words “Target Acquired” and no sooner did he read that then he fire. A beam of blue energy streaked from his mech’s cannon and impacted the earth just in front of Uriel, throwing a veil of dust around the fallen guardian.
“Did I get him!?” Nathaniel asked out loud, a silence befell him and his mech as he listened for a moment and watched the monitor that displayed what was in front of him. All he saw was dust. That changed as suddenly out from the cloud of dirt came flying an object, thrown with such speed and force he had not the time to react. Nathaniel’s eyes opened wide as he watched a scythe slice through the center of his mech and into his cockpit, stopping only inches from his face. Fear took him fully as His systems failed and power began to drain from the controls. His hands moved to activate the auxiliary systems when a huge crash took his mech. Something just had slammed into the legs of his fighting machine and there was not a thing he could do. The mech could not withstand the force without main power and tipped back, falling like a tower and crashing into the ground. Nathaniel’s body was thrown about in the cockpit and his head smashed into a consol, his blood exited from a cut on his forehead and a little smeared on the picture of his daughter.
Nathaniel’s vision blurred as he looked over to a switch he never though he’d use in his life time. Under a plastic cover a red button labeled “self destruct” sat humbly. He reached out to it weakly as he heard footsteps upon the hull of his mech. He could hardly breath his fear was so thick, he knew who it was; he had to reach the button! He forced his battered body to react as the scythe was withdrawn and a pair of hands grasped onto the sliced metal.
Uriel grinned As he grunted, calling to him all his might and ripping the cockpit open. Tearing the metal with ease thanks to his strength. Yet as he did he could not believe what he saw; he swallowed hard as his eyes looked upon the ORDER soldier within whos finger was on the self destruct button and ready to push it. It was as if all his anger faded and became forgotten, being replaced by the highest level of fear a man can know. The fear of Death.
Nathaniel’s eyes looked up to the picture of his daughter one last time as Uriel in desperation clenched a fist and threw a punch toward him. Nathaniel closed his eyes tightly as he pushed the button. In an instant the mech induced a core breach on the mech’s nuclear reactor; and at that instant all sound was sucked from the world. Time itself stood still for a one thousandth of a second before a ball of fire erupted from the downed mech, consuming all in its path.
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*salute* brave men of the battle I salute thee...
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IC:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Toradir (where did you get the name?), thy axe shall be remembered and revered until the Fenris Wolf consumes all at Ragnarok.
Until we meet again in the halls of Odin I shall shed a tear on this day.
OOC:
Your story has picked up an emotional quality not unlike the best of stories.
This is a trait of good story writers; the ability to let go of your favourite characters.
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The emotional part of Nathaniel was really well written and I like it![]()
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From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
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Nah, just playin mate.
Take your time on the story, it's great, going just great. Was just re-reading the past few parts, tears coming to my eyes. *Wipes them away* so emotional.
keep working hard, but take your time to make it the best!
Cheers - TheSilverKnight
part xxiv
Third wave
5 kilometers south of Solace
05:43 hours, first encounter +8
The dark night sky slowly began to change. A light on the eastern horizon appeared sending waves of blue and green echoing outwards like a ripple on a calm pond. Sunrise was at last approaching. Slowly in the distance, birds could be heard chirping for the first time in days. Yet even their songs fell upon a deaf audience. As the bright light of the world appeared over the brown earth, revealed was the carnage that had befallen humanity. Bodies lay mingled together, their life force falling from open wounds. Creature and human alike had fallen side by side; in many places knives still grasped tightly by soldiers who would not let go of their hate. However it was not over.
A sudden cry silenced the earth and summoned to it all ears; a deep ominous groan that made the earth nearly quake. As it ended, the same sound was repeated, not once or twice, but many times over. Uriel’s creatures were gone; the true creature threat was content to reveal itself. Like a shadow overcoming a fading candle they appeared on the southern horizon; four creatures that fit the description of the Lord of All at Solace led them. Yet this time their hides were red, shinning in the emerging sunlight their teeth dripped with saliva in anticipation of battle. And behind them were creatures of all kinds that had so far revealed themselves. United in their bloodlust and hatred at last they quickened their pace, eager for the kills that lay ahead. Their number was legion, and they would stop for nothing.
Lucius lowered his binoculars and took a deep breath. The scent of blood was all around him and suddenly he coughed violently, though he couldn’t escape it. The smell fluttered around him as he drew his senses to him and looked at the on coming creatures. His peaceful blue eyes did much to hide the turmoil in his soul, “Why?” he spoke softly, his voice disappearing into a gentle breeze and becoming audible only to him. “Why do they keep coming?” He closed his eyes for a moment to hide the fate that was coming screaming toward him; yet what he saw was worse. The mounds of dead bodies, their blood running like rivers and their eyes still open; frozen in a moment of pure anguish. His eyes shot open quickly enough, yet when he did so, he saw the same thing. It was hard to tell if one was truly alive, or already in hell.
“General.” a voice suddenly broke his concentration, if it could be called that. He turned to see his wounded captain. The man’s arm was in a sling and blood was a hallmark on his uniform. Yet there was no sorrow in his eyes, just pain. The images that had passed into his mind were now his forever, and he wished it different. “New orders sir.” Finally the order had come, the order to withdraw north had come in. yet now, it was too late. The coming tide of enemies would not stop to allow the humans to pack up and leave. They were trapped.
Lucius let his exhaustion overcome him at last and he nearly collapsed to a sitting position on the ground. His limbs were so tired, by the gods they felt like they could fall off at any moment. “Sir?” the voice of his captain bounced off the surface of his thoughts, going unheeded. He closed his eyes again, hoping to not see the images of death again. It was as if a veil had covered the memories, for all he saw was darkness. Sweet, forgiving darkness; how he loved the sight after the horror he’d seen. Berserkers slicing their way through the creatures even as the Solicians fell around them. Mechs wading into waves of foes, only to be overcome and their pilots killed. Somehow without his knowledge the images had returned; yet Lucius couldn’t help but smile. The human mind was surely an frightening organ. “Sir?” the voice came again, this time he heard it.
“How many survived the attack?” Lucius asked wearily. His pride was stripped from him, and all he could feel was envy for the fallen. Envy that they were released from the memories while he still suffered them. The captain went about listing to the best of his knowledge how many men still remained; and as the weary general calculated everything it all seemed like a low number. In fact, less than ten percent truly lived.
“And sir.” the captain said as he bit his lip, feeling a sharp pain in his arm. “The berserkers were wiped out.” The information was no surprise, and in fact was already known to Lucius. After the creatures overran the second trench line the remaining berserkers put up a stout defense, allowing the Solicians to fall back to a third line. Yet the berserkers themselves were overrun. One could still find a ring of their bodies lying halfway between the second trench and the third; their hands still holding their poweraxes tightly.
