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    Post Re: Typos/Grammar Thread (ALL factions)

    If you go into the Data file, then text and then export_buildings there are two typos for Anhachmohr.

    {governors_villa_britons} Anhachmohr
    {governors_villa_britons_desc}
    Casse Warlord's Hold\n\nA well-liked chief or a powerful chieftain of my tribes often has an exceptionally large home, complete with offices, and extravagant works of art, as well as his trophies from battle. It is a central hub for the social life of a community, as the owner of this home likely has more money than anyone else in town, and likely got elected toi his position in part because of his good nature to his people, or through his fame via great deeds. Feasts and parties for the locals would be organized here, and spillover from such parties may even end up in the yard around it.
    {governors_villa_britons_desc_short}
    New EB Description Required
    I'm not sure what the 'my' is about, but 'toi' should be 'to'.

    There is also another small typo for Parvarsk:

    {governors_villa_parthia} Parvarsk
    {governors_villa_parthia_desc}
    Small Palace\n\nSuccessful and (relatively) loyal satrapes under the Pahlava are rewarded by more lands and larger manors. His subjects are more prosperous, trade and agriculture is giving him even more retinue. Petitioners, tax collectors as well as those in trouble with the law all have to go to the governor for their business. The governor has some of his Bandaka (bondsmen) stationed in his manor, to provide protection and a rudimentary garrisons. He and his vassals would have their mounts raised and grazed in nearby pastures.
    {governors_villa_parthia_desc_short}
    New EB Description Required
    Should be 'a rudimentary garrison'.
    Last edited by kkjbk; 01-30-2006 at 18:34.

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