Satanae Juda,

I appreciate your original work my man.

Can I give some input, as I've researched the bible and biblical archaeology?

Perhaps the 2 main faction names/groups/whatever should be called:
Annointed and Abbydon, instead of Tubal and Meschech.

It would be truer to the "end times" theme.

Regarding:

So crucify the ego, before it's far too late
And leave behind this place so negative and blind and cynical...

It looks like you are holding onto a poignant topic: Ego death

BTW, every religion, including esoteric, alchemical, freemasonic speaks of an ego death. Tibetan Buddhist Dzogchen speaks of "naked awareness" as a way to do just that.

Thank you kindly sir, Hellas1