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    Finally, I have got around to the next chapter. Hopefully during the next couple of weeks I'll have more time to add further installments. Just a question to readers - are the full chapter posts OK, or would you prefer shorter posts breaking up the chapters? Oh and since it's been a while, you might want to review previous chapters to explain what occurs later on in this one.

    A Winter's Tale: Chapter Five

    "If you two aren't ready by the time I count five, I shall leave on my own," Tristan warned as he picked up a knapsack left outside the door.

    Abruptly, the heavy door swung open and Brangain staggered through, her hair unkempt and an angry gleam in her eye. "Will you stand your patience?" she snapped, shifting awkwardly under the weight of another saddle bag. "Jesus and Mary, you'll have me dead."

    "Well then lassie, if you're to die soon I'd better make use of you now, hadn't I?" Tristan lumped the bag he had just picked up onto the girl's other shoulder.

    "Ach, you're the devil in an angel's skin, Tristan ap Cystennin, that you are." Brangain shrugged her new load to a more comfortable position and wobbled up the steps towards the horses that stood sniffing the air some yards away.

    Tristan ducked under the lintel and went into the hut. On the rumpled bed, a backpack lay open while Iseult stood by the hearth, fastening a thick woollen cloak about her shoulders. Her hair was plaited tight to her head and she had dressed in tough riding leathers, stitched into a harlequin patchwork of ebon brown and wine red. She looked primitive and shamanistic, an ancient tribal goddess suddenly incarnate.

    "Are you misbehaving with my servant, sir?" she scolded gently as Tristan entered. She sensed his admiration and responded at the same hidden, animal level, but continued her outward calm. She finished attaching the brooch and stood straight, letting him look.

    "You have spared the rod with that one," he replied, loudly enough for the twitching ears beyond to hear. Then, lowering his voice nearly to a whisper, he said, "You look beautiful....like an eagle home from the mountains. Like you belong here."

    She smiled, her eyes windows of her pleasure. "Did you miss me last night?"

    Tristan raised an eyebrow at the ambiguity of the question but decided to answer its content rather than its possible meaning. "Everyone missed you. The conversation was of naught but you. You made quite an impression on Mark." Iseult looked at the floor. "Come on, we had better be off. I'll tell you all about it as we ride."

    He went over and picked up the bag from the bed. "Anything more to bring?" Iseult shook her head.

    "What about that?" he said, pointing at a small bottle in the corner.

    "Apparently my mother gave it to Brangain so that I could celebrate."

    Tristan snorted. "Good. Then let's take it to celebrate this day together. Your mother wouldn't approve, but then that's another good reason to drink it." He picked up the bottle and pushed it deep into the bag where it would not break.

    "Come on, you two, or I shall go without you!" Brangain's voice mimicked his own, drifting wryly through the doorway.

    Iseult's eyes twinkled. "I'll race you!" she cried, and without waiting hurtled through the door. Tristan swung the bag over his shoulder and strode after her, shaking his head.

    Coming up into the sunlight, he saw that Iseult was already mounted, and with a dry snap of leather and a challenging shout she pulled her horse sharply to the right and cantered off towards the valley centre. Flustered, Brangain kicked her horse into following.

    Tristan sprinted over the few remaining yards to his own mount and vaulted into the saddle. The horse reared in surprise, and as it settled he poked another arm through the bag straps to secure it on his back. Just as he stuck his heels into the beast's flank to charge after the princess, he saw Siobhan watching curiously from a nearby doorway.

    Dismissing her look with a cursory nod of the head, he urged the horse into a gallop, thundering after the diminishing figures ahead in a spray of flying peat.

    Iseult was a fine rider, but had no idea of where she was going, and soon the flat, peaty ground gave way to jumbled tussocks of grass that forced her to pick her way or fall. She was acutely aware that Tristan was rapidly overhauling her on the far side of the wide valley, where the ground was obviously much firmer and more even. After another quarter mile, she saw him drawing ahead and climbing the slope toward a dip between hills, and decided to swallow her pride and cross to his side. As she turned the horse, Brangain muttered in agreement.

    Tristan waited patiently at the cleft, watching the two riders tiptoe their way to the firmer ground and then climb the hill to his position. As Iseult rode up to him, he turned his mount's head and set it towards the slope of the next hill. She settled in beside him, staying silent for a time while Brangain trotted along some way behind, an unintrusive chaperone.

    "Where are we going?" Iseult asked finally.

    "Mark told me you wanted to see the islanders." He laughed. "He was very impressed with your concern."

    Iseult scowled at him. "I did want to find out more. I didn't know you were to be my guide until he suggested it."

    Tristan tilted his head. "I'm sorry. I should have known you would have taken this seriously." He pointed down a long, winding glen, visible amongst the hills some miles away. "I'll take you to the north coast where you can see one of the fishing villages. The fishermen can meet their new queen and you can ask all you want. There's not much more to the Orcadians than fish and the sea. Everything else they take with the sword, and that's Mark's story."

    "So what did he say about me?"

    "I really shouldn't tell you," Tristan grinned. "It might go to your head."

    "Rather there than my heart," she replied quietly.

    "He told us that he thought you very beautiful," continued Tristan, unhearing. "You remind him...you're just what he dreamed of. Dubhgall kept on about a royal heir, and every time stopped in mid-sentence to apologise to me. I think he's even keener on you having babies than Mark."

    "Would his child displace you from the kingship?"

    "Of course not, princess. Things may have gone Saxon in Erin, but here the succession is chosen and approved by the clan." He winked mischievously. "But your children would be eligible after me."

    "My children." Iseult shook her head, wide-eyed. "Do you know how much I've dreamed of children of my own to love, and now it's possible I can't bear the thought."

    Tristan chose not to reply. A gull screamed half-heartedly overhead.

    "How did anyone persuade Mark to become a Christian?" she said eventually. "There's little gentleness in him."

    "No 'turn the other cheek' in King Mark is there?" Tristan nodded. "His reasons are complicated, Iseult. There's the political expedient, of course. Few princes are still pagan, and those that are provide a good excuse for an alliance against them. All in God's name of course, but it's so much more satisfying to destroy an enemy and do God's will at the same time. But Mark doesn't really need to worry about that."

    "Not when he has warriors like you," interrupted Iseult.

    Tristan bowed his head. "You are kind, but rarely do determined raiders offer single combat. No, the islands protect Mark more certainly than any sword." He saw her expression and explained further. "You haven't seen winter here. For six months of the year, only the bravest or most foolish men dare these seas. Orcadians are born both brave and foolish, and we get visits from the fierce Northmen from beyond the dawn, but the rest of the Cruithne and the Saxons, and even your people are too sensible and civilised to come here. Of course, when they do, they have nowhere to rest and recover because the islands are so small. We are well protected."