A deep growl was head as Lucius looked at the horizon, the creatures were drawing ever closer. He knew what had to be done as he slowly stood, his strength was all but gone yet somehow he found the will to stand again. He looked to his captain, and without a word the message was conveyed. The general’s second in command nodded in understanding, retreat wasn’t an option. “Take up defensive positions!” he cried loudly, switching on his radio he said the same thing again.
The surviving Solicians moved as fast as their weary bodies could take them to the blood soaked trenches. With deep sighs they entered them and starred out on the advancing creatures. Yet their bodies were exhausted, they could hardly lift their lasrifles. A thousand more cries of varying decimal rose up all at once; but the humans did not even try to fight. Their bodies were so exhausted, and their minds were already filled with more horrid images than one should ever know. One by one their strength failed them, and they waited for death.
Closer and closer the creatures got yet not a shot was fired toward them. None had the strength or will to fight anymore. The noise of the thousands of limbs rose ever higher as again voices of terrible design echoed ahead of their makers; and to meet them came no rifle shot, no shout or obscene curse. Only men whose will and minds have been sapped of their strength remained. Lucius watched as the red creatures drew ever closer, he could hear a voice in his mind telling him to just let them take him. Let death take these horrid memories away.
Yet when another round of voices cried loudly, he saw them again. The vision of all the dead men that had fallen fighting for him and in the name of Solicous flashed before his eyes. They had fought hand to hand; throwing aside their weapons of technology and charging in to take a toll of revenge for all the innocents had been killed. They had not given up. Even when all around them was crumbling they stood their ground; their hatred for their enemy far outweighing their fear of death. The general could feel his heart slowly being set alight with his anger. How could he let himself even consider giving up!? “No” he said slowly, throwing back his weary shoulders and looking into the red wave of enemies. “I may die, but I shall never be broken!”
Lucius drew his knife and held it high; when he did so a strange blue light took to it. He smiled as he gripped it tightly. Drawing a deep breath his eyes slowly closed, and then he charged. He ran as hard as he could toward his enemy; his men were stunned when he leaped their lines with his powerknife in the air. It was as if he didn’t care anymore. So long as his enemy was killed; the price no longer mattered. His men looked upon the dead, and much the same came over them. So many had died, could they truly just give up now? They drew every ounce of strength in their tired bodies and charged forward. One last time they raised their lasrifles for their gods, their king, and their country.
A sudden explosion rocked the mass of charging creatures as an F-24 Dragon thundered overhead. The abominations stopped in their tracks as the sun rose fully. Light quickly flooded into the sky; and there coming toward them over the northern horizon were more bombers and planes than they could count. The ORDER and the Berserkers had sent everything they had to wipe them out, and even the creatures knew it was enough. As their eyes came down they saw coming toward them the remaining human fighters of the battle. Their lasrifles suddenly opened fire and a number of creatures were overcome in clouds of green mist. Without care the creatures charged forward; their end was in sight but they would take all the humans they could with them.
Lucius cried out loudly as he brought down his knife into the skull of a creature; at the same moment the bombers passed overhead and the bombs came whistling down. The creatures cried in anger as their doom came hurdling toward them. The remaining humans cut into the front rank of the creatures, determined to fight to the end. The bombs hit, and in a moment the battlefield was cleansed in a baptism of fire.
The battle for Solace had finally ended.
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ok...it's 5 am...i'm so tired...so...so tired...
thanks for commenting guys, for a while I was worried everyone had stopped reading.
@Sigurd: I got the name from one of the files you sent me to help me remember the backstory. I hope you do not mind but the list of names I use for ORDER and Solicians didn't sound right for a Berserker. But i'm really glad you enjoyed it. again![]()
@Shadow: I'm glad you like it. I thought I needed to add something for the Humans. they were coming off as bland and faceless so i added the emotional bits, glad I'm not the only one who thought it was a good idea.
@TheSilverKnight: ...wanker? bah!told you i'd get it done and i did...*mumbles* yeh smartass
j/k mate.
Last edited by Monk; 06-16-2005 at 10:16.
No one reading... anymore... ???
Monk, I eagerly await any and all new chapters to this very good saga. But it looks like it has ended. Not too shabby at all.
Have a tankard and a good rest on me, mate.![]()
wish i could enjoy that, but it's not over yet.Originally Posted by Alexander the Pretty Good
[gandalf voice] the battle for Solace has ended, the battle for Solicous, has just begun...[/gandalf voice]
Last edited by Monk; 06-16-2005 at 22:30.
Holy crap! It isn't over!
Cool. I was worried you would just kinda end it there.
But you can still have a tankard, in between writing new chapters.
[Gollum voice]My precious story... my precious...[/Gollum voice]
Glad to know that it does stop here![]()
From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
part xxv
Stand
Ruins of Solace
Ruins of Industrial spire.
09:50 hours, first encounter +14
Aradiel quickly threw down the overheating energy pack on his lasrifle and slammed into its place another. A smooth sound emitted from the gun as the compressed energy within traversed into the machine; the ammo figure came up displayed in white text. He was ready. Yet as he looked around him all lights faded. The world seemed to disappear from his vision as a shade covered all he looked upon. His breathing heightened as he could feel fear and urgency creeping up his spine. He could still see a limited distance; and if the gods would help him his enemy would not take him again. Suddenly a scream came from the darkness; it started as a hiss, slowly churning its way around his head before rising in a shrill pitch that made his eyes want to water. He pointed his lasrifle directly to where he though the sound came; yet at that moment all went quiet. Aradiel’s eyes darted here and there, searching for movement; however to his misfortune the shadow was all consuming.
Another scream rose up, and then another, and then to his disbelief another! They were all around him. He could hear their twisted limbs clunking on the metal floor, moving in circles around him. They were toying with him. A creature darted into the light for a split second, the soldier’s eyes widened as he turned and fired quickly. Yet he was too slow. The creature seemed to meld back into the darkness disappearing, his shot missing amazingly. The soldier swallowed hard. This was it, he knew their strike was coming and he could do nothing to stop it. Suddenly from the shadows they all burst at once, their eyes growing like the fires of sunset. Aradiel mashed his teeth, anger overpowering his fear as he raised his lasrifle, he pull the trigger just as one of their arms thrust forward. A flash of darkness suddenly took his eyes and the sounds faded away.
Aradiel awoke screaming, he sat up in hasting looking around him; his eyes wide with fear and his breathing heavy. The soldier scanned the room; the solemn beep of the heart monitor beside him was the only noise. No dark hall did he see, no creatures, just the wounded of his unit lying around him in silent. Aradiel smiled weakly, he was safe for the moment. Now he remembered; he’d been wounded in the battle for Solace. Wait, his wounds? Aradiel threw back the light sheet covering him, digging under a torn piece of armor to see his ribs bandaged heavily, a red stain of blood in their center. Well, he was alive at least. He couldn’t help but give a soft laugh as he let himself lay back upon the worn cot. Drawing to him a deep breath he let his eyes closed. For some reason his muscles felt very tired.
