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    Latif

    The blazing sun sat high in the sky, far above the royal fortress of Lion’s Den. The glow of the sun was further enhanced by the light reflected from the white walls of the great castle.

    Lion’s Den was built by Marcus I Aurelius as a royal seat and as a way to commemorate his conquering of Ashara. The citadel was raised on Landing Point, the peninsula jutting out from Pella and the place where Marcus first stepped onto Asharan soil. The castle was only finished after twelve years, at which time Marcus was on his deathbed. Marcus’ son and heir, Drusus I, ordered the imprisonment, and eventually the death, of the architect and the laborers. He decreed that no one but the royal family would know the layout and design of the fortress.

    Ringed by an outer and inner curtain wall, the keep was made of granite. Composed of the King’s Tower, the Roaring Tower, and the Diamond Tower, the Purple Keep was held to be the strongest part of the castle. A barbican stood outside the walls, before the moat, while towers rose from each of the four points where the walls connected to form a corner. Inside the walls, a huge city gradually came into being and became known as Austrasia, which was the land from which Marcus I had sailed.

    The light emanating from the sun not only hit the walls, but also struck the stained glass windows of the throne room. As the light touched the multicolored windowpanes, cascades of rainbows were sent throughout the chamber. This storm of light was further emphasized by the glare from the various jewels adorning the many princes in attendance.

    Latif Antigonus was among the large number of great lords present, though jewels were absent. Tall, gaunt-faced, and ebony, Latif was clad in a simple, black doublet bearing the sigil of his House: a yellow eye. Simple garments for a simple man, thought Latif as he eyed his peers decked out in their finery. They preen like peacocks. Latif observed them all, living up to the motto of House Antigonus: “All-Seeing.”

    Slender and exotic, Lady Johara Menander was clothed in a low-cut gown made of light blue and white silk. Prince Omari Ptolemy wore a swordbelt made of silver and amethysts as well as a steel sword possessing a hilt fashioned in the form of a star. Light-eyed and black-haired with caramel skin, Queen Aaliyah still remained one of the beautiful women in Ashara, or at least in Latif’s mind. In a gown of damask slashed with silver velvet, she shamed each of the ladies in attendance, especially Latif’s own dowdy wife, whose wide frame was draped in an old yellow samite gown.

    The princesses Aiesha and Syana came closest in matching their mother’s beauty. Aiesha’s gown was made of silver silk and vair while Syana wore silver brocade and lace. Their grey eyes and resemblance to their mother was startling to Latif. Such a girl as Syana will be lost on a fool like Omari, he thought.

    Suddenly the great oaken doors to the room flew open. Shakir Alexander, the First of His Name, strode into the hall looking every inch the king he was. Gods, he looks just the way he did the night we captured Lion’s Den, thought Latif, reminiscent. As Shakir swept into the room, every eye was drawn to him. The king was resplendent in a doublet made of cloth-of-silver. The sigil of House Alexander, a white lion, was sewn into the double with purple silk. Walking the length of the chamber to the throne, his footsteps were dogged by a heavy cape made of yet more cloth-of-silver. A ferocious lion’s head was picked out on the cape in diamonds. Having effectively put his courtiers to shame, Shakir joined the rest of the royal family on the dais, home to the Diamond Throne.

    According to post-Conquest legend, the Diamond Throne was made of solid diamond. It is said that when Marcus I landed at Pella, the Diamond Throne was sitting atop the highest of the Ten Sacred Hills, which form a half-circle around Lion’s Den. Marcus saw it as a sign from the gods and proceeded to conquer Ashara. Upon the conclusion of the war, the Diamond Throne was placed in Lion’s Throne.

    In actuality, the so-called “Diamond Throne” was made of high quality glass and embedded with large diamonds. It wasn’t created until nine years after Marcus’ death by his grandson, Drusus II. In his finite wisdom, Drusus set out to add an air of mystique to the throne but only served to begin the rumors of the House of Aurelius being mentally unstable. Despite the blunder, the monarch’s seat continued being called the Diamond Throne and it remained a wonder to the court’s visitors.

    Once Shakir climbed the dais, a young man, aged sixteen or seventeen, stepped forward. Serving as herald, he called out in a clear voice, “All hail His Most Serene Majesty, Shakir Alexander, the First of His Name, High King of Ashara, Prince-Elector of Pella, Lord of Lion’s Den, Augustus, Autokrator, Basileus, Dominus, Imperator, Invictus, Pius Felix, Pharaoh, Shah, Nobilissimus Caesar and Aurelius Maximus.”

