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    Disease, I thought. I wondered why I hadn't gotten the disease yet, having followed the huns for days so recklessly, without realizing what a danger it meant. Odin had decided to protect me, like he had protected me from both ice and fire, he now protected me against the muddy earth, from which diseases spring. I rode for three days more, before the landscape changed again. I was getting close to the great river that divides Gallia Cisalpina, and the ground had changed from forest and hills to vast open lands, something that looked strange and unusual for a man who had grown up in the dense forests of the north. The entire landscape was like an infinite sand bank of the type that lies next to the rivers also to the north, but to the north they were seldom wider than an axe blade. For hours, I rode through this desert, through this land where only meagre, twisted plants could grow, covered in layers of grey dust. My only company was my horse, and I suspected the horse had once been ridden by one of the huns, because it sometimes had an empty look in it's eyes, sometimes fire sparkling through them, with slow, proud movements of the neck, but aggressive, quick steps with the feet. Even though I couldn't call out the demons of this creature completely like the tatars could, I was able to make it run faster than any other horse I had ever ridden. Suddenly, I had a feeling of being followed. As the sun set before the third night in this unforgiving, dry desert, I decided not to light a fire to sleep by. Instead, I tied the horse to a dry, thorny bush and then sneaked away from the place as quietly as I could, grabbing my axe tightly, and watching the place where the horse lied, and where any follower would expect me to be, from a safe distance. At first I didn't see anything, but then a skinny figure, that reminded me of a skeleton, appeared next to the horse. It sneaked away as quickly as it had appeared. I slept little that night, and when I woke up in my hiding spot, it was already day. There were no traces of any followers, and I quickly took the horse and continued my pursuit of the huns.
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    I rode the horse up a tall hill to try and catch a glance of the Huns. The wind blew the horses mane wildly and i noticed my own unruley hair snatched by a gust of howling wind. I had never experienced anything so bitter and harsh, yet unbreakable and undefeatable as this bitter wind that swept the empty plains, perfect for the horses of the Huns to graze. In the deep wooded valeys of the north, where infantry rule, we stood a fighting chance against the Tartar horde. But in the empty expanse... cavalry would rule the day. In the distance I saw it; a long, snaking trail of horses and men. My own horse snorted yearningly when it's own keen eyes spotted it's people.
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    The Huns had stopped their march and camped near a town called Mantua. Although the hordes were still marauding the whole area it did not look like they were marching to Rome soon. They looked like they were waiting for something.

    After two weeks there was a small caravan coming on the road from Rome. There were only 20 men, all mounted with the expection of a carriage. They had a lot of crosses and banners but, as far as I could see, not any weapon. Of course I knew the banner at the front; it was the sign of Leo, the leader of the Christs in Rome.

    I set on my horse and tried to reach them before the Huns would catch them.

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    I hadn't even gotten out of my hiding spot on the hill before hunnic arrows started flying through the air. The shining chainmail worn by the mounted bodyguards proved to be of little help against the black crow feathered arrows that struck them. I hadn't seen the huns from a safe distance like this before, and I was amazed at how they could communicate with each others without speaking. Not a single arrow was wasted, each man knew which target to hit. None of the bodyguards were struck by more than one arrow, and none of the bodyguard was struck by less than one, even though only 20 were fired. I held back my horse, and gazed at the golden carriage. It had slided off the road and the dead horses were entangled in the ropes with which they were attached to the carriage. One of the crosses of the carriage was loose, on the verge of falling off. The gold decorations were smeared with mud. The entire scene looked so silent, so still. Was there nobody inside the carriage? Why was there no movement from it? Three of the huns jumped off their horses and approached the carriage.
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    In some ways I wish I hadn't erupted from my hiding place to help. The soldiers were dead before I had even started my hunnic horse into a trot. One of the other huns, on horseback, spotted me and pointed silently, his bearded face grim set on death. They levelled their bows to my head height and I knew I was a dead man. The gods are truly fickle. I had to do something they wouldn’t expect. It was the only way I would survive. Instead of running away from them, I bravely set my horse into a canter and then into a full run. The huns with their bows at me glanced at me; they must think I was a crazy fool. I probably was. But it got me close enough until they finally got over the shock at the first arrow came. I pulled on the reigns, as if I could save Rome with my strength alone, and my horse glanced to the side. I felt the arrow scream by my head, whipping through my hair. The other huns we shocked. I wasn’t just some crazed fool. I was a trained crazed foolish soldier, and I was gonna give them a fight to make them wish they weren’t selected for the patrol.

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    For a moment I thought I could stand the fight, the fight against a superior numbers of Huns. After two seconds I was forced to return to reality again. In the wink of an eye the Huns had reloaded and fired another volley while my horse was still standing. I bowed, trying to give them a small target. However, they did not shoot at me, they targeted my horse and several arrows clapped into its breast.
    The next things happened very slow. My horse bowed low until its head finally touched the ground. I tried desperatly to cling to it. However, I finally slipped forward, very slow but inevitable. I tumbled over the head of the dying creature and sat on the ground.

    When I raised my head again. I was surrounded by the Huns and their horses. Of course the had reloaded and were ready to shoot. I gave up. Nothing would save me, not any of my Gods could rescue me. I was at the mercy of the Hun's, a word - that I was sure of - they had never heard in their lifes and that they were not able to understand. Tears were in my eyes, not tears of pain or fear. It was anger that wettened my eyes, anger that this was the end, the end after all this struggling from the steppe of the east until the plains of Italy.

    Just when I thought my life was over something happaned. Something odd and strange. I had closed my eyes, so that I had not to face the Huns when I was dying. I waited for the impact of the arrows. Nothing! I waited longer. Still nothing. I opened my eyes and looked at the huns. They were still where they had been before. However, they did not care about me, they looked at something that was behind my back. Obviously something that confused them and distracted them from killing me.

    Slowly, not to attract their attantion, I turned around. I had expected to something like a Roman legion, or a bear or even Thor brandishing his hammer. Something so strong that it could impress even Huns. What I saw was nothing like that. It was so weak, so meek and so modest that it looked unreal and in a strange sense - scaring.

    A man had left the coach. A single man, small, skinny - obviously no a warrior. He wore an artless robe. He looked so poor. And yet there was something special about that man, something that caused the Huns to surcease their victim. There was a kind of aura - I say aura because I do not know any word that would descibe it better - an aura that surrounded him. He slowly stepped forward. The Huns did not moove. They just stared at the phantom.

    Five steps in front of me the man stopped and raised his arms.

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