Kingdom of Love

[The Stranger]

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first my apologizes for misposting this thread but since i cant post anywhere else, i request this to be moved to the frontroom

From Alexander of Macedon
Your voice is the sweet sing of a meadowlark outside;
Your skin is soft like the softest Chinese silk;
Everything I do is with you in my thoughts;
I’ve liked you from the moment I first saw you
and now, I must let you know
I love you

I looked into your eyes
with a glance unworldly;
I touched your skin
softer then the best silk;
I kissed your sweet lips
sweeter then a bee’s honey,
and when our bodies melted,
I was in heaven

You’re like autumn when the wind blows through;
You're like winter with a voice softer than snow;
You're like spring by the way you make me feel reborn
You're like summer for you shine like the sun,
but mostly you're like the stars because I feel like I can
reach them when I see them twinkling in your eyes

These are my poems with the sharp edges of AoM. This is a tribute to him.
more poems will be coming.

[Mooks]

umm akward..

[aw89]

umm akward..

Couldn't agree more

vvv I think it is supposed to be to his (male) lover, can't remember his name at the moment though.

[Samurai Waki]

If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all.(Mind you, like serious questions about the poem, such as, I disagree with your perspective, or I don't understand what your poem is about). Your poem was very well written, and captured a unique light on your perspective of Alexander the Great.

By the way: Is the Poem being written through the eyes of Alexander, or are you writing the poem ABOUT Alexander? The way I read it, it sounded more like you were trying to look through the eyes of Alexander and capture some sort of emotion he felt over something.

[The Stranger]

alright i see now that the words i picked are weird...but they are just love poems i wrote and which AoM sharpened. they are not about anyone or for anyone. and since AoM loves lovepoems so much (and i dont really) this thread is supposed to be a little gift for him and other lovepoemlovers.

and i still request this being moved to the FRONTROOM

[Leonin Khan]

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

[aw89]

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

Oh, scratch my comment then.

[Beirut]

My son the artist.

[Mouzafphaerre]

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His son the artist indeed!

More please!

PS: Mind you? Mead Hall is the correct place to move this to.
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[The Stranger]

nope...since the frontroom is the Kingdom of Love it belongs in the frontroom...i ratrher have it there since it has more visitors :) pleassssee

[Samurai Waki]

alexander of macedon is a member, Wakizashi

Oh, hahaha.Well it would've helped if he said Alexander of Macedon (The .Org Member). I'm just terrible with names.

[Mouzafphaerre]

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To add to your confusion Leonin Khan is The Stranger.
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[Dutch_guy]

nope...since the frontroom is the Kingdom of Love it belongs in the frontroom...i ratrher have it there since it has more visitors :) pleassssee

Long time no see,so how long do you still get to bear the honor ( ?! ) of being the junior member with the highest postcount ?

Interesting thread by the way.

[Samurai Waki]

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To add to your confusion Leonin Khan is The Stranger.
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It's like a spy hunt.

[Leonin Khan]

ehm can this be moved...please

[bamff]

I'm all for more poetry in the org. Let the rich tradition of warrior poets live on I say!

[Leonin Khan]

im for it too...are the mods awake in this place...allright...move it 2 the meadhall then

[Samurai Waki]

Caesar's Judgement on moving the thread:

[Ludens]

May I add my voice to those requesting this thread to be moved to the Mead Hall?

[Leonin Khan]

yeah you can

[The Stranger]

can this be moved to the frontroom...if that cant be done to the meadhall then...heres another poem

when i see you, my heart stops and i skip a breath.
its like everything paused to see nature's most beautiful
your voice is softer than a nightingales twitter
and i swear i can hear the angels sing in every word
around you dances the parfume of paradise
sweeter than a thousand roses
and when you kiss me, you take my breath away

[BHCWarman88]

reminds me of love poems,don't know why..

[Strike For The South]

Um for the record Alexander of Macedon is mine any attempnts to take him away from me will be dealt with.

[Craterus]

The Stranger, why does it say Merry Christmas in your user title?

[Leonin Khan]

in my infinite wisdom i forgot the stranger cant post here

id like to invite everybody to post love poems theyve written...please no spam...yeah it sounds strange from my mouth but thats why i am the stranger for

[Reverend Joe]

id like to invite everybody to post love poems theyve written...please no spam...

No spam?! But... but... but you're the Stranger!

[Mouzafphaerre]

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Cong's on your seniorship Duth Guy!


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[Leonin Khan]

congratz 2...i still dont know how it works??? can somebody explain

[Alexanderofmacedon]

And the imfamous AoM is here!

Haha, this is a funny story. The Stranger had written a poem I read in an old thread. It was a love poem and I don't know why, but I like love poetry. Go figure. Anyway, I got together with him over PM's to write some more stuff. Basically he gave me some base poems, and I fancied them up, corrected them, etc.

I have a new love poem I've rescently made:

I wish I could be with you
I wish I could just hear your voice
Hear your soft, wonderful, sweet voice
I wish I could hear it forever and a day
I wish I could hold you
I just wish you were here
I want you here
I want you with me
Forever and ever
The feeling I feel when I hear your voice
It has no words this feeling
But I want to keep it forever


For the record...

SFTS is my guy...

LMAO

[Leonin Khan]

alright...i dont want you anyway :P