    As the crowd of nobles responded, “All hail,” with their hands over their hearts, Latif had a sudden thought. How can a man acquire so many titles within less than twenty years?

    The herald continued, “All hail Her Most Serene Majesty, Aaliyah, of House Aurelius, Queen-Consort, Augusta, Basilissa, Domina, Imperatrix, and Great Wife.”

    “All hail,” cried the onlookers.

    “All hail Her Serene Majesty, Aiesha, of House Alexander, heir to the Diamond Throne, Princess-Electoress of Mazaka, Lady of Heartwood, Protector of the Heartwood, Princess of Ashara, Princess of the Blood Royal, Princeps Iuventatis, and Princeps Senatus.”

    “All hail.”

    “All hail Her Serene Majesty, Syana, of House Alexander, Princess of Ashara, Princess of the Blood Royal, Archduchess, Madame Royale, and Infanta.”

    “All hail,” they said for the final time, bowing to the royal family. The herald retreated and a page came forward. He handed Shakir a long piece of parchment, as well as a bottle of red ink and a pen. This brought a smile to Aaliyah’s face and a twinkle to Aiesha’s eye. Shakir’s face remained hard.

    “Rise,” commanded Shakir in a voice that reverberated throughout the chamber. Every lord and lady rose to face their king. The moment of truth is upon us, thought Latif.

    “Noble princes, you have been called to court to demonstrate your loyalty to the Diamond Throne and to pledge your allegiance to House Alexander. In my hands I hold a document called the Pragmatic Sanction.

    “The Pragmatic Sanction is a legally binding decree that has been designed for one single purpose: to ensure that my daughter Aiesha accedes to all my lands and titles. By signing this decree, you will be recognizing Aiesha as my successor as well as pledging your swords should anyone be tempted to contest her claim.”

    “And if we refuse to sign it, Your Most Serene Majesty?” asked Prince Sahir Leonnatus, playing devil’s advocate.

    “Any lord who refuses to sign the Sanction will be viewed as a traitor, and all his lands and incomes will be forfeit to the Crown. He will also be tried for high treason and rebellion against the Crown, and if found guilty he will be beheaded and his head will be stuck on a pike on the walls. His head will serve as a warning to all would-be traitors,” replied Shakir coldly.

    The naked threat hung on the air: sign or lose all, including one’s own life. Only, everyone present knew Shakir’s word to be more than a threat. His word was law.

    Shakir sat on the Diamond Throne with a grim face; his family’s faces matched his own mood. Aaliyah was no longer smiling and the twinkle in Aiesha’s eye had long since faded. Only Syana seemed to be slightly happy; she was gazing at Omari.

    The herald once again stepped forward, placing a small table on the dais. He sang out, “His Serene Majesty, Latif Antigonus, Prince-Elector of Xanthos, Gordium, and Aspendos, Lord of Brighteye, Mistgate, and Heavenhall, Grand Cupbearer, and Shield of Arsakia, now comes forward and proves his allegiance to House Alexander.”

    Just my luck, I’m the first, Latif thought as he approached the dais. Dipping the quill in the red ink, he penned his name to the document without a second thought. Of course he would support the daughter of his king. Shakir then lavished his first smile of the day on his old friend. Latif smiled back, and he was filled with the memories of that fateful night that Shakir had become king.

    It was an especially dark night when Kamil Asander had come to Shakir’s war tent and changed his allegiance. Up until that point the outcome of the war was nowhere near certain. Prince Makeen Neoptolemus and Prince Jubair Philotas had blockaded Lion’s Den to cut off supplies, but the besieging force was made up of only ten thousand men. Prince Khayri Archon and Prince Fatin Taxiles were racing toward Lion’s Den with the intention of breaking the siege. If Kamil hadn’t switched sides and opened the gates, Shakir’s force would have been caught between twenty thousand men and the walls of the great castle. Luckily, Kamil’s betrayal gave Shakir enough time to take the castle and kill Lucius IV. By the time the loyalist forces arrived, Shakir had already claimed the Diamond Throne.

    Luck, thought Latif, has always been on your side. Let us pray that your luck has not run out when you need it most, old friend. Latif stepped to the right side of the Diamond Throne, symbolizing his loyalty.

    “His Serene Majesty, Talib Antipater, Prince-Elector of Thessalonica, Lord of Sunpointe, Grand Usher, and Guardian of the Ten Ports, now comes forward to prove his allegiance to House Alexander.”

