Chapter III fully edited.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...0&postcount=11
Feedback welcome!
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Chapter III fully edited.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...0&postcount=11
Feedback welcome!
Last edited by edyzmedieval; 08-09-2009 at 17:11.
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Really like your revisions of your early chapters, Edyz, it certainly adds depth to your writing!
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Re: Fall of Constantinople
@King Henry V
Thank you for your feedback.
Chapter IV fully revised.
https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showp...3&postcount=17
Feedback welcome!
First post now contains links to the reworked chapters as well as the latest one, and will be updated constantly as more chapters will be posted up for reading. Thank you.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
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Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
First five chapters and the latest chapter, chapter 17, have been compiled together and are ready for download! Both are in PDF versions, ready to be printed.
First five chapters - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VRM9LYN6
Latest chapter - chapter 17 - http://www.megaupload.com/?d=JFEG75I3
Enjoy reading!
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
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Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
A new chapter is in the making and hopefully it will be released soon so you can all read and enjoy.
Chapter 18 - Honour for hire
Last edited by edyzmedieval; 08-12-2009 at 18:27.
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
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Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
Re: Fall of Constantinople
Nice work, man. I like it. Who knows how things would be different if Constantinople survived, but it was probably inevitable. I like the mixture of romance among all the politics. I remember I wrote something like this from the perspective of a Crusader passing through the city for a school project. Anyway keep it up. And good to see another fellow Romanian on the boards
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@Andros Antonius
Thank you.
Feedback much appreciated!
In the process of editing the chapters I'm looking for feedback in order to improve even more. If you have any comments regarding the book, don't hesitate to post them!
Thank you very much!
Ja mata, TosaInu. You will forever be remembered.
Proud
Been to:
Swords Made of Letters - 1938. The war is looming in France - and Alexandre Reythier does not have much time left to protect his country. A novel set before the war.
A Painted Shield of Honour - 1313. Templar Knights in France are in grave danger. Can they be saved?
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