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You should seriously consider having this published in a periodic as a series.
Onlytwoone minor typoesfor the sake of being picky: "for a living" it should be, not "leaving"and "A gray Fiat" with an 'a'; "grey" is about dogs, as in 'greyhound' or my LIB brother and web patron 'Grey Dog'.
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Forget about the gray/grey. I see Tolkien uses grey, only grey and nothing but grey for the colour.
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