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    Default I made A lil song.

    Yes i made a song.
    Its more of a poem, But i had already composed the music then the words came to me,
    So i guess its a song,

    Id post it in the front room where i beleve it should go.
    But my posts get edited away by beirut when i leave 1 there so here it is in the entrance hall.

    It still needs work.
    But seeing as im a lasy sod and if i didnt post stuff on the net theyd dissapear in to nothingness for ever. Im posting it :P

    No need to reply Im shurte most would be insults any way.


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    .A.L.P.O.M.P.
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    Through the clouds of day we see the light,
    Migrating Birds are on their flight,
    Cascading shaddows as they Fly,
    Feel the breeze as they drift by.
    The winter soon will be here then Gone.
    But in the meantime we go on.
    So in to the sun the birds do fly..
    As the season Passes by.

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    The Light of day Is in the sky.
    As the season passes by.
    But the land of Hope is gone,
    As the season Marches on.
    Wars Are endless In these days.
    Clouds of Smoke And Violent haze.
    The Birds Of war Take to the Sky,
    As The Seasons Pass us by.


    The Life Of inocence Is the cost,
    For democaracy Or There version of,
    If only the powers that be could see.
    Life should Always be set free.
    Encarcerate the terorists!
    Prevent people Getting Pissed!
    Dont even Question us for Why's,
    do as we say or you will die!,


    The Quest for peace is Told like this,
    Democaracy was lost in the mist.
    But then Why should we cry.
    The seasons still go Marching by.
    life with peace would be such bliss.
    World armys That wont enlist.
    But theres is not to reason why.
    They must do or they must die


    So the people will live on.
    Fighting for peace.. Which is wrong,
    Peace its self Needs no fight.
    Live in peace do whats Right.
    Aslong as you heed this my song,
    We can watch the season just roll on.
    But we cant just stand and fight.
    Or we will surley loose the Light.

    if the light of day dwindles out.
    The fog of war will Casts great doubt,
    of our future and our lifes.
    In a land of near paradice,
    But then when all is said and done,
    the Seasons still go marching on,
    So to you I say this once,
    Make your choice And Dont be Long..


    lyrics dec 15 2005. By ShambleS.

    music "dfh" Some time 2003/2005 By shambleS.
    Last edited by Just A Girl; 12-16-2005 at 07:55.

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    The Abominable Senior Member Hexxagon Champion Monk's Avatar
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    Default Re: I made A lil song.

    nice little poem/song you have here shambles. though if you were worried about it being edited you could have thrown it in here:https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/forumdisplay.php?f=37

    its been our place for poems and stories for quite some time now

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    Default Re: I made A lil song.

    Quote Originally Posted by Monk
    nice little poem/song you have here shambles. though if you were worried about it being edited you could have thrown it in here:https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/forumdisplay.php?f=37

    its been our place for poems and stories for quite some time now
    Oh so That is what the Mead hall is for.
    I feel dumb now :)
    Maby a kind mod could moove this thingy.

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    Lightbulb Re: I made A lil song.

    Very good! A simple, but meaningful poem. I like it. It does need some polishing, though.

    But what does .A.L.P.O.M.P. mean?
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    Default Re: I made A lil song.

    A lyrical Poem of Musical Preportion :P

    I aint the best with names.
    :)

    Didnt realy post it for it to be reviwed,
    Just posted itso it dosent dissapear for ever in to nothingness like most other things i have written/done over the years,

    But Thank you for liking it,
    Il work more on it when i feel like it,

    I just threw it to gethere and left it alone.
    Dont like several parts of it my self.

    Thnx any how

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