Very good! Apart from some very minor spelling mistakes, I think this is very good! Leaves a lot up to imagination, and the accompanying lyrical side works like a charm!
Chapeau!
~Wiz
Re: My First Story! Hooray!
Very good! Apart from some very minor spelling mistakes, I think this is very good! Leaves a lot up to imagination, and the accompanying lyrical side works like a charm!
Chapeau!
~Wiz
"It ain't where you're from / it's where you're at."
Eric B. & Rakim, I Know You Got Soul
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