Thanks Mouzafphaerre, I have edited the story. The things I have not included are the inclusion of “the man” instead of “man”. I talk about the race of man and not just one dude, so it was intentional. I did not correct anything in the owl incident either. It was the owl that was happy none saw it scared not the messenger. Other than that I think I have included all you’re corrections. Thanks again for bearing with me. It’s only recently that I have gotten the interest of actually writing, before that all I cared about was the proficiency of talking the language. I couldn’t care less of the grammar of it.

Anywhoo, I’ve started planning the next chapter and hope to have it up soon. Hopefully with better grammar. It takes some time as I need to bee in a certain mood to write this story, can’t be chirpy if I’m to write in a dark and gloomy fashion . So I hope you’ll enjoy it, even if it is erroneous.

Cheers
Nev