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    Nymos Symmachos duplicates, "has been improved" should be have been improved, "however" shouldn't be there (or stick a comma after it), and there shouldn't be a comma before that (or change that to which).

    Edit: Description for Megaron Dioiketou says "A Dioiketes is not chosen from the lower Hellenic families or gods forbid, one of the native ones are not trustworthy enough, as..." which doesn't make grammatical sense.

    Comma in "better stronger walls" in description for Teichea Lithea.

    Tomb of Alexander: siezed should be seized.

    Syllogos kai Skeuotheke Strateumatos: "arms and armor is often stored" should be "are often stored."

    Practice Range: "which also needs" should be "which also need."

    Pyramids: "their surface were covered" should be "was covered."

    Metalleia: posess should be possess.
    Last edited by JayS; 01-13-2006 at 19:12.

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