    Tristan began to lead them up a steepish slope, aiming for the summit of a long, low hill. "No, Mark is a Christian because he feels abandoned by his ancestors. When Cairbre, his first wife died, they had been happy for eight years but he was left childless. He had loved her fiercely and went mad with grief. Everyone in the North of Britain tasted his rage in those next few years and he did a lot of things that he now regrets, which gave rise to his terrible reputation. But finally the monks convinced him that he could be forgiven by God, and that he might be loved again. I don't think he believes it, but he's got nothing else left." He looked at her with that mystical and depthless stare that held everything and nothing. "You are the salvation of his soul."

    "And you won't be responsible for denying him that salvation, will you? Tristan, have you ever thought what he will do if I am not what he needs?"

    "You have to be. Ridding the islands of foreign tribute is only the beginning for Mark. There are many here who...who have other ideas. He needs strength and stability. He needs you."

    "Surely he can't be that weak?"

    He laughed, an edge of salt in the sound. "Mark isn't weak, Iseult, just hurt. Like a wounded wolf, he's unpredictable. Equally, there are those who will put him out of his misery."

    "And why not you? You could rule here in an instant. They all love you."

    "With you as my queen? Lucifer himself has no temptation to rival that, princess. But I am tanaiste. I have my honour. And Mark has you."

    "This is ridiculous." Iseult stopped her horse. In surprise, Tristan reined in some yards away. "Have you seen two more foolish people?" The question was shot at the approaching Brangain, and it flashed across the moorland like a swooping merlin. The girl pulled up, nonplussed. Then her face creased into a frown.

    "Not so far, Iseult" she said sternly, "but I fear for the both of you if your foolishness deepens. We're an awful long way from home, now."

    Tristan shifted in his saddle. "There's no harm will come to anyone, for any reason."

    Brangain snorted. "Sure, and you'll cut down every warrior at King Mark's call to protect this lady. And then Conchobhair's hordes. And will you be finding peace amongst this bloodshed? No, Tristan, it's you who must give this foolishness up. Let her be. That is where your courage lies."

    "It is not for you to tell me about courage, girl."

    "Isn't it? Why are you here then? You both know what's at stake here, but you're still playing these games. You talk of honour while behaving like children."

    Iseult frowned. "You speak too freely, Brangain. What Tristan does is no concern of yours."

    "Is it not?" Brangain quickly bit her tongue. "Ach, you asked. And I don't want to see him hurt you as he will if this goes on."

    Tristan's eyes iced over until neither woman could tell whether he would shout or ride away into the sun. Finally, a smile etched onto his face but left the ice intact.

    "You are a wise woman inside a child's frame." Brangain bridled at his faintly patronising tone. "Come on, we'll ride beyond this hill. There is a stream, and shelter from the wind. We can eat and enjoy the sunshine."

    Without waiting for their consent, he drove his horse up the hill, keeping a distance between him and the following pair. His back clenched from time to time with contradictions.

    Iseult rode in silence beside Brangain, occasionally betraying her anger with sidelong, razor-edged glances. The girl shrugged them off, knowing she had spoken in her friend's best interest.

    They topped the hill, and looked down into a natural green bowl. A stream, shining like a bolt of silk rolled carelessly down the far side of the cwm, fed a glimmering pool. After tarrying there a short while, the water cascaded down over a stair of rock-jumbled rapids into a soft mantle of jade-leafed trees. Birds cavorted and danced in the sunlight, which seemed to be embraced and warmed by the steep grassy slopes into even more benevolent radiance. The bird-song blurred and blended in the distance, a soft susurration of natural music that twinkled its harmonies over the metallic percussion of water on rock.

    "Tristan, this is magical!" Iseult stood in her stirrups, her angry mood lifted from her by the gentle summer orchestra. Brangain too, looked suddenly spellbound by this enchanted place.

    "Not all the islands are bleak," he said in a voice that was. He prodded his horse forward, down towards the pool.

    Away from the cutting breeze that seemed a permanent feature of these islands, the air was soft and warm, like the touch of a mother's hand. Iseult loosened the binding of her cloak and let it fall over her horse's rump. Small wild-flowers decked the grass-strewn slope, jewels of colour amongst the verdure. Far away, a rabbit’s tail flicked in the sun and was as suddenly gone. A swift soared around them, its flight a dipping, weaving maze of skill and frivolity, tracing through the blue sky in swooping patterns as it struck at the insects disturbed by their passing. Bumblebees rumbled through the air, disdaining of the swift's gifted mastery, intent on their work between the blooms.

    As the riders approached the pool, the sound of the waterfall increased in volume until it clamoured like a gathering of garrulous bards, arguing, boasting and harping with no regard for each other. The pool itself shimmered and small ripples distorted the rocky bottom with wobbling images, made rusty by the peat. Tiny waterboatmen skimmed the surface near the shore, skating like the footprints of invisible starlings from eddy to inlet. The bottom of the pool seemed impossibly deep and far away, even though the water shone with clarity, as if below the surface lay the entrance to another, unknown world.

    Tristan's boot-heels clacked discordantly on the flat stone as he dismounted and led his horse over to a flourishing swathe of grass where it could feed and rest. Exchanging a glance, his companions came to a silent agreement and Iseult lowered herself from her horse, giving the reins to her friend. Brangain quietly took the horses over to the grass, where they snatched at mouthfuls of the fresh fodder with undisguised delight. She began to unload some of the packed cups and platters, ready to make lunch.

    Tristan was standing, completely still, his eyes glaring into the cascade of water as if it were babbling a litany of accusations at him. His frame was taut as a harp string, ringing with acrimony. Iseult came up behind him and laid a gentle hand on his tensed arm.

    Feeling her touch, he pulled away. It was an awkward, disjointed movement, as if the arm belonged to someone else. He froze again, still staring into the water, his immobility an impenetrable wall that was being raised, brick by brick in front of her.

    "Tristan?" Iseult's voice trembled with concern. His shoulders softened a little, but he still did not turn to face her. Instead, he walked carefully away from her to sit on a large, hump-backed boulder overlooking the pool. Only then did he raise his eyes to her. Grey as snow-rimmed slate, they had focused on that far-off land which only he could see, looking at her and through her as if she existed somewhere else, somewhere inaccessible to him. Her heart crumpled within her.

    "I must go away," he said at length, in a voice that was as calm as the surface of the tarn, "to Cornwall, or perhaps Brittany. I am asking too much of myself."

    Though her chest was tight with desolation, Iseult kept her voice calm, as if they were discussing what to eat for lunch. "You are tanaiste. Will you abandon your people?"

    "It is the lesser of two evils. It will be in their interest, after all."

    "And what of me?"

    His eyes widened minutely, their colour seeming to darken still further. "I'm asking nothing of you, save that you forget me. Forget this."

    "You say that as if I were a candle, lit one moment and dark the next. I can't do that. You of all people should know that."

