Hello, Greek Phalanx, good to see you back again .

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I'd really need comments, as much constructive as they may or may not be... Watch out it's about 55 pages by now...
Fifty-five pages! I would like to comment, but I haven't got time to read all that. I'll try to do some reading in the weekend, thoug, but I think smaller chuncks of stories are less likely to scare potential readers off.