    A man aged at least sixty years, Talib’s features were still fine, his back still straight, and his walk still proud. As one of the few lords to defy Shakir during the War of the Lions, and as one of the even fewer to retain his lands and titles, Talib would defy Shakir no more. He stepped to the table, signed his name rather hastily, and stood beside Latif.

    “His Serene Majesty, Duwan Asander, Prince-Elector of Halicarnassus, Lord of Viperfang, Grand Standard-Bearer, and Guardian of the South, now comes forward to prove his allegiance to House Alexander.”

    A young man of an age with the page began to walk forward, nervously. He was a handsome child, with a handsome castle as well as handsome lands. He would make Syana a much better husband, thought Latif. Syana must’ve thought so too, because she could not remove her eyes from the boy. Duwan signed, and stood next to Talib. For the rest of the ceremony, he and Syana made eyes at each other.

    Needless to say, none of the lords present felt brave enough nor proud enough to deny their overlord their signature. When finished, the document had sixteen signatures.

    -----

    “That was ill done, dominus,” said Latif. After the conference was finished, Shakir had retreated to his solar. As his oldest friend, Latif was not far behind him.

    The solar was a rather large room, but smaller by far than the throne room or council chambers. Containing eight full-length windows that contained window seats, the walls of the solar were covered in various tapestries and paintings. A small bed was pushed up against the wall, while a table and two chairs faced the window.

    “What was ill done, Latif?” asked Shakir, his voice full of weariness, as he sat down in one of the window seats.

    “May I speak frankly, dominus?”

    “Don’t you always?”

    “Shakir, this is insane. You just forced the whole realm to support a woman’s claim to the throne.”

    “What was I to do? They had to be made to sign the document somehow.”

    “Dominus, they would have signed the document regardless; none of them would risk earning your displeasure. By threatening them, you are setting yourself up as a tyrant.”

    “A tyrant? Simply because I would see my daughter in this same position when I am gone? I think not. I have ensured that Aiesha will become High Queen of Ashara.”

    Latif knew better than to argue with his liege, so he tried a different angle. “Well, dominus, will you allow her to marry?”

    “That depends. I want my daughter to rule in her own right, not as a puppet to her husband. Who do you deem suitable?

    “I have the perfect prince in mind, dominus.”

    - This story isn't based on any of the TW games. I was just writing something and I wanted a little feedback. Thanks.
    Last edited by FlyyGemini08; 11-13-2005 at 19:44.

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    Default Re: Pride of Lions

    Very nice, I like it but you may want to paragraph them a bit to make reading easier
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    Lightbulb Re: Pride of Lions

    Very good! The scene set-up is well-done and you paint an interesting situation.

    However, I agree with the comment on paragraphing. Also, I'd like to know more about the world this takes place in.

    I am very interested in how this will continue.
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    Here's some info on how Shakir came to power during the civil war called 'The War of the Lions.'




    1. Shakir Alexander, Lord of Heartwood, was drunk at a feast and said that ‘if the old lion were forced to step down, the people of Ashara would be much better off.’

    2. King Lucius IV Aurelius, the old lion in question, was an inefficient ruler who was controlled by corrupt, greedy advisors. Lucius was also half-insane. Uopn hearing of the incident, Lucius had Shakir charged with high treason and conspiracy to commit regicide. Lucius then passed a bill of attainder against House Alexander, forfeiting all their lands and titles.

    3. Kamal Asander, Lucius’ Master of Spies, provided him with false evidence to validate the charges. Said evidence included fake battle plans, maps of Lion’s Den, Lucius’ seat, and witnesses who testified that heard or saw various treasonous acts. For his ‘faithful service to the Crown,’ Kamal was given Heartwood as his new seat.

    4. Instead of appearing at Lion’s Den as commanded to answer the charges against him, Shakir rebelled against the throne. He claimed that Lucius’ father and his uncle, Brutus II, was illegitimate unbeknownst to their grandfather, Titus III. This made Lucius unfit to inherit the throne, as he came from a bastard line of House Aurelius. As the son of Brutus’ older sister, Julia, Shakir claimed the throne as the last legitimate member of House Aurelius. Shakir then placed the white lion of House Aurelius inside the heart of House Alexander and made it his new sigil. Hence, ‘The War of the Lions.’

    5. Lucius countered by saying that if Shakir’s claim was true, their cousin Titus should be next in line as the son of their uncle Gaius, and should proceed Shakir, as he was the son of Titus’ daughter. Lucius said that if Titus should come forward and claim the throne, he would step down. Titus never came forward and many speculated that he had been dead since Lucius’ accession. He’d been missing since then everyone assumed Lucius wanted no rival claimants to the throne.

