Originally Posted by JayS
That's weird....I'll pass that on to the city improvement guys as it doesn't look like an editing issue.
Fixed"has been improved" should be have been improved, "however" shouldn't be there (or stick a comma after it), and there shouldn't be a comma before that (or change that to which).
Awful sentence. Rewritten.Edit: Description for Megaron Dioiketou says "A Dioiketes is not chosen from the lower Hellenic families or gods forbid, one of the native ones are not trustworthy enough, as..." which doesn't make grammatical sense.
Deleted "better".Comma in "better stronger walls" in description for Teichea Lithea.
FixedTomb of Alexander: siezed should be seized.
FixedSyllogos kai Skeuotheke Strateumatos: "arms and armor is often stored" should be "are often stored."
FixedPractice Range: "which also needs" should be "which also need."
FixedPyramids: "their surface were covered" should be "was covered."
Fixed (there were about 20 of these!)Metalleia: posess should be possess.
Thanks again!
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