The Dark Day

[Ludens]

Beautiful, Kraxis! The story gives a very convincing account of how a soldier would experience a battle. There are a few spots were you falter, but overal it is very good. Only, I am wondering what happened to Longinus' father?

Thanks... Though I do feel a little silly now, this forum just isn't too lively.

The Mead Hall is usually a very quiet forum. Don't worry if you don't get any comments within a day. People are reading, they are just reading in silence.