Quote Originally Posted by Monk
Personal, emotional, i like it kagemusha.

there are some grammar errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed by a once over edit. A tip, when you use a punctuation mark like a ',' you should use a space aferward. Example:


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The Monk thought for a long time before any resonable comment revealed itself. Yet when it did, he posted quickly.
Other than that i enjoyed this. Welcome to the Mead Hall. kagemusha
Thanks for the tips Monk, It clearly shows that english isnt my native language. Back at school, i was always criticized for my grammar. When i start to write something it just bursts out of my brain.