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    Part 7c: The general is dead..(soldier kills himself.... splat!)


    "The general is dead! But don't panic..." cried a soldier. SPLAT! Too late. A stupid soldier had killed hisself (think back people... think back...... ) " Keep firing! Don't panic! Hey, unit up there! Go up that hill and fire at that unit over there!" cried a officer who was now in command of the army. He pointed a stubby finger at a unit of infantry who were on another hill. The captain was commanding the tropps brillantly. Even Manius was impressed. Soon after the arrows were spent the infantry came to finish of the rebel army who took about a minute to defeat. The new general of the horse archers were premoted. He was called Airbes.

    Ps sorry for the delay on this story.



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    new short story, the battle of Hasting



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    BTW, sorry for the delay and also I'll shall make more longer parts and make them more detailed.


    Part 8: A new deal
    Manius II had an idea for the poor Julii who were skint, because of a huge money robbery. Somepeople say that the Senate stole the money, but no one really knows. Anyway, Manius told Tiberus and Airbes, who were in their camp, talking to each other, to come to the yellow tent where we was waiting, to discuss this idea. Airbes and Tiberus came to the large tent. Inside was a small fire and a couple of weapons and shields.
    "Sit down please," said Manius II. " I had a idea. you know the Julii, right?" Tiberus nodded and also Airbes. "Yeah, I know about them, poor gits alright. I once suffered under the hands of a Rebel army siegeing my town. People were dieing and disease spread quickly, as a spy destroyed the hospital. I nearly died by a disease but the Julii destroyed the army and we could rebuild our hospital." said Airbes. Tiberus and his twin were amazed by this story. " Thank Jupiter I found out this idea! They deserve the benifits of this idea!" said Manius II. "Okay, now here's the plan. You know the city of Grothes?" Tiberus nodded and so did Airbes. "Well, they're were saved by the Julii as well, so if we ask for money for the Julii they will probarly agree! We'll pay them back the money in two years time.!" continued Manius II. "Do you agree?" asked Manius II. "Yes!" agreed Tiberus and Airbes.








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    Right. Okay i'm overhauling this story. I'll do more detail and make thia story a LOT better.



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