    "Nonetheless, Iseult, you must." He shifted uneasily, and a faint shimmer of warmth returned to his face. "Or at least, put me from your mind. I thought we could cope with this. A little willpower, a little restraint. Once you were married, I told myself, it would be easier. I would look on you as a sister, a friend. I've lied to myself believing that would be enough. But Brangain is right - I'm playing with you and myself. I'm denying that part of my soul, perhaps all of it, that wants to touch you, hold you and never let go, but it's far too strong. It's as if there is a part of me missing, an absence that when unseen was not missed, but now is tearing me in half. I feel like I am dying each time I am near you and cannot hold you."

    Iseult took a step nearer but his expression warned her away. "But you can hold me," she pleaded.

    "You're a fool," he rebuked, harsher than intended. His voice softened. "There is no going back, don't you understand? If I give in, we can never go back. The sky will fall, and we will be alone to face it. No, Iseult, our dice are cast. I will not be responsible for war and dying, if you will."

    "Why must there be war?" She wrung her hands in futility. "Why won't Mark understand? He doesn't love me, and you are tanaiste. Surely if we married the alliance would be as good?"

    "For honour's sake." Tristan's gaze inverted upon itself like a vengeful gimlet. "The same brutal honour that rules these lives of ours. Your father would be humiliated because Mark would have rejected you. Mark would be humiliated because you would have rejected him. The Church would be humiliated because we would have rejected its alliance and its wisdom. That is a destructive group of angry men. That is a recipe for war."

    "So you will leave me to my fate."

    "It is a softer fate than many. You will have life, and love and children. It is a better fate than loneliness. With me, you would have nothing. At the very least, Mark would have us both killed. Even if we escaped, we would be kinless, outcasts. Your children would have no clan and no safety."

    Iseult sat heavily on a low rock, defeated. She felt bereaved, as if Tristan were dying in front of her. "So, this is our last day together. You're going to leave tomorrow, aren't you?"

    He shook his head. "I had made no plans. This course of action only came to me as we rode."

    "Then..."

    "No. I must be at your wedding, for otherwise it would look amiss. But I won't see you again alone, and I will leave soon after. I must be selfish, for I will not be able to look at you and know..." His voice quavered suddenly, betraying his anguish. "And know that you had been with Mark."

    "Oh, Tristan." His pain, inadvertently revealed, brought hot, stinging tears to her eyes.

    "Please, don't cry. I am a memory that you will cherish, but I will fade into the remembering of a good and happy life. We have today to ensure our recollection is one of warmth and joy."

    Iseult nodded as best she could, struggling to wipe away the tears with her hand, but they refused to be restrained and continued to roll treacherously down her cheek. "I can't lose you, Tristan."

    He stood, and for a moment she thought he might come over to her, comfort her. "You won't. Some time, perhaps beyond death, we will find a way to meet again." He looked bleak. "There is a verse from a song that has been much on my mind.

    'In Time, all wounds heal, no matter how deep,
    Pain but a memory stitched to a seam.
    We will be rejoined though God seems to sleep,
    Loving for now in the care of a dream.'

    "Dreams are all that is left to us." He walked away, over to the horses where Brangain stood fiddling inconsequentially, trying not to be aware of the couple's words or intrude on their pain.

    "The princess seems sad," she said as he approached, more to forestall an awkward silence than to enquire.

    "I am leaving the islands in a few days," he replied, his voice level and controlled but sounding to Brangain like one long sigh.

    "Forever, isn't it?" She studied his face, impassive but lacking the gaiety that habitually rested around his eyes. "Ach, Tristan, you're a brave and tender man. I'll be praying for you." She looked over at the slumped shoulders of her friend, still shaking with sorrow.

    "I think I'll be leaving you two alone for a while." At his look, she continued, "It's a rare and painful thing to lose a loved one. If I were her, I should like to be alone with you, just this last time. To say what needs to be said before it no longer matters. Then there won't be too many 'what ifs'. Talk to her, Tristan. Make her laugh like you used to. Be Cai for her, one more time. She'll remember you fondly for it."

    "Where will you go?" He seemed confused by her offer, unsure of the change of ground.

    "Not too far," she said lightly. "Up yon hill, to where the spring rises. I'll try and see Erin."

    Brangain mounted her horse, flicking her hair in the wind. "I packed the food in that pouch you're carrying. Leave a little for me, now won't you?"

    Tristan watched her ride slowly up the slope of the hill, winding a careful way beyond the crest and out of his sight. When her figure had finally disappeared over the horizon, he remembered about the bag he carried and unslung it from his shoulders. He went back over to Iseult, who sat quietly watching the ripples on the pool, no longer weeping. She turned to him as she heard his footstep on the rock.

    "Brangain suggested that we eat lunch together. She has gone for a ride." He sat beside her and pulled open the bag. It was easier to talk now the words had been spoken and the tears shed. "What have we here?" he said, poking a hand into the interior and bringing out various items. "Bread, smoked herring, a little ham. Quite a feast. Och, and a bottle of celebratory wine." He spoke lightly, bidding delicately to lighten Iseult's heart.

    She tried to respond, stretching the emotion from her neck and reaching over to unwrap the ham from its linen envelope. He tore a small hunk of bread from the loaf and offered it to her, but she looked at him with a faint hint of admonition. "I'm not a bird, Tristan," she said.

    He smiled and tore off another, larger piece. That done, he picked up the small glass bottle and unplugged the wax binding around its neck.

    Iseult spoke through a mouthful of bread. "Hadn't you better get some cups for that?"

    He nodded and ran lightly over to a flat boulder near the horses where Brangain had laid her goblets when unpacking. He felt encouraged by Iseult's attempt to cheer up and made his way back quickly. "As commanded, two cups." He sniffed the open bottle with a curious savour. "Where in heaven did your father get this?"

    She took the bottle and tested the fragrance carefully. It smelt of wild roses, of children's summers, of starry nights. She raised her eyebrows and poured the wine. It flowed, syrupy and faintly greenish in colour, like an old and treasured mead. "I've seen something like it that my uncle brought back from a raid at Caer Uisc. It must be very special."

    Tristan picked up his cup and raised it to her. "To dreams, and the happiness they bring."

    Iseult ignored his irony and drank from her cup. The taste was smooth, warming and full of meadow flowers, but she coughed suddenly when a fierce herbal aftertaste caught her throat.

    Tristan refilled his cup and set about dismembering one of the fish. Iseult watched a swift swoop over the shimmering pool, dodging the rocks as if they were leaping up to catch it in flight. A thistledown floated precariously over the water, chased by eager breezes until it grasped at the long bristle of a grass stem, tired of its coquettishness. A tiny bird settled on the weary branch of an old and tired tree, forcing its drooping, gnarled fingers to splash gently in the mirrored surface. Lazy, irregular ripples struck out from the trembling bough, and the bird began to sing to match their rhythm. She felt her desolation seeping away into the tranquillity.

