Yes it is heavey. But thats because i enjoy creating very vivid images of the scenery. When i finish a book or even a paragraph i like to feel exhausted as if i just went through what the charcter just went through. The best paragraphs i think are the ones that force you to put down the book for a moment and regain your thoughts.

Yes the ending is rather ambiguous. Too ambiguous and vague for my liking. And oddly phrased as well.

Good news. Ill be going to a get together next weekend (what we call a 'coffee house') where people can read/perform their works in a casual atmosphere with coffee and snacks. So unless i write up something else completely ill be going back to this and reworking it a bit. Giving it the ending i had wanted it to have. So i should have something relatively new to post by next weekend.