Re: Fall of Constantinople
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...72&postcount=1
First chapter fully edited. It offers a very different perspective and will surely give more clues about how things will go forwards. Chapter II is almost finished regarding reworking, and will be posted probably this weekend.
@ Monk
Thank you very much for the feedback. Much appreciated.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Ah, I am glad you have not wasted your time and the chapter is indeed remade and improved. I liked it. Well, since I have to do some constructive criticism it will be this...
Ah, and this is just the beginning, right?
P.S. One of my rare comments.
Last edited by Prince Cobra; 08-06-2009 at 19:56.
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Re: Fall of Constantinople
Yes, it is just the beginning my dear Stephen.
Chapters II, III and IV are on their way, and at latest, this Monday, they will be up for reading.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Chapter II fully edited.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...54&postcount=8
Feedback welcome!
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Chapter III fully edited.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...0&postcount=11
Feedback welcome!
Last edited by edyzmedieval; 08-09-2009 at 17:11.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Really like your revisions of your early chapters, Edyz, it certainly adds depth to your writing!
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Re: Fall of Constantinople
@King Henry V
Thank you for your feedback.
Chapter IV fully revised.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...3&postcount=17
Feedback welcome!
First post now contains links to the reworked chapters as well as the latest one, and will be updated constantly as more chapters will be posted up for reading. Thank you.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
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