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    Banquo's Ghost: Aye. I really should go back to rewrite the first opening: it's been years (this is one ultimate necro'ing on my part--and I intend to do the same with my other unfinished ones, too; I always have problems with false pretenses of honor!) and a lot of things had changed. I'm still not sure on where to go yet, but I hope it'll be at least...interesting.

    I intend the next "installment" to be less melancholy and more with dialogue and other, more conventional ways of storytelling. Brooding on and on forever will be tiring even to the most nihilistic of minds. I always have problems with dialogue, though, and any comments will be much appreciated.

    I can't possibly compare to your newest story (that was very nice, by the way!) but I'll try to make it at least something worth reading about, or not.

    (For the record, I'm actually in real life quite scared of insects--somethingphobia, I guess--so the piece is more realistic than would first appear )


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    Last edited by AntiochusIII; 07-27-2006 at 21:30.

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