alright...i dont want you anyway :P
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alright...i dont want you anyway :P
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Good poem?
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to be honest...i dont really
i did like your first..but compared to that this one is quite bad
the other was great...this is below average....but thats my opinion
i dont like the fact that you use I so much in the begining without real structure...say I in the beginning of every sentence or one with I and one without I or use it spare
it would do ass a speech...its a good speech but not really a poem...but what do other members think?
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It's not man-love...
They are called "love poems"...
think what you will though...
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We need to talkOriginally Posted by Alexanderofmacedon
There, but for the grace of God, goes John Bradford
My aim, then, was to whip the rebels, to humble their pride, to follow them to their inmost recesses, and make them fear and dread us. Fear is the beginning of wisdom.
I am tired and sick of war. Its glory is all moonshine. It is only those who have neither fired a shot nor heard the shrieks and groans of the wounded who cry aloud for blood, for vengeance, for desolation.
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post the love poems
We do not sow.
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I'll probably post some later on I haven't written anything in a while. It'll probably be more of a song though.
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