Re: Teutonic Knights(chapter I)
:)))))))))))))))))))))........... You sound like my English teacher.....
Anyway, thanks for the remarks... I'll have to check my grammar next time.. The next chapter is going to be an intermediary because the third chapter is the biggest one....
Cheers,
Edward
P.S.: The one with "Dark times lay ahead"....Sorry, it was a spelling mistake....
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A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Teutonic Knights(chapter I)
No problem, happy to help. By the way, are you French-speaking? It's just that the way you write your dialogue is quite French.
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Re: Teutonic Knights(chapter I)
That's the most unusual remark I've ever received!!!!!!!! Interesting...
By the way, no...I'm from Romania, France is about 3000km away!!!
Hope you're gonna like chapter II..... Soon following...
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
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