I highly appreciate the interest Ludens, thanks for taking the time on commenting. Grammar as is plain to see is not one of my strong points. I do try to improve but it is woefully inadequate (It doesn’t matter that I might know a lot of fancy words if I don’t know where and in which order I should put them now does it ). Hopefully I’ll improve as I go along. My last paragraph ends the first part and the introduction to my story. Next I will try to guide you through my dark and twisted world where people aren’t very nice. So I think I want to explore more of the people in the world and what lurks below the “sunny” surface. I hope you’ll enjoy it. Be careful not to get too sober Mouzafphaerre, the world is a much happier place when drunk .

Cheers
Nev