    "Why is it so different here?" she asked, letting the sun steep its balmy warmth deep into her bones. "It's so peaceful, so far away from everywhere."

    "I'm afraid I don't know." Tristan drained his goblet and settled back against the giant's pillow of a stone that he leaned upon. He closed his eyes and let a breath of serenity float over him. "The first time I came here, I was quite young, about thirteen, and it seemed to me that I was the first to see it. I used to dream about it a lot, especially being here with...."

    Their eyes locked, and stayed tight together. "With whom?" asked Iseult slowly.

    Tristan broke the spell with a grin as he stood up. "You're assuming again, princess. I might have meant with a good bottle of wine."

    Iseult stood too, brushing the sand from her breeches. "Then why did you stop yourself?"

    Still smiling, he ignored the question. "I feel like that child again, you know? Maybe now things are set, I can be free to enjoy this time with you." He jumped up onto the rock that had been his seat. "Yes, I remember it now. Iseult, let me show you a place of dreams."

    Exhilarated, he jumped down next to her. Watching the light playing in his eyes, she impulsively stretched out and took his hand in hers. He did not withdraw as she half-expected, but tightened his grip. She felt a shivering, tingling exchange of energy through the tight clasp.

    Then he was away, leading her gently along the stream bank, guiding her past tussocks and rounded stones, across scattered bays of greenish-grey sand and towards the flickering brilliance of the trees. Their leaves shivered with excitement in the irregular breeze, a myriad of candle flames burning emerald in the sunshine. Overlaid with the dappled blanket of the wood, the world itself changed colour into a coruscation of greens and yellows, gold shimmers and jade benedictions. The susurrating rustle of the branches mixed with the jangling music of the brook, supporting the impression that they had sunk beneath the waves of a mystic sea. The trees crowded around, protective of their visitors, until in a sudden moment, the couple emerged into a tiny clearing, nearly open to the sky and nestling close to the racing waters.

    The grove was softened with grass so deep in colour it would shame the sweetest apple. The greensward was silken and short, as if it were tended, but the grove was so obviously wild its gardeners could only be from beneath the hills themselves. The sky above shone in azure tranquillity, unblemished by clouds. The stream rushed over grey rocks, gurgling with delight, splashing and splattering like it was newborn. A breath of wind hardly stirred the leaves, not daring to impose more than an accent on the quietude of this place.

    Tristan seemed not to be breathing, and Iseult could not bring herself to speak. The gentle beauty of the grove was overwhelming, and she could sense that a miracle was dancing lightly amongst the gentle saplings. After more than a lifetime, Tristan turned to her and let the veil fall from his eyes.

    "I love you," he said, simply. He let go of her hand, but with a reluctance to lose her touch. He opened his arms gently, inviting her in. "You are my heart and soul and the harsh world will drown in my love for you."

    A grab of conscience momentarily kept her motionless, something preventing her step. Then, just as suddenly, all trepidation, all misgiving, all restraint left her. She flew into his arms and grasped him close tight.

    There was a rushing, reeling sensation of happiness as the world around was splashed away by a wave of utter completion. She felt his heart beat, the surge of his hot blood, the gentle strength in his iron muscles. Her heart felt like a falcon, swooping into the sky, exuberant with the thrill of life. She could hear all the wonderful sounds around her, clearer than ever before, as if she had been born once more into a different world, a world nearer to heaven. The trees seemed to whisper and laugh with joy, exulting with her in this sudden paradise. She felt like she had come home, contented as if in a soft, new-made bed on a cruel winter night but exhilarated like a child watching the blizzard blow in.

    She clung to him, never wanting to let go, until she felt the caress of his breath on her neck. Shivering at his touch, she lifted her head and looked deeper into his silver eyes than he had ever allowed her before. She felt her lips part and he kissed her, fierce with his passion and full of the weeks of longing. She responded, her body arching with the vibrancy of his embrace, harnessing it, loving it and returning it to him in a wild-storm of desire. Time and time again their lips parted for a fleeting second, their panting breath intermingling in the island air, but unwilling to stray far or too long they kissed again and again, dancing with their lips and tongues in a whirling scherzo of love.

    Suddenly, his touch appeared at her bare neck, lighter than a down feather but so intense that Iseult gasped with the thrill. She looked at him, eyes wide with expectation and want. He bent again to her lips, knowing her heart but seemingly unsure of the enormity of her need. She brushed his lips with hers, teasing, evasive, and lifted her hands to the laced neck of her jacket. Carefully, fluidly, with a sparkling smile playing about her eyes, she loosened the lacings, letting the leather fall languidly apart to reveal the soft skin of her neck. Tristan watched her delicate movements, spellbound, completely enchanted by the magic she wove, anxious that should he touch her at this moment, she would fade back into the dreamscape from which she had sprung. She pulled the final knot from the thong, and the jacket hung enticingly from her shoulders, only the thin white fabric of her undershirt keeping her breasts from his gaze. Still he did not move, hardly daring to breathe. Gently, she took his hand by the wrist and brought it up in front of her. She kissed the palm softly, tracing a circle with her tongue, touching his ring-finger with her lips. Reverently she laid his hand upon her breast.

    Under that touch, their individual worlds dissolved. Lost in the universe of themselves, they blended, interwove, shuddered, shouted, touched, smiled, danced and loved.

    ***

    Soon they lay quietly, breathing softly in perfect synchrony. As the wonderment faded into simple joy, she looked over to his resting head, and stroked his hair, marvelling in the touch of him and the truth they had found together. "I love you," she whispered, and he raised his head to look at her. His eyes smiled with a deep, secret smile that would be theirs forever. Never again would she fail to read their message.

    "You are my heart," he said, kissing her breast. "I love you too."

    "Can we stay here forever?" she asked, looking at the trees that shone benevolently around them.

    "We may have to," he replied, still stroking her skin, exciting little shudders to run along her body. "But I cannot think of a sweeter exile."

    She luxuriated in his touch, the sense of being bound to him, two people with one soul. "Make love to me again, Tristan. Don't ever stop making love to me."

    He kissed her gently and held her tightly to him, while above a bird sang sweetly, celebrating the union of true love, and the miracle of happiness that shone in the hearts below.
    "If there is a sin against life, it consists not so much in despairing as in hoping for another life and in eluding the implacable grandeur of this one."
    Albert Camus "Noces"

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    Highly Enjoyable!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Banquo's Ghost
    Just a question to readers - are the full chapter posts OK, or would you prefer shorter posts breaking up the chapters?
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    A Winter's Tale

    Chapter Six, Part One.

    Iseult sat in darkness, cloaked by the quiet, her thoughts hidden from the world. She knew the summons would come soon, and she feared the moment. She had heard the booted steps in her mind over and over again, knowing that they would not bring an invitation from Tristan, but Mark. The night was still new, but already too deep.

