Compilation of Poetry

[The Stranger]

i will comment poetry then :P

I am not yet born; console me.
For I
Am tearful like the weeping willow tree.
Who’s sap bleeds profusely.

the For I part should move to the next line and the empty spot should be replaced with something else. It disrupts the rythem

Golden Wind is simply Great

Essence of Black Magic is the Best in your first post

but i did not liked Ravens, i dont know why... it just does not appeals to me.

I like your writhing style, did you developed it yourself or you used other writers as example? I mean not stealing anything but just the way they write, i do that with stories too...

I will post poems later too if i have time