Re: Fall of Constantinople
I had to come sooner to the meadhall. Love your story edyz!
About translating from your native language to English, well tough I almost never write long texts and normaly never do them in English, I find writing in English from the sart not only the easiest but it gives me also the best results. You just need to think in English. That gives the best result if you ask me. Thinking in English and ofcourse taking your time.
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Yeah, the next chapter is finished.
I'll post it this weekend.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Great Story!!
RIP Tosa, I can't believe you are gone, but we will never forget you
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Crusades and intrigues - Chapter XI
Work in Progress.
Thank you for your understanding.
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Last edited by edyzmedieval; 08-28-2009 at 09:41.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
A huge progress, edyz! I like the fact you include some love intrigue and the fate of Kostas who belongs to the plebs. I like it. And by the way I was surprised by the facts about Bayazid and prince Mehmed... But I would give you an advise- you should improve the palace speech- the Byzantines are known to have a great ceremonial and never to speak frank ( esp. in the palace; of course they were not so formal in their private talks). But good story!
P.S. I want more big chapters!
Last edited by Prince Cobra; 08-08-2006 at 20:53.
R.I.P. Tosa...
Re: Fall of Constantinople
The year is 1443, so things are starting to shape up. I am now adding the secondary characters, which are going to be part of the proper siege.
Oh by the way, thanks for seeing the mistake.
Khalil was older than 50 years...
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Come on, no more feedback?
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
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