    She felt the anxiety in her chest like a tiny bird flailing around its cage. This was the lonely, dangerous time when her resolve might weaken into fragile denial. She tried to listen again to her lover's words, recalled from only a few hours but a cold lifetime ago, words of necessity and hope. Clever, caring words, that could not armour her against the trepidation she felt while waiting for those footsteps.

    She called back a memory of the sunlit glade, trying to exorcise her fears with the magic of that sudden and liberating love amongst the trees. A love that now needed to be hidden in lies and secrecy, shrouded in the darkness she had drawn around herself when all she wanted to do was sing out about her happiness. She saw Tristan's face, lit once more with love for her, and remembered the frown that had slowly clouded that beatific expression.

    "Now we are bound together," he had said, "you must know what a struggle we face. How much of ourselves we must destroy to be happy." He had looked at her with a searing intensity that reached far into her soul. She had been so glad to let him in, to be comfortable trusting him so much.

    "Tristan, my darling," she replied, shifting her legs from under her to lie across his lap, still wanting so much to keep touching, keep feeling. "I understand, really I do. Let me ask you something first, something important." She watched him nod his assent, curious. "You say you love me, and I know you do. But is there anything that could change that? If it came to a choice, what would you choose before me? Honestly now."

    He looked away, as if caught off guard. He seemed to be searching his soul, finding defences, reasons. The pause lengthened. At last, he turned back to her and locked a steady and untroubled gaze into her eyes. "There is nothing else." He shrugged. "I love you."

    She leaned forward, hugging him tight. "I love you too, Tristan. For me, there is only you, whatever I have to do to keep you. I hoped you would say that. I should have known." She sighed, full of contentment, but knowing that this happiness would only be regained by great trial, and soon. "Now, my heart, tell me what we must do."

    He stroked her hair, long, tender strokes full of comfort and love. She felt blessed, as if God's strength and grace were being infused into her through his gentleness. She kissed his chest.

    "Though it grieves me, you are going to have to marry Mark." He paused, waiting for her reaction, but it was evident that she had known what might be necessary. "If you don't, we'll risk death at Mark's hands. It may be romantic to die for love but it's not necessary for now."

    "We will love beyond death," she said, tickling the hairs of his thigh. "You told me that yourself. I'm not afraid."

    He laughed and ran a finger down her nose as if she was a child. "I don't doubt it, princess. But it is not necessary. Can we trust Brangain completely?"

    "Of course. If only because my fate is hers, but truly because she is my friend."

    "Then once we are dressed, we must take the Threefold Oath together, with her as witness."

    Iseult sat up. "You mean, marry each other in secret?"

    He smiled and nodded. "Before the old gods and in the presence of the Christ, using the most sacred oath of our blood. Then your marriage to Mark will be impossible in truth, so you can go through the ceremony with him but your vows will be void."

    "I will have to lie, perjure myself."

    "I know. But not in your heart, where it matters. Most of all, you can plead that you were making them under duress, and thus gainsay them later. My family have good influence with the church - these are considerations that will get you an annulment. It will buy us time to get away from Mark on some pretext, an escape we cannot make now."

    She looked at him, eyes wide with thought. "But have you considered that I must lie with Mark at some point - probably tomorrow night?"

    His lips stiffened into a thin line and his jaw clenched. "I know. But that is the pain we must bear for our love's sake. And my tortured dreams are as nothing compared to what I ask of you - you will have to bear his touch."

    Iseult saw the anxiety that consumed him, knowing what he was asking of her. She stroked his face lovingly, trying to smooth away his guilt. "I've lived through worse, my love. I have this afternoon to think on, and it may be that the king will find me so unresponsive that he will tire of me quickly. I'm more worried for you. I want you to promise me that you won't think of it, to know that it will mean nothing to me and that I will have you always in my heart. If I believe you are unhappy, I won't be able to go through with it."

    "You are the most precious jewel in God's creation." A tear ran down his cheek. "I love you so much. And I promise, I will be content."

    She kissed the salt water away, and then moved to kiss his lips, fiercely as if imprinting the feeling onto her soul. He responded with similar passion, and she felt his desire rising once more. She broke away, laughing.

    "We must get back to Brangain." She stepped over to her clothes and began to dress. Her undershirt flapped uselessly in her hand. "You are too rough, Tristan," she scolded lightly. "Tell me, how do you intend to get us away from the islands without a fight?"

    He grinned. "I will suggest a pilgrimage to Rome, or somesuch. There are many ways."

    Pausing whilst lacing the front of her jerkin, she said, "And we will still meet, as best we can?"

    "Of course." Tristan came close to her and took the laces from her hands, carefully tying the garment for her. "We must be very careful. But we can always meet and talk, for we will be kin. And I'm sure that we might stray in this direction on occasion, for lunch."

    She stretched up and kissed him, still trembling with happiness. "You will make me fat, with such promises."

    "Not for the times we shall have such an opportunity, my love," he said earnestly. "Now, we must find Brangain and hope that she does not scold us too badly."

    Iseult started. There was a sharp rap on the door and it came again, insistent and abrupt. The glade had gone, her feeling of contentment had gone, Tristan's soft, strong hand had gone. There was only duty and darkness left. For a long heartbeat, Iseult wished hard that she might fade away, be snatched by dreams back to the little woodland of her happiness. The darkness only ignored her. Drawing on the strength of her dreams, she stood up, tilted her head royally as her mother had taught her to do, and made to leave the darkness.

    ***

    The feast hall was still quiet, those who had taken their places early limiting their voices to gentle whispers and stifled chuckles. The rowdiest noise came from the broad doorway, flung wide to the starry night and to the greetings of friends and kin, echoing the excitement of the clan gathering deep into the oak-vaulted hall. Few wanted to settle yet, restless and eager for an early glimpse of the princess, or the chance of a snatched word with their king on this happy eve. Some shot glances through the doors to the brooding figure at the high table, carefully keeping their anxieties to themselves and their company.

    Tristan had come to the hall a half hour before, tired of pacing the flagstone floors of his cottage, tired of trying not to think. He had hoped to find distraction in the buzz and jostle of the incoming guests, but as he sat alone the pleasantries and gossip all stung him as unimportant and inconsequential. Angrily, he had accused himself of unfairness and self-pity, but still he felt trapped. Debating with himself, his mind responded with the defence that at least unfounded malevolence towards his fellow clansmen kept him from dwelling too long on that which might send him mad.

    As he glowered at the door, knowing that to frown so badly at this time was foolish yet still unable to lighten his brow, he saw the shapely figure of the Princess Siobhan push past a jovial woman and head purposefully toward the high table. She would take her place beside him, as was the custom, and curiously he hoped that the inevitable crossing of swords would take him out of himself. Besides that, he was aware that Mark still had hopes for their alliance, and he was interested in how far that remained Siobhan's goal too.

