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    Good work! Well, the only thing I did not like is that the ambassador lacks any vices... There are no perfect people. If he is a main character, you can slowly reveal his v&v and depending on your intentions make him sympathetic, repulsive or something in the middle. Of course, this is my opinion because I tend to bury deep inside my character's mind and background. If he is not, then I want to see how you build your main characters. Of course, you should follow your own style and your own vision. Waiting for further updates!

    And yes, I liked the part about the Holy Roman Empire and Poland. It was such a stupid mistake.
    Last edited by Prince Cobra; 03-14-2011 at 21:33.
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