Yet before sleep could take him, voices from the next room slipped under the door and found their way into his mind. The soldier’s eyes opened as he couldn’t help but listen. The beeping of the heart monitor a subtle distraction, but even despite it he heard them. “Look” said a hardened voice, the kind only carried by one whose life is changed by war.
“I sympathize with the ORDER’s…‘Request’. But I will not authorize such force.” Aradiel heard footsteps trace across the room before another voice made itself known. It was deep and menacing; it reminded him of a berserker he had once met.
“I agree.” said the second voice, “We have no way of knowing how they would react to a Nuclear attack. We might make them even stronger.” Quickly, a third voice spoke just as he finished eager to prove him wrong.
“Be reasonable! You saw what happened here six days ago!” it pleaded with the others. “We must use this opportunity to destroy the creatures, while they are still weak!”
Six days? By the gods thought Aradiel; the last memory he held to him was trying to hold back a wave of charging creatures when darkness overcame him. What had knocked him unconscious he did not know, but perhaps now that did not matter.
“Do what you wish.” The third voice said finally. “I still can’t understand why you’re staying. This city has been destroyed.”
“Time” the second answered, walking across the room and pressing his hands on a table, Aradiel heard the slight creaking in the wood from his spot on the floor. “The Solicians are evacuating their civilians to the north; they need a few more days to get away.”
“Right.” the first continued, letting out a weary sigh. “Even if the creatures don’t attack, we need to hold here just in case.”
“I suppose we all have our orders then.” The third responded to their statements, tired of speaking with them and not caring to stay and die. “Remaining mech units under my command are pulling out. We’ve got to regroup…” there came a long pause between the three voices, Aradiel was about to stop listening when the words “May the Emperor protect you.” shot from the silence suddenly. Silence came after it before the second voice answered him smugly.
“I’ve got all the protection I need in my axe” the first and seconded gave slight laughs at this. Though the third didn’t find it funny in the least bit, sneered at thim and then turned, opening the door and walking out. Aradiel yawned as he tried to listen some more but his tiredness was getting the better of him. Even as he tried to stay away he felt his eyes slowly closing. Before he even realized it he had been taken by sleep.
City Sector 2
Outlying CP for Ruins
18:53 hours
Octavius sighed as he surveyed the tumbled and ruined buildings lining the street. He and his squad mate had even set up a Command post in the ruins of one such building. The brick and mortar crumbled into dirt, steel twisted into shapes indescribable; his eyes took all the images in. The same images his mind had a hard time processing. It was truly amazing to see the city like this, thrown down and in ruins, the same city that had been called a candle in a sea of darkness was now no better than The Old City. As Octavius’ eyes searched the broken skyline of his home his squad mate sat upon a pile of ruble. The soldier let out a sigh and looked to Octavius. “No sign of ‘em, call it in.”
Octavius looked at him and shouldered his lasrifle, he walked over to the radio lying upon what used to be a windowsill and hit the send button. “This is CP zero-two, no sign of them” he spoke plainly; soon a voice came in response, a slight static in the background. “Roger that zero-two. Your next report is in 30 minutes, out.” The com link cut and the radio was perfectly silent. Everything seemed just fine; maybe the creatures were wiped out after all.
A gentle breeze picked up as Octavius sat down, resting his tired legs and his troubled mind. Yet as he took his seat, a strange noise could be heard drifting on the wind. There, weaving in and out of the sound of the wind there was a voice. As soft as a whisper but strangely alien, Octavius lifted his head as he heard it. The wind picked up yet the voice remained constant, neither rising nor being overshadowed. A chill creped up his spine as a cruel realization dawned on him. He’d heard that voice before…
“You hear that?” he said looking upon his comrade, and as their eyes met Octavius knew he was not alone in believing it similar. Yet even words escaped Octavius’ lips, a deep, menacing rumble overcame all other sound. The soldiers’ eyes darted about as they grabbed their lasrifles, putting them at the ready. They knew that sound, and as that fact appeared in their minds they felt fear crawl along the surfaces of their skin. Moving easily into their hearts and making a home for itself. The creatures were back.
“Call Command” Octavius said silently as he looked around himself, searching for his enemy. His squad mate nodded slowly and walked to the radio. His finger pressed down upon the button and a link up was established. However at that moment a dark object passed before him. Octavius turned in surprise as he pointed his rifle at his fellow soldier. “Pluvius?” he spoke hesitantly, the soldier didn’t move.
A scream filled the air as suddenly his squad mate fell to the ground, his head slipping from his body and falling to the ground rolling. Now before Octavius was a creature, of the same ilk raised by Uriel, it stood with saliva dripping from its teeth and blood flowing from its sharp claws and its eyes redder than the sky. The radio came screaming to life as a voice inquired “Zero-two, your transmission cut out, something wrong?” Octavius could not believe his eyes; his eyes were wide as he stood with his lasrifle ready to fire. However he could feel his muscles paralyzed by fear. He couldn’t even bring himself to pull the trigger. The voice on the radio spoke again, “Zero-two? Everything alright?” The creature stepped forward as a loud explosion overcame the silence the wind, one could hear stone being tossed about as loud snarls echoed in the city. They were coming.
Octavius swallowed hard and in that instant the creature charge, letting out a low roar and brandishing his claws. The soldier shouted in fear as he pulled the trigger in desperation, he watched his energy beam seem to absorb into the hide of the creature, not even cutting into it. The creature showed a sick smile as it plunged its claw deep into the defender of humanity, letting his blood trickle down over his now shredded armor. Octavius cried in anguish as he felt the creature slam another hand through his chest, and using its strength it ripped the man into pieces.
The radio was still on; even as his life force sprayed upon it a voice came through the speaker. “Zero-two respond!”
Ruins of Industrial spire
19:03 hours
The door slid open with a silent hiss as the captain stepped through, his face marked with the scars of battle and in his hand he held a lasrifle. His armor was slightly torn and around his neck, on a small necklace sat a piece of creature hide; it appeared to have energy burns on it. Taking a step forward the door behind him shut. Sounds assaulted him as he walked forward and listened, there were many soldiers sitting around control consoles, radio transmissions bursting from all of them and making it all hard to hear coming from so many directions. He looked around him as a sergeant walked up to him.
“Sir! We’ve got…” the man could not finish before the captain opened his mouth and spoke.
“Creatures?” the captain asked plainly, as if knowing the answer before hand. His silver lined green eyes settled on the sergeant, they were strange in both their color and their calmness. The horrors this man must have seen were numerous as the scars attested, and yet he spoke so easily. He stepped forward and placed his lasrifle on a line of controls. The numerous transmissions rising in varying decimal before a clear call to the captain came through.