    "Greetings cousin." Her voice was ever dark with that alluring, bittersweet honey that had fired his blood over a year ago. Then, landing in the islands of his mother's birth to find his cousin flowered into such a beautiful woman had been a pleasant surprise. To find her so clever, so stimulating and so interested in him had been providential. Immediately, their passionate affair had brought the question of tanaiste to everyone's lips. Now, he felt the emptiness and indignity of their relationship like a wound. He rose swiftly, and pulled her chair out for her to be seated.

    "Courteous as ever, my prince," she smiled, mocking him as she had always done. Once, he had found her taunting challenging, exciting.

    "I am glad to see you once more, Siobhan," he said, meaning it. He felt no antipathy toward her, simply regret, and wariness.

    She tip-tilted her head, an imperious, unconscious gesture that emphasised her lovely, cruel jawline. "Yes, you've been very preoccupied since your return. I was disappointed that you wouldn't make time to see me. We are so close, even now. But I am sure the Princess Iseult is a very demanding person."

    "Mark is the demanding one." Tristan felt a tiny smile play about his eyes, which he knew were as grey and opaque as the clouded moons that flashed at him opposite. They were both well aware of each other's capabilities at this game, and the spice this added was hot. "He has had me nurse-maiding the princess since before she left Erin, and has not relieved me of the duty yet."

    "Not such an onerous one, I am sure."

    He finally let himself smile. "Not in the least. But she doesn't have your...intellect."

    Siobhan let a ambiguous silence develop and then dropped her eyes. Her head dipped in wry acceptance of his compliment. She watched the gathering at the door for a time before speaking again. "Will she make Mark a good wife?"

    Tristan shook his head very slightly. "I can't say. She would make a fine queen."
    "And bear him a son?"

    "Now, cousin, who can say? That is in God's gift."

    She turned back to him. "Of course, the Christ makes babies. And miracles. But neither will bar you from the kingship now, will it Tristan?"

    "I was hoping that you would be glad for me. After all, Siobhan, a half year ago such news would have caused you ... ah, excitement."

    She grinned at the implied memory, a smirk full of raw passion. "Ach, my prince, if only you had accepted my offer then. What rulers we would have made, with my brains and your beauty."

    He noted how the pupils of her eyes went narrow with some inner treachery, a vengeful memory of his rejection. He decided, without sensible reason, to salt the wound a little. "Now, as then, I cannot allow you to banish the Christians from the islands. You were most dear to me, but what you called love was not and is not worth a war."

    The grey mist of her eyes stayed blankly unreadable, a sign that he knew signalled a hit. She smiled, a thin line of deep winter frost. "So you have said, my sweet one." A hubbub of noise erupted from the doorway. "I think our uncle has arrived. We shall talk some more, Tristan. I find you so relaxing."

    She stood up, and Tristan followed, both turning in the direction of the entrance where King Mark was carefully forcing his way through the crowds of congratulatory clansmen. Behind him came Dubhgall, fiercely protective like a fussy mother hen dressed in a bear's body.

    Tristan saw with interest a nod of acknowledgement directed at his cousin from a tall, craggy-faced man who had slipped through the crowd at the back. Sitting himself down at the far end of the long side table, he continued to stare at Siobhan until she frowned severely at him. At the warning, he turned away.

    Knowing well that Siobhan would have realised that the exchange was observed, Tristan decided to make an point of it. "You are surely not seeing Gospadruig, little raven?" he whispered.

    She smiled wryly at his long unused endearment. "If only that was true jealousy, my white hart. Gospadruig has his uses, but intimacy is not one of them."

    "I'm glad to hear it. It is only reasonable for you to be upset at our parting, but that would be rather beneath even your dignity."

    "As ever, Tristan, you flatter me with words of honey." Suddenly, the corner of her eye caught Mark beaming at them across the hall, evidently happy that they were locked in such deep conversation. "Smile, cousin, our uncle is approving of us."

    Tristan looked over and smiled dutifully. Mark hoisted himself onto the dais and made his way along the high table. Beyond, Maire and Brangain came through the doorway, now emptying of guests as they finally went to their seats. The girl was looking completely bewildered, deprived of both her mistress and, Tristan knew, much of her certainty by the afternoon's events. The look on her face now almost matched the expression she had worn as she had seen them clamber towards her waiting by the pool, lovers hand in hand. Though he recalled more raw fear in her then.

    His gaze folded inward as her terrified words rang again in his ears, the sound of one sentenced and pleading. "It's not my fault," she had wailed as they approached. "Oh Jesus forgive me, what have I done?"
    "If there is a sin against life, it consists not so much in despairing as in hoping for another life and in eluding the implacable grandeur of this one."
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    A Winter's Tale

    Chapter Six - Part Two

    Iseult had gone over to her and hugged her, her face furrowed with concern. The wine bottle that Brangain had been waving in distress fell from her wretched hands and she began to sob.

    "You have done nothing wrong, Brangain," comforted Iseult softly. "We are happy, but it is our choice."

    "No. It isn't. You don't understand. Oh God." Brangain wracked herself with unexplained grief.

    Tristan came over and gently prised the girl from Iseult's arms. "Let me," he said, and led Brangain over to a rock, sitting her down firmly and kneeling in front of her.

    "Brangain," he said, a flash of steel in his voice. "Brangain, listen to me. And look at me." She did so, calming at little. He wiped the tears away from her face with a tender hand. "Tell me what you think you have done wrong. Remember little one, whatever happens is God's will. There is no blame to attach, even if it exists."

    The tiny shudders of her shoulders calmed, and she sniffed away the last of her sobs. Nonetheless, as she spoke, her eyes kept darting to Iseult as if expecting sudden retribution.

    "Tristan, I had to do it. The queen made me, and I thought it was for the best, for sure. I didn't want to." Realising that she was not making much sense, she took a deep breath and continued. "The bottle. You shouldn't have brought it. I didn't pack it. It was a potion. The queen threatened my family. I was supposed to give it to Iseult and the king. It was supposed to make them fall in love. I had no choice, Iseult. No choice."

    Iseult stared in horror, open-mouthed with shock. "You were to poison me for my mother?"

    Tristan looked at her expression and felt a rising pressure in his chest, suddenly released from his control by his lover's stunned face. He guffawed with delight, laughing so hard that he fell backwards onto the grass. He let his joy take full rein for a long while, and then sat up to regard his astounded companions. A wide grin settled over his face. "Och, my love, don't you see the poetry in it?"

    Iseult's expression had only changed to include puzzlement, so she obviously did not. He stood up, still smiling broadly. "Your mother, bless her, tried to fool you into marrying Mark, and no choice about it. But by interfering, she gave God the tools He needed to stop us making a terrible mistake. The true love He wanted was ours, and we, rather I was trying to deny that. If Gormlaith had left well alone, I would be about to leave your life and the islands now. But she had to make sure, didn't she?" He laughed with joy. "Don't you see? This was fated."

    Iseult melted with his words, catching his mood. Brangain still looked puzzled, but no longer frightened.

