Stranger, a generous offer. However, Ludens is right. It is not the business of the mods to comment the stories, it is the business of the members (us!).

May I make a proposal? I volunteer for being the first Volunteer Mead Hall Annotater. If you want me to comment your story, pm me and I will try to do my best.too.


However, keep in mind, that

  • I do not speak or read or write English very well. So maybe I do not understand the story.
  • I only have little time, but I will do my best.
  • I tend to be honest. Consider the negetive effect before you call me.
  • I have no clue about writing. I am only telling you my point of view. There is no correlation with the quality of your story.

If you like the idea, please join. There must be more qualified persons here.If you make use of it, please comment at least one other story,