“Command HQ! This is zero one!” it shouted over the com system, the sound of screeching followed by lasgun fire. “We can’t hold on! Retr…” suddenly the signal cut out wit ha sharp noise. The Captain sighed as he pressed a button. The radio came to life as his voice went over the waves. “This is HQ to all units…” he took a deep breath, pushing aside a sense of hesitation “fall back, I say again, fall back.” Yet there was silence, no acknowledgement came, it was unknown it anyone outside the now broken spire still lived.
ruins of Industrial spire
First floor
19:05 hours
A long corridor separated the main double doors, now reinforced with whatever could be found to keep them shut; from the winding stair case that led to the upper levels of command. Only four floors remained in what was once a high tower that some said touched the heavens themselves. The stairwell was the only way, the elevator behind disabled and other ways blocked by debris. Soldiers rushed down the stairs and as they reached the door to the corridor threw up their weapons, their eyes fixed upon the doors. However just as the troops reached their destination a loud bang echoed down the hall; the doors rocked back and forth slightly. The soldiers shifted in place as they felt fear churning inside them. Another crash sent the doors reeling, a large dent appearing in the metal surface; it wouldn’t withstand another. Yet just as the soldiers were about to run in terror, a men stepped from their midst.
He wore no armor at all, yet instead he had adorned all over his body, hanging from him, trophies. Eyes, teeth, pieces of ripped creature flesh. He had so many it looked as if he could assemble his own from the spare parts! The Solicians looked upon him in awe, who was this man? A third and final crash hit the door; breaking the hinges and sending the door flying inward, and from the opening they came. The creatures had finally renewed their attack on Solace. The soldiers each took a step back, unsure of what to do. But the man didn’t move. A soldier shouted “Hey! Get out of there man!” but he didn’t move. One by one he began to shed his many trophies until all he wore was his simple clothes, and in his hand he held a large axe; the blade of which glowed red like the fires that consumed Abbadon. The soldiers knew who he was at once, the axe was proof enough; he was a berserker.
The lead creature, one who was bigger than the rest but appeared of the same kind, stepped forward to him. Even its twisted mind knew what this man wanted, it brandished its claws and let out a low, tumbling roar that seemed to circle around the room and freeze the hearts of the soldiers. Yet the berserker just looked upon his enemy, a strange smile forming on his face. Suddenly he let out a scream and drove his axe into the floor, cutting past the tiles easily. Withdrawing his weapon and howling like a great wolf he spun around and drove his axe into the wall, slicing past the already weakened building and leaving a deep cut. “Come on!” he screamed as the creature looked upon him.
His enemy was quick to fulfill his request and charge him, its claws out to the side ready to attack from both sides. It let out a raging snarl as it got into range and brought down its fingers attempting to skewer the berserker, yet to his surprise all he hit was air. The Berserker leaped back slightly, dodging the strike and then bringing his axe along the ground he cut into him, slicing open its chest and letting loose his life force. Its body fell upon the ground, life still hanging by a thread. The Berserker cried in pure anger as he swung his axe around and slammed it into the creature’s neck. Ending his enemy’s life easily he looked upon the other creatures whose eyes were full of anger, he could tell they would charge at any moment.
The Berserker turned and looked at the soldiers “Get out of here!” he shouted loudly, his voice commanding and frightening to behold. “I can hold here, your captain needs you on the fourth floor!” Without another word, he charged forward into the fray, the soldiers unable to believe what they saw him do. All alone and against all odds he cut into the creatures; his axe cutting a path and painting the alls anew. The soldiers knew there was no retreat, if they were to die then on what floor did it matter?
They drew their power knives. Slowly a blue light entered each of them as they discarded their lasrifles. They had to hold out as long as they could, their families were counting on them. They shouted as loud as they could and fell upon their hated foe.
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took me a while, been busy with social stuff. but hey, at least i didn't take a month right?![]()
Get back to work, lazybones!
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Seriously, good work as always, Monk. I await further bloodsh- I mean, installments.![]()
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From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
part xxvi
Betrayal
Spire Ruins
19:17 hours, first encounter +14
Lionus heaved a grenade down the stairwell with all his might, yet it felt like he had thrown his limb along with it. The small ball of death soared through the air and bounced off a wall, making a cold and metallic noise as it then tumbled toward its own destruction. The soldier could hear his enemy coming up even as his grenade fell to them; the slow, agonizing pounding of their limbs upon the stairs seemed to cause his head to pound slightly. Whispers coming from their hideous mouths and seeping into his mind, it only made the hatred in his heart burn hotter. Finally, after what seemed an eternity of waiting, they appeared. A creature of about his height turned the corner, blood falling from his claws and staining his hide. It bore many cuts and gashes which now dripped its life force upon the ground, as well as holding a red hue from the humans it had dispatched. Yet there was not one single energy burn, despite the heavy gunfire Lionus had heard from below.
The creature let out a low snarl as it opened its mouth, a large tongue dangled between its sharp teeth as it set its eyes to Lionus, the prospect of a fresh kill now in its near future. Yes this would be fun. However a strange beeping then started to draw the creature’s attention, as even more of its kind began to climb the stairs; it looked about trying to trace the annoyance. Suddenly it saw the grenade sitting humbly by its left leg. It looked back at Lionus and snarled in anger, but to its surprise the soldier was nowhere to be seen. It roared loudly just as the grenade exploded; a wave of fire shooting from the small device and flowing down the stair way, burning everything in its path.
Lionus took a deep breath as the ruins of the structure rocked; he looked down the stairs as he heard screams of agony being raised before falling silent. A smirk appeared upon his lips as he knew what happened. Maybe next time they’d think twice before attacking up the stairs. His eyes settled on a soft cloud of smoke that now resided where he had stood; a feeling of satisfaction came over him, one that seemed to make all the loss he had felt worthwhile. Lionus drew to him a deep breathe and let out a sigh as he stood at the ready; waiting for the creatures to reappear. The cool metal surface of his lasrifle seemed to deny any feeling of security it had once given him. He’d seen the creatures push forward and slaughter men even as they tried to gun them down. Something was changing, they were different somehow.
A pain filled screech sent his skin crawling; causing the soldier to raise his gun in the direction of the stairs. “Show yourselves…” he said in a ragged and weary voice. Gripping his rifle tightly his shifted his weight, getting a better footing. A subtle and short vibration traveled through the stairs, moving into his body and causing his hands to shake. It repeated itself again, only this time the rumble was greater. Lionus could feel his heart pounding faster with every moment as his eyes opened slightly wider; again he felt it, and to it he could now hear an almost masked breathing. The sound was horrible to behold, as if someone put their hand upon their mouth and then drew breathe, over and over as the great rumbling continued. Something was drawing closer to him.
The glow of two red eyes caught Lionus’ gaze and sent a feeling of terror rushing through his veins, though he was not sure why. They seemed to appear out of nowhere from the cloud of smoke and refused to move; as if studying him. The grey smoke began to clear and a dark silhouette slowly appeared as the creature took shape. Lionus gasped in both horror and disgust as he took a step back, he could feel his lasrifle shaking in his hands. Before him was a creature unlike any he had seen. It was clinging to the stairs, its arms thin yet holding their own aura of power. It had two arms and upon which four fingers, each long and sharp as they clung to the stairs. It had a long, thick body protected by a thick exoskeleton. If it were standing it would be twice the height as Lionus. As the human drew the courage to look upon its head, he could feel revulsion in the pit of his stomach.
