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  1. 11-17-2005, 10:52 #3
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    Thanks The Shadow One


    You are right about it not being too elaborate, I wrote it while commuting and in lectures, so many details require some polishing. Specially punctuation - it was never my forte.

    I'll try to edit it out a bit whenever I get a while.

    EDIT 1 for additional dialogue and spelling.
    Last edited by SwordsMaster; 11-17-2005 at 14:27.
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