Quote Originally Posted by Monk
The plot line of this story has been reworked, tossed around, scrapped, rebuilt, expanded, scrapped again and then salvaged once more .

What i wanted to do with this story was expand my writing and do more than just war scenes, which, i would have to say i am becoming good at; yet slightly bored with. I've been trying to "flesh out" my characters, but the habit of just leaving them faceless and going into a "godlike" view of a war can be done easily... and one can slip into it without even knowing it causing whole pages to be dumped.
I am glad to hear this story still is active, and your intentions to focus more on characters and less on battles sounds very promising. I hope you can make it work.

Good luck with writing!