The creature’s head was elongated like many of the creatures, yet where its mouth should be tentacles hung from its head. They were long and thick, moving about as if they had their own mind. And above them, red eyes that glowed with intense hate for Lionus. The soldier was frozen in place, his eyes wide as he starred upon the creature. His body was overcome with fear and yet he couldn’t find within him the wisdom to run. Sensing his hesitation, the creature sprung over the steps that separated the two enemies; too late Lionus learned its hideousness was only overcome by its strength and agility. Still gliding through the air the creature ripped into the soldier; Lionus screamed in anguish as he pulled the trigger, trying to fend off his attacker. Yet his incredible pain didn’t save him from the horror he saw, his energy beam absorbed into the creatures hide.
He fell back onto the stairs, squirming in pain and trying to get away. Yet as he grasped for the stair above him the creature drove its limb through his body; cutting his heart and lungs into pieces with one strike. Lionus could feel his body seize up, and at that instant all functions of his body failed. His life ended suddenly even as he tried to find safety. The creature withdrew its arm from his body and grinned sickly, knowing the human was all but dead despite his still open eyes. It cried loudly, letting out a shrill scream. Just at that moment numerous soldiers came rushing down the stairs; hearing the sounds of combat and ready to fight they had their weapons charged and ready to fire at a moments notice. Their eyes fell upon the strange new creature, causing them to stop dead in their tracks. It stood over their fallen comrade and even displayed his blood proudly on its hide.
Yet they did not have a chance to enact revenge; for at that moment a wave of creatures flooded toward them, appearing from around the corner of the stairs and seeming to turn into a wall of tooth, claw, and bone. The soldiers screamed in terror as they fired, only to see their shots absorb into the mass of creatures. Like a whirlwind the creatures hit them, and the soldiers were overcome and torn limb from limb. However that was not enough, the creatures could smell their victory over this pathetic human defense effort, all that remained was their command post.
Fourth Floor,
Command HQ for Solace.
The door was overcome by another crash and was visibly giving way as the captain turned to his communications officer. “Damn it!” he shouted in frustration. “I said get that transmission sent!” Already all the soldiers were lining themselves before the captain with their lasrifles pointed at the door. They were ready to make their last stand in the city of sorrow. With each crash that echoed upon the door, they couldn’t help but move in slight shock. For them it was truly like starring upon one’s fate about to be decided.
The communications officer continued to tur nobs and flip switches until finally he stopped, a look of confusion overtaking him as he looked back at the captain. “s…sir?” His voice was shaking as he looked upon his commander, his eyes overcome with terror. Yet it was not from the creatures…
“What is it?” the captain turned and looked at him, his own curiosity practically bursting from his armor.
“T..take a listen!” the com officer said frantically as he put what he was hearing on the speakers by him, quickly cranking up the volume. A field of static was overcome by voices, radio chatter of a bomb group. Talk of coordinates and the target, Solace, followed by a confirmation from their HQ. “Drop on grid 2185; Solace. Make sure the target is destroyed in the explosion”.
The captain closed his eyes and sighed, as the words “the emperor protects’ fluttered into the room, he knew his warning had been ignored. The ORDER was about to Nuke Solace. “God damned fools” he whispered to himself as he placed his hands on the cool metal surface of a control console. A final crash came on the door as a sharp talon ripped into the metal, tearing the door outward the creatures looked in. The soldiers opened fire upon them with no effect. Yet none of it mattered anymore, The sound of a rumble could be heard filling the sky as the creatures further torn the door open, finally opening a way for them to enter.
They seemed to file into the room, one by one even as the Solicians fired upon them, shouting angrily trying to push them back. Their eyes opened widely as fear overcame their souls. The captain however sighed as if a greater defeat was laid on his feet than it really was; he looked out the window at the still setting sun despite the chaos behind him. “Forgive us…my gods” he said as he closed his tired eyes. In that instant a flash overcame the creatures and caused them to scream in sudden terror, and following that flash a wall of fire consumed the ruined spire. The voices of both human and creature became lost in the earth shattering explosion that followed.
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your wish is my command...or rather, my two/three/four hours spent typing...
Last edited by Monk; 07-01-2005 at 02:26.
*eyes go wide, jaw opens*...wow...![]()
Keep going, Monk! *sits back* Keep the explosions coming as well! Those are fun!![]()
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Wow!... what a great read. Man, you should publish this...
Most people are other people.
Their thoughts are someone else's opinions,
their lives a mimicry,
their passions a quotation
NOOOO!! I read to the last update. Well, I still have music to feed my anger.
GoreBag: Oh, Prole, you're a nerd's wet dream.
See Monk? If you don't get working, discovery is gonna kill someone. Hurry up!![]()
Where are you Monk?
From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
I hate to clutter up this thread with yet another post from me without a part to the tale here; but i feel everyone deserves an update on my situation. Just so you can se I'm not dead.
My life is getting hectic, yet again!Never a dull moment around here, and i've been running from one place to the other for the last three days. Yet before it gets any crazier, i've decided to put aside my tiredness and stick this thing out. I don't want to let you guys go a month without an update like what happened before...
The end is in sight for this story. I don't want to stop writing it but the fact is the plot is coming to an end; I can't expand upon it without betraying the "plot rules" i've developed for it. Which basically means, if it goes further it will feal like its being repeated.
In *looks at watch* i'm gonna say probably 12-20 hours something will be here, an ending (i hope) enjoyable for everyone. Wagers on the ending are now being accepted. The current situation doesn't look good for humanity, one must wonder if there is a way to end the threat of the creatures... Or perhaps have i left something out? is there yet one more secret to be unvieled that will save the humans? Only time will tell (well actually three people know the ending. but they aren't going to say a word
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Last edited by Monk; 07-13-2005 at 03:44.
20 quid on Tiger Woods! That's my bet...Originally Posted by Monk
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Ok who are those threeOriginally Posted by Monk
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From this land I was made
For this land I will fall
part xxvii
Hammer of the Gods
“Ahriman’s Point”, Old Solician Outpost.
North Mountain cluster, Solicous
11:32 hours, first encounter +25
The door burst open with a violent kick; a bone shattering echo of the wood splintering waded into the thick darkness ahead like a ripple in a pond. The door flew back on its hinges as it reared from the assault; and where it once stood thrust weapons as curious eyes peered from side to side. The darkness these eyes witnessed was all consuming; as was the silence that went with it. Like a creeping beast it snaked around their ears. A silent hiss reminding them not a soul could they see; and yet anything might be waiting behind the veil of shadow. “Lights!” a coarse voice barked. In an instant flashlights were engaged and slowly the darkness fled from the shining lights of a group of soldiers. Yet they were not ready for what they saw.
