Very interesting, AntiochusIII. I do not agree with Monk that you should describe what the character looks like. I am content with leaving him "faceless", as long as his personality starts to appear.

Anyway, I am interested in how this story will unfold, though I hope you will take care not to lose the main story line out of sight. I have seen a couple of "biographic" (is it auto-biographic, by the way?) stories get stuck in meaningless details when the author did not know the difference between creating an atmosphere and telling a lot of unimportant nonsense.

Good luck with writing.