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  1. 05-31-2006, 11:06 #1
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  2. 05-31-2006, 16:46 #2
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    Interesting sample! I recall a Timothy Zahn excerpt in the back of Star Wars novel that had a similar feel to it, but with less cultural depth than this.
    I'd like to see a nice chunk of background history and stuff now.
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    Lightbulb Re: Ragnarok

    Very good! I like the setting. Please continue .
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    Quite amazing to see the Nationstates rp, having been finished for years, being taken this far. I know some history of your nation but i admit i've forgotten, please continue!
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    hmm, wouldn't mind a couple of Valkyries to myself! probably a bit tall for me though...
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    Very nice combination! Please continue.
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    Sorry about the wait people, give it a few more days and I will have another chapter in here...

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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    Quote Originally Posted by Sigurd Fafnesbane
    Sorry about the wait people, give it a few more days and I will have another chapter in here...

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    There is no rush SF, I believe i tested my readers patience when writing The Second Dark Age. Not on purpose mind you! Yet the point is, take your time. Better to have a finely tuned product than a rushed piece.
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    ... story retracted for edit ...
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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    You might think it's tough going, but I think your persistence is rewarded. You're not giving too much away, the identity and motives of the enemy remain mysterious and there's lots of other stuff in there to make the reader think 'I want to know more'. I'm currently not writing anything much at the moment, total writer's block!
    So, is some kind of revelation imminent?...the public demand more! Hopefully Thor will get 'up close and personal' soon as well.
    I like the use of mythical names too, the AEsir ship being named after Freyr's famous ship.
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    Lightbulb Re: Ragnarok

    I can only second Matteus' comments. It may lack a bit in novelty, but that is not necessarily a bad thing, and the description is quite good.

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    Default Re: Ragnarok

    ... story retracted for edit ...
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    Lightbulb Re: Ragnarok

    Is this story going to be continued? I am very curious about what is going on.
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