Quote Originally Posted by Greek Phalanx
oh damn I love so lot the 0 comments I got!
Sorry, but you gave me an awfull lot of text to digest.

I am very impressed by the amount of background you provide: this story could become an epic. Unfortunatly, I think you are a bit too much focused on background and not on a fluent story. You stop in the middle of a battle to explain a Suldurian weapon in detail, but introduce the characters in an offhand way.

But I do look forward to reading more about this war. Please continue .