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    One of the Undutchables Member The Stranger's Avatar
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    damn, you could make a book with those. i'm goying to play some soccer and when i'm back i'll add a poem/rap

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    here are some.

    Bungee-jump
    the fall was beyond description
    the depth was way too deep
    or should i say hight
    cause does it matter anyway


    (it is a bit stiff in english)

    as a christmas ball beautiful and round
    makes you stare with open mouth
    amazing with all it's beauty like a pearl
    faster broken than a porcelain dish
    a baby seconds born
    with it's life on a thin red line


    for the dutch people around here

    als een kerstbal mooi en rond
    doet jou verstommen met open mond
    schitterend met al zijn pracht en praal
    breekbaar als een porseleinen schaal
    een baby pasgeboren
    met ze leven aan een zijden draad
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    he mods, can you change the title of the thread to Post your poems or lyrical proza

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    GIVE UP HOPE ALL HE WHO ENTER HERE is the inscription over the gates of hell, or so says shakespear (srry if i can't spell his name)
    and "Ask not for whom the bell tolls, it tolls for thee" is what the grim reaper says to his victims. long ago when a person died in a village the church bells would toll, the spirit of the dead would remain ignorant to there death until the reaper came to tell them "ask not for whom the bell tolls, it tolls for thee"...i dunno, i thought it was really poetic

    here is one of my origional poems

    i stand upon a feild of combat
    littered bodies no green to see
    smoke migled with burning flesh
    blood consumed by a thirsty ground
    my eyes roam over death
    and i try to grasp humanity
    but no humanity can i find
    for as i see the blood, carnage, hell
    i cannot cry... i only smile.

    i dunno...i don't like this peice all that much...you tell me
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    I think Shakespeare must have stolen that phrase from Dante, because in Dant's Inferno the inscription over the gates of Hell is "Abandon hope all ye who enter here" My english teacher last year had the quote in his room with the name Dante next to it, I think Shakespeare stole it or you got them mixed up.
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    Quietus
    On infinite hiatus.
    Onward and upward
    toward the precipice of life,
    the only way to achieve,
    Quietus.
    The what and the how,
    who and the why,
    The things and the people
    around you, above you,
    before and behind you,
    the thoughts and the processes,
    compiled in due time,
    objects and forced mind,
    compulsory ideas that have made you go blind,
    quiet you, quiet us,
    Anything and Everything
    Obsolete, once you reach,
    Quietus.

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    good all you guys have talent. (exept the lyric stealing Puppet master )

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