Sitting in a simple wooden chair, in the exact center of the room, was a single man. His shoulders slumped over and his eyes staring down at the ground; twitching slightly every other moment. The soldiers moved into the room keeping their weapons trained upon him; their hands gripping their rifles tightly and their hearts filled with uncertainty. The man made no move despite the soldiers walking toward him, he was breathing slowly and silently, as if nothing mattered anymore. “Hey” one of the soldiers spoke softly, trying to determine who this man was. “You alright?”
Suddenly the man threw his head back, his graying hair thrashed from side to side as his eyes widened and set their gaze upon the soldiers. His breathing was heavy and sweat dripped down his brow, fear had overtaken him. The soldiers jumped back, pointing their rifles at him and keeping a close eye on him. The sudden movement he had made was not expected.
His shoulders heaved up and down as if he was short of breath, yet he appeared to have been sitting within this room, alone in the dark for quite some time. Slowly his mouth opened to speak, yet no sound came from it. As if fate had robbed him of a voice the only noise was a slight hiss from the back of his throat. “Hey!” another soldier shouted, “What are you trying to say? Speak up!” his voiced seemed to bounce from the walls and ring in their ears. Yet the mysterious man said nothing still; his deep brown eyes trembling violently, and seeming to only become filled with more fear and disbelief as the moments ticked away.
Finally, he managed a word. Deep and mangled as it was, it made perfect sense to the soldiers. “Demons” he said, struggling to keep his sanity together. The soldiers, one by one, lowered their weapons. He was of no threat if he couldn’t even manage to speak from his fear.
Sindri sighed softly as he looked at him and surveyed the room, the darkness outside their flashlight beams seemed so thick. As he drew in a deep breath of the warm, stale air he felt hesitation creep through his mind. The hesitation to think this place was not as secure as intel had indicated. If this place had fallen it would be over, Solicous was in ruins, where could they go now? Bringing Sindri’s thoughts to an end the mysterious man led out a loud scream of terror, drawing the eyes of all near him. His back straightened as his fear seemed to seep into their souls. Slowly his cry ended and he frantically tried to draw breath,; his eyes scanning around him as if searching for something. Shocking the soldiers investigating the room he spoke, this time very clear. “I saw…I saw it.” The soldiers looked at him confusedly, their minds colored with their own senses of fear and unknowing.
“Saw what?” the leader of the soldiers said, stepping forward while keeping his rifle at the ready, he nodded to his second in command who in turn took two men to guard the door. Sindri looked at his commander and then at the strange man, his eyes finally adjusting to the blanket of shadows. What exactly was this man trying to say?
“It!” the man shouted frustrated. “I saw…the end”
“What?” the leader said uncertainly. “You’re not making sense.”
“Listen to me you fool!” the man shouted, his anger pushes his fear back into his mind, an anger that he knew not from where it appeared. “I saw the end... The end of us all!”
The leader of the soldiers just gave a slight laugh; taking a deep breath and clearing his mind his gaze set upon the man. “I’m the fool? Look who’s talking crazy.” Sindri could do nothing but watch as this conversation become stranger and stranger.
“Do you not care of our fate as a race?” the mysterious man asked, his strange anger still burning brightly for all to see.
“Yes I do!” shouted the leader right back, his own impatience and anger taking the better of him. “But you’re just taking crazy nonsense. ‘I saw the end’ Just what the hell does that mean!?”
The man closed his eyes and took a deep breath, clearing the troubled anger he felt rising within his soul for this man. “Please, just listen… what have you to lose?” his voice seemed overcome with serenity, the fear and anger no longer present. Sindri walked up to his commander, he knew this man must know something. The soldier was not sure why, but something within the pit of his soul told him to hear him out.
“Please, Captain,” Sindri said, making sure to keep his voice low enough so the man could not hear. “We’ve got orders to pursue any and all leads into stopping the creatures…making he can help?” The captain eyed Sindri, a dark glare setting into him and forcing Sindri to take a step back. He’d seen that look before; and it wasn’t a good idea to be near the captain when he got it. He shifted his gaze back upon the man and nodded.
“Go on then” he said, clearly not happy about it. “Tell us what you ‘saw’.” The mysterious man nodded, his eyes looking to Sindri and nodding in a strange gesture of thank you. He could tell whatever he said convinced his leader to hear the truth.
“I saw it” he said plainly. “The end of this war. I saw the enemy’s highest creature coming here, and I saw the king of Solicous coming here.” Slowly, every ear began to turn to this man. He had a strange hint of power in his voice that couldn’t be ignored, even if he was crazy. “You came here fleeing the creatures…yes?”
The captain couldn’t help but nod; his eyes were closed in disgust that he’d even considered listening to him. The man continued without stopping, as if his answer didn’t matter. “And, all of the Survivors of Solace are with you…yes?” Again, he was answered with a nod from the captain. Yet at this the man smiled strangely, a small light appearing within his right pupil. “I saw it all. I saw the hammer of the gods falling upon this land, striking it down and turning the land to ash. And I saw one more thing.”
The captain opened his eyes, looking upon the man with skeptical eyes. He now noticed a growing light in one of his eyes, the only side of his face not illuminated by a flashlight. Turning his curiosity inward he tried not to let on that he noticed, letting this man continue. With a strange laugh the man said “I saw fields of dead, their blood running like rivers into the earth which slowly devoured their broken bodies.” He seemed to take delight in using such graphic descriptions; and a smile was growing on his face. A mucles in his cheek suddenly twitched causing him to draw back a bit when his entire face fell into shadow. That is when the captain saw it and cruel realization dawned on him. Glowing in both eyes, deep in the pupil were whit lights. His face was overtaken by fear and went as wide as the rising sun. This man, he wasn’t human at all! He was…some sort of copy.
Realizing the captain had found him out, the man let out a maniacal laugh and grinned widely; his eyes being overcome with a strange sense of anger and joy meshed into one. With a sickening thud arms burst from his torso and he leaped upon the captain, tearing and clawing flesh as it struck. The soldiers jumped back in panic, the fear all consuming as they horrible truth was setting in. They would have no idea that the nuclear blast at solace had done more harm than good, the berserkers were right. It had meshed Human and creature DNA into a terrifying new organism.
Sindri shouted loudly in anger as he fired his lasgun; a bright stream of energy shot out into the darkness and slamming into the creature, only to have nothing happen. He watched his beam sink into the strange creature’s skin, absorbing it with ease. He fired again as his heart began to race. Yet nothing! Blood was flying from side to side of the room, staining the walls as the creature ripped their captain apart. Taking its time completely confident they could not kill it.