    6. Lucius then commanded Prince Ra’id Porus of Amastris to take Heartwood and bring Shakir to him, dead or alive. Ra’id took command of 25,000 men and marched on Heartwood. Hearing of Ra’id’s plans, Latif Antigonus, Prince-Elector of Xanthos and Shakir’s foster brother, declared for Shakir. He raced 20,000 men towards Heartwood to cut Ra’id off. At the Battle of the Wood, Latif was soundly defeated but Shakir was able to escape with 5,000 horse due to the diversion. Ra’id proceeded with siege with about 15,000 men. Prince Khayri Archon of Gordium also sent a force of 5,000 men to help with the siege and marched 10,000 troops up the Star Road.

    7. Prince Nareem Menander marched down to Larissa with 15,000 men where he met up with Shakir. With their 20,000 men they began the long march to Lion’s Den. They were intercepted by 25,000 of men under the command of Prince Fatin Taxiles of Sidon. Shakir was defeated a few miles from Bloodytears, the seat of House Seleucus. After the Battle of Blood, Shakir escaped across the Red Fork of the Bloody River. Shakir found himself between the forces of Fatin and forces marching from Lion’s Den under Lucius’ brother, Marcus Aurelius. Nareem escaped to Pergamum after almost being captured, and convinced Prince Essam Leonnatus to declare for Shakir. Upon hearing of this, Prince Sadiq Seleucus declared for Shakir as well, and both princes sent him ten thousand men. This bolstered Shakir’s forces to 30,000 men. He was able to turn back, defeat Fatin at the Battle of Seleucus, and cross the Bloody River to face Marcus.

    8. Meanwhile, the whole realm had declared for a king except Thessalonica and Athens. Staying out of the war, their lands and men remained untouched.

    9. Mansur Laomedon, Prince-Elector of Antioch, having declared for Shakir, defeated Fatin’s fleet in the Battle of the Antioch. The Alexandrian fleet was defeated by the combined royal and Tarsan fleet in the Battle of the Essence.

    10. Shakir, intending to take Marcus unawares, raced 20,000 men towards Marcus. Shakir won a pyrrhic victory at the Battle of Pella. Marcus retreated to Lion’s Den and Shakir advanced and laid siege.

    11. Prince Omar Neoptolemus of Artaxarta then blockaded Lion’s Den and landed 5,000 men. All seemed lost for Shakir, despite his victories. Lion’s Den was well provisioned and Khayri and Fatin were riding to break the siege. The steward of Heartwood had surrendered to Ra’id, meaning Shakir had lost his seat. If he couldn’t take Lion’s Den quickly, he would be undone.

    12. Nakeem Philotas, Prince-Elector of Tarsus, then switched allegiances. His father had fought for Lucius, but his father had just died. He had no love for Lucius, though just a month or so before he had commanded the Tarsan fleet, and he used his ships to help blockade Lion’s Den. He also landed 10,000 men to help with the siege. Kamal Asander then changed sides and opened the gates for Shakir.

    13. After a month of siege, Shakir’s forces took Lion’s Den and sacked the city of Austrasia. Women were raped and men cut down. Lucius died in single combat against Shakir; Shakir would later claim that the gods gave strength to his sword arm due to his just cause. All knew this to be false due to the fact that Lucius was no fighter. Lucius’ queen Samiyah, was raped and killed by Latif Aurelius. Their son, Marcus had escaped shortly before the blockade was put in place while Lucius’ brother Marcus was executed for high treason. Their daughter, Livia, was spared because Shakir married her to unite their Houses, cement his claim, and provide his heirs with Aurelian blood.

    14. Shakir had the leaders of the loyalist forces executed on charges of high treason; these men included Fatin Taxiles, Khayri Archon, Ra’id Porus, and Abdul Oxyartes, who had refused to ask for a pardon. Shakir then passed bills of attainder against their houses and exiled the remaining members. Shakir awarded Gordium and Aspendos to Latif, Sidon to Mansur, and gave Amastris to his bastard brother, Haji Eumenes. Heartwood would pass to his heir. Shakir was crowned as Shakir Malik Alexander, the First of His Name, while Livia was crowned as Aaliyah. Shakir also created new titles for Aaliyah and himself.

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    Lightbulb Re: Pride of Lions

    Are you still working on this? I really think this story merrits a continuation.
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    I've been really busy but I'll try my best to get the next chapter out this weekend.

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlyyGemini08
    I've been really busy but I'll try my best to get the next chapter out this weekend.
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