Twilight

[Ludens]

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Impatiently waiting the rest.
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So do I!

[Nevyn]

A quick update. Not the best one but a start. I will probably change it some later, got to read through it a couple of times first and find out where this is going.

Cheers
Nev

[Ludens]

Very good!

(Sorry for not commenting more: I am supposed to write a report for the uni, but I have to finish it tomorrow, my notes are not complete and I am going mad trying to get something interesting on paper. )

[Nevyn]

Thanks Ludens. I’ll try to correct a few things by the weekend. The one thing I don’t miss about school, the paperwork. The beer , the women , the freedom all good things but…


Edit
I just reread the second chapter and I felt it was all wrong. It has gone from a dark mood to a more indifferent one, which was not the intention. The descriptions are also more to be wanted. I have the scene clear in my head; I just don’t seem to be able to put it to paper. Well, at least I have fleshed out the scene, now I just have to find a better way of writing it.

Cheers
Nev

[Ludens]

I just reread the second chapter and I felt it was all wrong. It has gone from a dark mood to a more indifferent one, which was not the intention. The descriptions are also more to be wanted. I have the scene clear in my head; I just don’t seem to be able to put it to paper. Well, at least I have fleshed out the scene, now I just have to find a better way of writing it.

Any progress on this? I hope you have not abandoned the story.

[Mouzafphaerre]

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[Nevyn]

I have no intention on abandoning the story. Work is killing me at the moment. I’m just too tired to work up any inspiration to write. Hopefully I’ll get some more time to write soon. Christmas is closing so I’ll probably have more time in a couple of days as things slow down. Hopefully. Anyway thanks for reading.

Cheers
Nev