Re: Kingdom of Love
If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all.(Mind you, like serious questions about the poem, such as, I disagree with your perspective, or I don't understand what your poem is about). Your poem was very well written, and captured a unique light on your perspective of Alexander the Great.
By the way: Is the Poem being written through the eyes of Alexander, or are you writing the poem ABOUT Alexander? The way I read it, it sounded more like you were trying to look through the eyes of Alexander and capture some sort of emotion he felt over something.
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