“Clear the room!” a voice shouted from the doorway. Sindri looked to see a huge man standing with what appeared to be a model-298-S-78, or as the Solician military knew it, the chaingun. E stood ready to fire, and the warning they were given was all the soldiers needed to get out of his way. The creature looked up from its kill as blood dripped from the skin that had burst from a human shell; multiple arms with flesh hanging from them still held power beyond a human could imagine. It shrieked with delight of the thought of another kill. Yet the soldier just mashed his teeth together, his finger waving over the trigger. “Yeah?! To hell with you too!” he squeezed the trigger and what followed can only be described as a whirlwind of destruction and fire, erupting from the spinning barrels hundreds of rounds ripped through the creature in an instant. Its body was shredded to pieces by his furious onslaught, leaving behind a mist of red blood, not green.
Sindri’s eyes were wide with fear, what else could go wrong he thought. Slowly he turned his gaze over to the man with the chaingun, the barrels still spinning with a smooth hum. The man looked at, his breathing heavy as he could barely believe what he had seen/ “get to the king” he said in-between his attempts to make sense of things. “we have an attack to prepare for…” Sindri needed to other order. He drew himself to his feet; he could still feel his heart beating like a drum in his chest. Walked to the door he looked at the dead bodies; giving his captain a final salute before running off down the corridor.
Arhiman’s Point
Main corridor
19:45 hours, first encounter +26
The sun was falling behind the western horizon as a shrill cry of hatred rose up. The sharp mountain peaks around the last base of the Solicians throwing the sound around a thousand times in an echo. Then another came, and to answer it a hundred more. They came from all around the only base of the Solicians left, they were coming to finish what was started at Solace.
Sindri shifted in place as he stood at the first barricade behind the main door. The images of hours earlier still burned into his mind. He had no doubt that the images he’d witnessed, these horrors too indescribable to repeat would be his forever to ‘cherish’. The sense of battle and death, the realization of creature evolution; it was all so unreal how could any person bare it for their life? The soldier sighed, feeling a deep and lasting depression that had no lifted since the afternoon. His heard seemed to be frozen in place.
Suddenly his head was thrown up and his eyes settled on the main doors as a huge crash overtook them. The mighty metal dented easily under the assault. Sindri Readied his rifle as did the others at his defense station; however he knew they’d be no good. Slowly he began to lower it as he wondered what the point was. The creatures were so strong, their physiology so adaptive. Even if the Solicians won here, how long was it until they were wiped out? Suddenly his rifle slipped from his grasp and fell to the ground, at the same time another crash took to the door; it would fall any moment. Sindri was ready to abandon all hope; yet like a lightning flash his memory turned to the civilians. His eyes widened with guilt, they were below, defenseless. Could he really just leave them to die without lifting a finger?
Drawing a deep breath Sindri set his eyes on the door. He drew his power sword with the sound of sliding metal and watched as a blue light appeared within. If this was to be his end, then he’d spend it fighting, not cowering. Gripping the hilt of the sword tightly the light grew bright just as another crash took to the door, this time bashing it down and throwing it in. And in its place stepped a creature that was looked like a human meshed inside a creature. Its mouth had been elongated but the head was the shape of a humans. The body had been charred and thinned and the arms, the three sets of them, where tin and elongated, each seemed to hold a human quality. The soldiers opened fire but they killed nothing; the creatures entered the base slowly as if taking their time and enjoying it.
Sindri became filled with rage as he saw how they acted toward their defense. Leaping the barricade he stood out from the soldiers, and without a word to his comrades charged the creatures. He cried t the top of his lungs as he rushed into his doom. Bringing up his power sword he slashed a creature across the chest, driving his sword through and cleaving it in two. A cloud of red appeared as a fountain of blood splashed around the room and onto Sindri, the scarlet liquid just like his own. The Creatures could not believe their eyes. The nerve of this human! In rage they charged Sindri who stood his ground.
Arhiman’s Point
Vehicle hanger
19:55 hours, first encounter +26
The creatures screamed in a fit of rage as they threw themselves upon the human defenders again, leaping the line of bodies left behind from their first wave they charged with a mission to avenge their brethren. Yet the Solicians of this area were determined not to fail. Like a sturdy rock they broke the wave of creatures, their swords slashing and stabbing as their rifles were all but useless. The creatures though, whose strength was great, were undeterred. A third wave raced through the broken hanger doors and slammed into the line of humans, this time causing the defender’s line to collapse in on itself. The Solicians however would not fall back. They stood their ground even as their number thinned. Fighting like demons they made the creatures pay for every man lost. The floor became as a sea of red…
With a shrill cry a creature buried its claw into the last defender, ripping his insides out while he still live it threw the weak and dieing human to the ground. Yet even as they had won this sector a strange noise filled the air, a silent hum trickled through the metal floor and through the walls; causing a layer of confusion to fall upon the creatures. Suddenly out from the walls and floor burst automated turrets. The creatures could do nothing but stand min horrified shock as they opened fire, ripping into their flesh and slaughtering them as they stood. Soon not a single remained alive.
With a grievous smile the king of Solicous appeared out of the doorway, his face and hands covered with that of his blood and his enemy’s. The price was high but the sector had been defended, he could feel pain in his arm from using his powersword. He dropped the blade for it was broken; he watched as the light faded and ceased to shine. Yet as he turned to leave a thunderous boom took to the ground, nearly causing him to fall on the floor. It was followed by another which seemed to shake the entire facility; it was all the King could do just to stand. He turned and looked at the hanger doors just in time to see them ripped completely open, from the very top to bottom by a huge scythe-like arm. Through the cut burst a single monstrous creature. It had all the signs of being a Lord of All, yet it was greater in size than all others reported; and it had three sets of arms where the last had two. This one, had eyes; and they glowed brightly like fiery suns. The creature had a larger back body, as it if could spawn others. It was the master creature, the first created.
The king set his eyes on the creature, the automated cannons were all out of munitions and he had no weapon. The fiery red gaze of the creature was hard to look into; as if it inspired fear at a whim. Opening its mouth the creature let out a deep and tremendous roar that shook the facility and caused the king to fall back it was so great. His eyes were wide with terror as he knew he couldn’t defeat it. The king steeled himself and drew his pistol; without hesitation he fired off a number of shots at the creature; yet he watched the streams of energy be absorbed. His one and only weapon were useless. The creature let out a strong laugh as it realized its prey had no chance; yet even as it was about to close in, the door behind the king opened.
With a smooth sliding sound the door receded and there standing with a glowing red axe in hand was the Wolf-General Digre. He wore the symbol of the berserkers, and he was the last surviving of their order left in Solicous As he set eyes on the carnage before him he drew a breath and began working himself into a deep, unstoppable rage. Yet even as he did so, the king stopped him.
“No!” the king cried as he extended his hand quickly. His voice was commanding and stopped the berserker in his rage. Digre looked upon him curiously. The berserker was ready to fight, why should he not help? “This is my battle!” the king’s body was already injured yet he held out a hand, asking for the berserker’s axe. “I want to fight him. please…I just need a weapon.”
