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I thought i was supposed to get high in this one. 
Didnt we all.....good to see your stories still running after the death of the AJC, i mean, we're still friends right?
your still my friend 
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.Wow, I have never been this confused in my life.
A tip about writing. Use paragraphs when somebody says something. eg
"Hello", said Martinus.
"What the smeg?", said Ian of Smeg.
"It is my lord, the frog", said Jim.
Martinus then picked up his axe and took off Jim's head.
"That one less frog lover" said Berserker!.
A tip about writing. Use paragraphs when somebody says something. eg
"Hello", said Martinus.
"What the smeg?", said Ian of Smeg.
"It is my lord, the frog", said Jim.
Martinus then picked up his axe and took off Jim's head.
"That one less frog lover" said Berserker!.
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Didnt we all.....good to see your stories still running after the death of the AJC, i mean, we're still friends right?
I thought it was only closed for 24 hours?Didnt we all.....good to see your stories still running after the death of the AJC, i mean, we're still friends right?
wel atlantis and i think mongoose agreed that we won and that was the end....maybe we should crusade against something annoying like mcdonalds, loan adverts or Saladin?
Berserker! ...uhmm yeah man; i'm not sure how i'm supposed to comment on this. First i suggest running spell check as some have slipped through, next you might want to do a punctuation check. There's a few parts where that sorta trips the reader up.
As Martinus said, you should always start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. Helps keep it straight as to who is talking.
aside from that...i'm not sure what the heck is going on in this story. maybe i can get a cliff's notes edition?
As Martinus said, you should always start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. Helps keep it straight as to who is talking.
aside from that...i'm not sure what the heck is going on in this story. maybe i can get a cliff's notes edition?
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wel atlantis and i think mongoose agreed that we won and that was the end....maybe we should crusade against something annoying like mcdonalds, loan adverts or Saladin?
I said we had won like a week ago.wel atlantis and i think mongoose agreed that we won and that was the end....maybe we should crusade against something annoying like mcdonalds, loan adverts or Saladin?
Maybe we can try to destroy "Mr Mouse" off those e-sure adverts.
Originally Posted by Monk:
Berserker! ...uhmm yeah man; i'm not sure how i'm supposed to comment on this. First i suggest running spell check as some have slipped through, next you might want to do a punctuation check. There's a few parts where that sorta trips the reader up.
As Martinus said, you should always start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. Helps keep it straight as to who is talking.
aside from that...i'm not sure what the heck is going on in this story. maybe i can get a cliff's notes edition?
yes! confused a monk! Anyway, it's only a joke, really. And I will spell checkBerserker! ...uhmm yeah man; i'm not sure how i'm supposed to comment on this. First i suggest running spell check as some have slipped through, next you might want to do a punctuation check. There's a few parts where that sorta trips the reader up.
As Martinus said, you should always start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. Helps keep it straight as to who is talking.
aside from that...i'm not sure what the heck is going on in this story. maybe i can get a cliff's notes edition?
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