Kingdom of Love

**The Stranger** · 02-05-2006, 11:15

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From Alexander of Macedon
Your voice is the sweet sing of a meadowlark outside;
Your skin is soft like the softest Chinese silk;
Everything I do is with you in my thoughts;
I’ve liked you from the moment I first saw you
and now, I must let you know
I love you

I looked into your eyes
with a glance unworldly;
I touched your skin
softer then the best silk;
I kissed your sweet lips
sweeter then a bee’s honey,
and when our bodies melted,
I was in heaven

You’re like autumn when the wind blows through;
You're like winter with a voice softer than snow;
You're like spring by the way you make me feel reborn
You're like summer for you shine like the sun,
but mostly you're like the stars because I feel like I can
reach them when I see them twinkling in your eyes

These are my poems with the sharp edges of AoM. This is a tribute to him.
more poems will be coming.

**Mooks** · 02-06-2006, 02:42

umm akward..

**aw89** · 02-06-2006, 10:35

Originally Posted by holybandit

umm akward..

Couldn't agree more

vvv I think it is supposed to be to his (male) lover, can't remember his name at the moment though.

**Samurai Waki** · 02-06-2006, 11:13

If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all.(Mind you, like serious questions about the poem, such as, I disagree with your perspective, or I don't understand what your poem is about). Your poem was very well written, and captured a unique light on your perspective of Alexander the Great.

By the way: Is the Poem being written through the eyes of Alexander, or are you writing the poem ABOUT Alexander? The way I read it, it sounded more like you were trying to look through the eyes of Alexander and capture some sort of emotion he felt over something.

**The Stranger** · 02-06-2006, 12:40

alright i see now that the words i picked are weird...but they are just love poems i wrote and which AoM sharpened. they are not about anyone or for anyone. and since AoM loves lovepoems so much (and i dont really) this thread is supposed to be a little gift for him and other lovepoemlovers.

and i still request this being moved to the FRONTROOM