Intriguing indeed. Are you going to continue this, Divinus? Don't be put out be the lack of comments. The Mead Hall is a quiet place; but people are reading your story.
Intriguing indeed. Are you going to continue this, Divinus? Don't be put out be the lack of comments. The Mead Hall is a quiet place; but people are reading your story.
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Certainly. But only after I give myself more free time. As it is, I am just about at the end of my rope. Something has to give and it's going to be in this order:
(1) Org
(2) Video games
(3) School
As of right now, I am just about two thoughts from taking a six month break from grad school so I can deal my career change and new baby. If I do that, I should have time to write again. This story is actually a piece I was playing around with a few months ago. I would like to continue it since I have the story line completed. It was going to be a potential publishing attempt. I was a tad dissapointed by the lack of feedback. I need some constructive criticism on my writing.
Now this is a good story!![]()
There, but for the grace of God, goes John Bradford
My aim, then, was to whip the rebels, to humble their pride, to follow them to their inmost recesses, and make them fear and dread us. Fear is the beginning of wisdom.
I am tired and sick of war. Its glory is all moonshine. It is only those who have neither fired a shot nor heard the shrieks and groans of the wounded who cry aloud for blood, for vengeance, for desolation.
My apologies for not posting after the first one.
You continue an interesting story - revealing just enough to keep us in suspense.
Finish it!
Or at least continue it very soon.
Updated in first post
Do you readers prefer that I update as a new reply or would you rather I update only the first post and notify you in replies?![]()
Last edited by Divinus Arma; 01-02-2007 at 05:38.
Update the first post and post again to notify us, I think.
The plot thickens.![]()
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