    Tristan grasped her hand and urged her to stand up. "Brangain, your family will be safe. The princess is to marry Mark."

    The girl's face creased with further bewilderment. "But didn't you two just...I mean, she can't."

    "Yes she can, little one. She must for all our sakes. But not for long, and not in the eyes of God." He turned to Iseult. "Do you see, my love, how we will succeed? God defeated my attempt at denying this, and He will help us even though we must lie for now. Our true vow will be the one we take now, with Him as witness." Seeing her nod, he grasped Brangain's hands tighter, imploring her help.

    "We need your understanding. To forestall the binding of the wedding vows tomorrow, we are binding ourselves through the Threefold Oath here and now. We need you as witness." He stared deep into her heart, willing her to accept his plan.

    Brangain nodded, still bewildered, but realising that events were moving too fast for there to be time to reason and reassured by Tristan's insistent confidence.

    Tristan smiled again, and held out his hand. "Come here, my heart." Iseult joined him, her grip warm and thrilling to his touch, tight with her belief in him. He felt stronger than he had ever felt before, fired by purpose. As he looked about him, savouring the fresh green trees, the liquid diamond of the water, the solid truth of the rocks, he felt blessed by God, as if angels from heaven had descended to stand around them in a circle of benediction and encouragement.

    Touching Iseult, feeling her hand so delicate, yet so full of spirit and strength, he felt unified with all creation, a harmony with all that lived and loved. Though his heart swelled with pride and joy, he was overwhelmed by a sudden humility, an abrupt sense of how small a life was his, yet how incredibly favoured. Impulsively, in celebration, he hugged Iseult to him, fierce, desperate, needy.

    She kissed him, and stroked his face, as if she understood what was singing in his soul. He felt more strongly than ever that this woman was the half of that soul, bound to him through Time and now indivisible in joy for the rest of eternity.

    He turned to Brangain. "With you as witness, I take this woman, Iseult of Erin, the truth of my soul, as my love, my heart, my wife. I am hers until Time dies, and beyond. All I have been, all I am, all I will be is hers. There is nothing else. This I swear with the Sacred Oath of my people, and should I fail, may the trees gather round and choke me, may the waters rise up and drown me and may the earth gape wide and entomb me. I swear it too on the Holy Trinity of my God, the Father, the Son and the Holy Spirit. So be it now, as God is my witness."

    Iseult's eyes glistened with tears as he turned to her, sparkling like the dew-drenched hills of her homeland. She lifted his hand and kissed it reverently. "Brangain, witness my vow. Tristan ap Cystennin, in my royal right as princess of Erin, and in my heart's right as queen of my soul, I accept your oath and swear to you eternal love. You are everything to me, and there can be nothing else that matters. I love you, cherish you and can give to you no more than this truth, for all I am is yours already. I love you Tristan, and will do forever. My love is true, and true love can never die. This I swear to you, before God, with the Sacred Oath of my people, and should I fail may the trees gather and choke me, may the waters rise and drown me and may the earth gape wide and entomb me. I promise you this in the name of the Father, the Son and the Holy Spirit, forever witness to my eternal love."

    Though he had prepared for this moment, Tristan felt her words arrow to the very deepest part of his being, resonating with such power and reality that he feared he might faint with the happiness. He watched Iseult turn to Brangain and embrace, the two girls crying with shared joy, and tears sprang from his own eyes.

    ***

    His introspection was jolted back to the present by a sharp slap on his shoulder. "Why the tears, nephew?" asked Mark, now standing beside him and looking odd. "You're away with the Sidhe."

    Tristan smiled and blinked away the unwelcome wetness in his eyes. "Och, I was thinking of a happy story. I might have told it tonight, but I'll think of a better one."

    "There'll be little time for stories tonight, Tristan." Mark sat down in his great chair. He waited for the others to seat themselves and narrowed his eyes at his nephew. "You were away much of the day."

    Tristan shrugged. "You wanted me to show her the island. She is a demanding woman. This all takes time. And I felt it best to avoid MaolColm's leper colony."

    Mark nodded. "Good. So, Tristan, can you tell me what she thinks of me?"

    "She is very closed, Mark." He scratched his head as if to attest to the impenetrability of the princess' true mind. "I think you will find her difficult to comprehend. But I do know that she found you impressive and fascinating in your short visit."

    Mark chewed the inside of his cheek. "Do you think she'll love me?"

    "Who can tell?" Tristan smiled. "Maybe in a while. She still resents being taken from her home. And, Mark, please remember she is not Cairbre."

    The king's eyes focused inward, shuttering away the thoughts. Tristan watched him with a little sadness and then continued. "I would recommend you treat her with kindness. I have found her to have too much pride to respond to anything else. She has her father's stubbornness and her mother's courage."

    Mark came out of himself at the words and smiled. "Aye, I remember Gormlaith. Damn near married her, but her ambition was too great." He pierced his grey eyes at Tristan. "An affliction in an otherwise beautiful woman, wouldn't you say?" His voice was deliberately pitched to reach Siobhan's ears.

    Tristan grinned and leaned back, allowing the princess to defend herself.

    "Perhaps," she said slowly, "perhaps the affliction is being too honest with men. I have a feeling that Princess Iseult is both as ambitious and wiser than her mother." Siobhan took pleasure in the momentary flicker of thought that showed in her uncle's eyes.

    "Hmm. On the subject of my bride, where in Heaven's name is she?" Mark bellowed the last words, causing a sudden shock of silence. After a pause, Brother MaolColm detached himself from a small group at the entrance and stalked down the middle hall. Opening his arms in a submissive gesture just below the dais, he explained, "MacDubhgall has gone to fetch her, my lord. She will be here in a moment."

    "Good." Mark stood up. "Let's have some wine then, before we greet her."

    The jumble of assenting voices and clatter of goblets undertook the king's invitation and once more the hall filled with the low thunder of chatter. As his goblet was being filled, Tristan looked over at Brangain, who smiled wanly back at him. She seemed lost, though Maire had taken it on herself to look after the waif for now. Then, as he watched, Maire's face brightened, and Tristan followed her eyes to the door where Dubhgall stood, half a yard behind Iseult and with such a radiance of pride on his face that he might have been her father.

    She was truly beautiful, her fair hair brushed long and fine, laid in cascades of the palest, shimmering gold around her shoulders. She wore an exquisitely embroidered gown of midnight blue, sewn with scenes from the legends of CuChulainn in gilded thread that flashed in the guttering firelight of the torches and lanterns. Her head was crowned with a garland of intertwined precious metals, so delicately made it might have blown away at a sudden breeze, but set with sapphires of such a vibrancy that they might have been plucked from a jay's wing. From her shapely neck, across the soft skin until it flickered at the gentle swell of her breast lay an intricate weave of golden chain, supporting a midnight sapphire the size of a falcon's egg, that shadowed and gleamed with each breath's rise. She held her head high, steady, acknowledging the worship of the clan, royal and unafraid.

