Discussion: story feedback

[The Stranger]

I would like to feedback any poetry that is posted... i guess the PM method is a good one... i also volunteer :D

[Csargo]

I'll volunteer to do that.

[Franconicus]

So now we have four volunteers? Excellent! However, we may have overrated the wish for comments.

[Prince Cobra]

Well, I can act as an unofficial volunteer... I have started reading the stories around so it should not be a problem( however I am experiencing problems with ' The Machiavellian Adventures of Princess Eleanor' now - it is good but sooo long ( which does not make it worse) ). In addition I am writing my story . I am too busy to be an official one

By the way I agree the literature is very subjective. But it is for the writers' good to tell them what do you think about their work . Because otherwise there is no way for the writer to improve his style. And the more opinion there are the more objective the comment is. I myself prefer the bitter truth because I realise I have really much things to improve ( probably I suffer from masochism).

P.S. In addition I am not a critic at all. Just a simple amateur.

[Ludens]

So now we have four volunteers? Excellent! However, we may have overrated the wish for comments.

Oh dear. We've finally got enough critics, but now there is a shortage of stories .

Two of the three authors that have posted in the meantime explicitely asked for comments, so I don't think there is a lack of demand. Perhaps they didn't notice this thread, or they prefer to be critized in their stories.