to the last bunker

[The Stranger]

another update. be free to reply and give some hints and stuff

[Monk]

I've spotted numerous grammatical and spelling errors, you should perhaps use tighter edits when going over this. Spell check helps too, its near the end of the page. Sometimes your sentences are very short and come off a bit fragmented, you might want to go over them a few times to correct that.

just imho

[The Stranger]

the problem is, the spellcheck doesnt do any grammatical fixes. only misspelled words. i'm not a native english speaker and this story is transated from dutch. i'm trying to stick as close to the original story as possible but i cant always find the best english word for the dutch word. thats why ít may look a bit weird.

[The Stranger]

'what's your mission objective'
'take over some bridge, but i dont know where'
oh great, i thought, i'm in the middle of nowhere with some rookie that has to take over some bridge. and he doesnt even know where.
'you know what we're going to Saint-Mere-Eglise, and hook up with some paratroopers if we get there, oke'
Elder only nodded, but didnt said anything.
'so let's go now'
i stood up and grabbed my colt and continued my way. i looked back to see if Elder followed me. he was right behind me, with a garand in his hand and a scared look on his face.

we'd only walked for a mile, when we saw the outskirts of Saint-Mere-Eglise on the horison.
'We're almost there Elder.'
'Great i cant wait to fight those gerries'
he didnt do any trouble to cover the sarcasm.