    The silence stretched, no-one wanting to break the spell that Iseult's beauty wove, no-one wishing to interrupt the sweep of those jade eyes as they danced an enchantment over the feast hall, touching everyone's gaze except Tristan's. Then, beside him, a chair scraped and Siobhan stepped gracefully down to the floor, gliding over to Iseult with her hand offered in greeting.

    "Come, sister, and join us. We are honoured to by you." She stood, as royal as the newcomer, her invitation insistent and welcoming. Iseult took her hand and followed her to the high table, passing behind Tristan's chair without a look and seating herself next to Mark.

    Iseult smiled carefully at the still silent and watching crowd. "Please," she said gently in a clear and ringing voice, "enjoy our hospitality. You're making me feel like a holy relic."

    Laughter and surprise broke the quiet and voices rapidly turned into discussion and animation. Iseult looked to her right, where Mark, Tristan and Siobhan sat in a line watching her. Both Tristan and Siobhan had raised a surprised eyebrow and looked at her wide-eyed. She suppressed a tiny gasp from her lips, for the three pairs of silver-grey eyes that regarded her shone with uncanny similarity. Mark's sea-storms, Siobhan's snow-clouds and Tristan's mystic moons all twinkled with that far-off, unreadable magic from the land of Faery. She felt fascinated, hypnotised like a rabbit in the presence of a three-headed snake.

    A man bearing a platter of roasted meats interrupted the spell by leaning forward and placing his load on the table. Mark and Tristan immediately reached forward and chose their meal, and the loud clatter from the hall showed that their lead had been well received. A rough brown sleeve carefully reached past her from the left, and she turned, astonished that MaolColm sat beside her at the high table.

    He saw her look, and nodded greeting, whilst sinking his teeth into a large haunch of beef. Chewing on his mouthful thoughtfully, he swallowed and then spoke. "Your humour is a little less respectful than I had expected, my lady." He said nothing more, evidently having laid an opening gambit. She assumed that it was more for the rest of the high table than for her.

    Indeed, it was Mark that spoke first. "Priest, it was clever and well done. Surely God does not mind a smile?"

    Iseult leaned back carefully to allow the conversation to mature around her. She was still feeling disoriented, and wanted to settle and understand something more about the confrontations here.

    MaolColm shrugged. "Of course not, my king. But it is sometimes dangerous to judge what may or may not offend God."

    Mark snorted and reached for another rib of beef. "You tell me that the Church, and you, know these things. Yet you are from a poor clan at the edge of the world. How much better must the princess know, with ancient royal blood and the Christ a king too?"

    MaolColm shifted, warming to his task, but there was a wrinkle of uncertainty about his brow, and he shot furtive, concealed looks beyond the king to the penetrating double gaze of Tristan and Siobhan. He knew that each of them had their own reasons for faulting his arguments, and both were intellectual falcons.

    "Indeed, Our Lord is a king, the High King of all the peoples of the world. But His law is handed down through the gospels, and we His priests bring it to the people. As I have told you, we are like the bardic scholars of your earlier years. Just as your father consulted them on points of law, so you now must take our advice."

    "As I understand it, MaolColm," said Tristan quickly, "Gaetilach MacCormac took no-one's advice save that of his sword."

    Mark choked with sudden laughter, causing Iseult to react without thought, patting his back to relieve the coughing. As he recovered, he held up a hand to her, bidding her cease. Still grinning, he thanked her. "Already you save me. You have a solid blow for one so lovely."

    Iseult smiled thinly at him, and then turned to MaolColm. "But Brother, I also..."

    Mark interrupted her by banging a fist on the table. The hall quietened. "No," he said firmly, taking Iseult's hand in his. "I will not have that said." At her stunned and embarrassed expression he explained further as the guests realised that their attention was not called for and resumed their feasting. "By calling him brother, you include him in the royal clan. I have told MaolColm that I will not have this. He is not your brother nor mine."

    At her look, MaolColm shrugged non-comittally. She nodded to the king and sat back, feeling crestfallen and estranged, out of place once more in this foreign world. Mark saw her crushing loneliness and made to speak, but could not find the right words and instead took a tearing bite at his meat bone. He glared at Tristan for help.

    Tristan saw her sudden confusion and felt sorry for her. She looked so alone, completely abandoned, and though to most of the hall she seemed dignified and controlled, he could sense the bewildered desolation that rose in her throat. He leaned forward. "MaolColm, tell the princess about the new chapel you have built high above the cliffs. It is, after all, your finest work here, and no-one has taken her to see it yet."

    After a pause when the monk stared blankly at Tristan, he came to his senses and began describing the new building, drawing Mark into the conversation to explain where they had found the stone, the places in Caledon that they had raided to find precious metals and glassware. The king spoke tenderly, thankful for this simple topic. Tristan watched Iseult become animated once more, grateful to be included in this proud lecture. He sat back, smiling at her returning confidence.

    Once, she let a glance flash over Mark's shoulder to him, and her self-control faltered for the blink of an eye. The gratitude of her smile shone like the sun breaking through a long rain-soaked day. He returned her smile with a wink, and settled back into his chair to watch the hall in its revels. He felt himself relax gently with a certain satisfaction.

    Disconcertingly, he began to feel an unwavering attention. He lolled his head round to meet Siobhan's gaze. Her face was open, strange, full of contradictions. As he looked at her, an imperceptible smile played around the corners of her eyes, and then suddenly her thoughts, whatever they had been, were shuttered away behind those cold, silver mirrors.
    "If there is a sin against life, it consists not so much in despairing as in hoping for another life and in eluding the implacable grandeur of this one."
    Albert Camus "Noces"

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    Now that we've reached Chapter Six, I would be grateful if any readers would share their impressions. Most particularly, on characterisation and its depth - or otherwise.

    All of the main characters (bar two) have been introduced by now, and the relationships between them beginning to come into focus (one hopes). Do they engage your attention? Do you find yourself considering what moves they may yet make?

    Any feedback would be appreciated.

    "If there is a sin against life, it consists not so much in despairing as in hoping for another life and in eluding the implacable grandeur of this one."
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    Lightbulb Re: A Winter's Tale

    Quote Originally Posted by Banquo's Ghost
    All of the main characters (bar two) have been introduced by now, and the relationships between them beginning to come into focus (one hopes). Do they engage your attention? Do you find yourself considering what moves they may yet make?
    Still no replies? I'll take the lead then, although to be honest I haven't read this story as attentively as it deserves so I won't give detailled comments. Let's just say that I find the character very engaging, and amongst the best in the Mead Hall. Tristan and Iseult seem very familiar to me know. On the other hand, I am unsure about Siobhan and MaolColm. I feel they are important characters but I am unsure of motivations and their part in the whole. However, I assume that this will be cleared up later on.
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