The berserker stood up straight and studied him for a moment; the creature seemed to tower above them, just waiting for someone to fight it so it could test itself at last. Digre looked upon his axe, and then the face of the king who was on the ground begging for a weapon. As their eyes met the berserker got a glimpse into his soul, a look into terrible anguish at the slaughtering of one’s people. He saw a mighty fire burning within the young man’s heart, one set by war and could only be put out by death. The warrior nodded and tossed his great axe to the king. The king caught the weapon but could not stop it from slamming, blade first, into the ground. It was far heavier than it looked. Placing two hands upon the hilt he drew the strength to stand, and at last lift his weapon.
The axe seemed to glow bright like an evening star as he took hold of it. The weapon sensing his rage and hurt seemed to become amplified in power because of it. The king held the axe ready just as the creature screamed in rage; their eyes met and the hatred they held for one another seemed to pour from their souls. Drawing upon his emotions the king found strength within himself, letting out a great cry he charged at the creature. It was time to end it once and for all.
The great creature brought one of its scythe like arms down to cut the king in two, yet the king saw it coming and jumped back just in time to miss it. Not wasting a moment he brought the axe around and down upon what looked like a weak part in the arm. The bright glowing axe ripped through the flesh and severed the arm, sending it frying to the side and slamming into a wall.
The creature howled in pain as it thrust one of its human like arms at the king. Still trying to bring the axe around the king could not move out of the way in time and felt the sharp fingers of the hand slice through his flesh. Ripping into his stomach with ease and then out the back side; he could feel blood running freely. Yet his anger had taken control of him. Despite a wave of pain that flowed through him his spirit would not cease. He brought the axe down and sliced through the arm, cutting it off and leaving it sticking in his stomach.
The great creature screamed out again, backing up slightly and giving some ground. The king took a step to charge forward but the creature thrust its head at him, attempting to rip him into pieces with its teeth. The weakened king dove out of the way just in time, but in doing so dropped the axe. He fell upon the ground with a loud grunt of pain. His adrenaline dropping into nothingness and the pain he felt becoming all-consuming. The axe sat humbly a few away and slowly lost its glow; the creature could sense victory and cried a loud war cry, lunging at the fallen king.
The King could hear the creature coming, and summoning the last vintages of his strength he drew a knife he had hidden and slammed it into the eye of the creature; just as it was about to close its jaws upon him. Too shocked to simply finish the king off, the creature reared back; it could feel the cold steel dug in deeply. The king knew it was now or never, he rose to his feet and grabbed the axe. With single-minded survival on mid he readied himself as the creature lunged again. Just as it got close the King swung the axe, and buried the powerful weapon into the side of the creature’s skull. The great weapon punched deep into the skin; feeding on the king’s emotion and growing in power it didn’t stop until it was rending the creature’s brain. Scarlet blood sprayed from the cut as the creature let out a ear piercing screech. It lifted up and then back onto its back. Life draining from it.
The King fell onto his back at the same time, the axe falling from his grasp and his eyes drained of strength. He felt the hard impact of the ground and the discomfort of the metal. Yet somehow that didn’t mind now. A wave of pain ripped through his chest as he could feel his lungs starting to fail. Closing his eyes the king saw nothing but darkness, and for once, that wasn’t so bad…
Epilogue
The Solicians stand at Arhiman’s Point signaled the end of the Kingdom of Solicous. It’s people were scattered and disoriented at the loss of their king, and before any could make a difference the Creatures easily mopped up the pockets of resistance. The only survivors of the great legacy that was the once Kingdom were the civilians that survived at Arhiman. They were later rescued by ORDER and berserker task forces.
The war did not end there sadly, with Solicous in ruins the creatures wanted more. They expanded and slaughtered all in their way. Launching their invasion on Berserker Dominion and the ORDER; they succeeded in claiming vast tracks of the earth for their own. Yet the combined might of Humanity was enough to stop them, and soon the war bogged down into a bloody stalemate. Day by day the creatures assaulted the last bastions of human civilization, and time after time they failed. Seeing no winner, the creatures expanded in the other directions, and soon all the earth became there’s…all but the Berserker Dominion and the ORDER.
Both became fortress nations. Using their technology to stay one step ahead of the monstrous creatures, the humans were able to survive. For six long millennia, earth was overcome with this war, until one day…it stopped. Scout parties were sent out and found fields of dead creatures. Upon further examination it was found they died from starvation; they had exhausted all food sources on the earth. Because they had a telepathic link with one another, could not bring themselves to cannibalize their own kind. Therefore by simple way of outlasting their enemy, humanity won the war; but all they retained was a broken planet.
The ORDER used its colonies on mars and phobos to begin crafting new foods, and the berserkers began to gather food from the one place untouched by the creatures; the ocean.
Yet the scar of the horrible war would be felt foever; for the final total of the dead: six hundred billion…
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:Credits:
-.Org members who took part in RP-
Monk - The Kingdom of Solicous
Sigurd Fafnesbane - The Dominion of BerserkerJarls
Dramicus - The Imperium of the Knightly ORDER
-Brief backstory of cultures and militaries-
Solicous - Warhammer 40k Imperial Guard with a mix of the mechwarrior universe. Tribal people who united under the their first Emperor and became a nation. After Second Solician Civil War, a people who find comfort in their sorrow (hence the name of their capitol city). A people who dislike war.
Berserkers - Modern day humans decended from a highly advanced race of Aliens that crash landed in the north. Technology highly advanced due to their uncovering of their past the the find of a downed spaceship in the arctic. A warrior people where honour is very important. Allies of Solicous, founder of the "DEFENSE" alliance. Military based loosely on Battlemech universe with a mix of modern and ancient weapons. (i took the liberty here mate, i hope you don't mind. and I hope i captured the essense of the berserkers)
Imperium - based on the space marine armies of Warhammer 40k with some of the battletech universe. A mysterious and secretive people living under a dictatorship not afraid to kill to keep secrets. Founder of the "ORDER", a military alliance that fell apart just before Imperial Civil war. ORDER remained name of Imperium's millitary and was feared in Solicous.
Creatures - Their concept changed a bit from the original RP, but their mentality has remained the same. They are a mix between "Aliens", the "Tyranids" from Warhammer 40k, and the organism from "John Carpenter's 'The Thing'".
-Story-
Original concept: Monk
Main Plotline: Monk, Dramicus, Sigurd Fafnesbane
Characters: Monk, names used from varius sources (any i could find really :P)
Epilogue: Dramicus
Backstory: Sigurd Fafnesbane
-Special thanks-
Sigurd Fafnesbane - For sending me most of the Information I needed about Nationstates. As well as a set of links where i could find the images needed to describe his Mechs and military.
Dramicus - For coming up with an ending that rounded out everything.
Nationstates - For allowing such a great plot to be expressed by a few people in such a way.
And A big thanks to everyone who read this and gave their comments. I hope you enjoyed reading this story as much as I did writing it. Until next time, see you around the Mead Hall! ~:D
Last edited by Monk; 07-28-2005 at 15:55.
Too bad Monk you're finishing it.
Oh well, do you plan any new stories?!![]()
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
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