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    Default Fall of Riga- A play on the 17th Interactive

    I thought it would be interesting to write a story on the 17th Century interactive. This has no bearing on the actual thread whatsoever.

    In this story, Soloboskyi needs to be changed into Solobowski. There are multiple references to Soloboskyi, so mentally change it to Solobowski.
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    Pan Solobowski watched the falcon diving amongst the reeds along Lake Peipus. The husaria officer had settled on the shore, his Valachian steed nosing amongst the tall grass. Most of the banner had settled as he had amongst the grass. A week had passed since the banner had ridden through the Smolensk gates. The city was ruined by the disease, starvation, and the Cossack foot-soldiers. As the cannons breached the walls, the Cossack locust poured inside. Swinging halberds, shooting the bows, cutting with swords. They had ravaged the inside of the town, raping, pillaging, looting. The 2,000 Ukranians had drunk themselves into the bottom of the barrel, taking credit on vodka against future loot. As the husaria rode in, the Cossacks had worked their horrors.
    Pan Solobowski pulled out the tanned leather map of Livonia. The Swedes had surrounded Ryga, the Swedish navy blockading the harbor. The Danish had attempted to relieve the city, but to no avail. The Lithuanian Hetman had attempted to relieve the city from the south, but his command had faulted, and the Finnish riders had driven the Polish riders away. Surprise had been written on the face of many of the Husaria elsewhere.
    "Pan Solobowski, tell me, where is the main column?" The lieutenant Pan Hysalizki approached from behind, his tall Swedish boots stomping the mud.
    "Their on their way to Ryga, just like we are."
    "But, where captain?"
    Standing, Solobowski pulled down his black moustache, and punched the lieutenant in the stomach. Coughing and spitting, the lieutenat doubled over on the grass.
    "There lieutenant, now shut up, and mount up," Solobowski walked over to his horse and mounted. Swinging the leopard pelt over his shoulders, he turned in the saddle to check on the the other hussars. They had returned from the shore, and they mounted. Turning his horse southwest, he clicked his tongue to his mouth, and the column rode on.

    It was near afternoon when he pulled his steed to a halt before a small Estonian hamlet. A mountain amongst the flat terrain of Estonia. Here some of the Tartar scouts had reported Swedish supplies in the town. The hamlet was indeed packed with Swedes. Wagons were parked outside the town. In town, the Swedes had built pens for pigs, cattle, horses, and chicken.
    "Lieutenant Hwcizki, take about fifty troopers and cut the northern road. Lieutenant Dobowick take another fifty and cut the southern road. I'll take the hundred and capture the town. When the horn blows thrice, return your riders to the town."
    "Aye Pan!" was the reply as columns of riders broke from the hussars and headed with the lieutenants. Soloboswski waited ten minutes for the roads to be cut. Pulling out his stabbing sword, Solobowski moved his horse forward, begining at a march pace. Then, he increased the step. His hussars fanned out behind him. Another increase, the trot. Then at about one hundred and fifty yards, a thunderous gallop. The hussars hadn't placed the wings on the saddles, but the sight was still terrifying. The Swedes had seen the riders, but weren't prepared when the riders crashed into the hamlet. A couple houses was all that stood. Crashing into man and wood, the horses carried the riders onward, the riders thrusting and battering the Swedish men to death. Four times, the riders tumbled across the hamlet, four times the Swedes were killed. Half of the riders dismounted and searched the houses, and pistol shots rang out from inside. All told, about thirty Swedish men were dead, and hundreds of supplies were denied. Blowing thrice on a brass horn, the sounds echoed across the barren grassland. A few minutes later, the hundred riders returned to the town.
    "Kill the pigs. Wring the chickens' necks. Free the cattle and tie in the horses. Put anything that might be needed, grain, beer, gunpowder, essentials on the horse. Burn the rest."
    As Pan Solobosyki rode from the hamlet, the evening sky was lit with flame and hell. The bodies burned and shrank. The smell of burnt hair and burnt flesh permeated the air. Then two explosions as powder charges under the town square exploded. A third was amongst the remaining wagons. The cattle startled, but returned to grazing on the grass.


    Captain Njord cursed the Poles. "Where is the powder! The second battery needs powder!"
    A messenger stood before the blustering Swede, withstanding the harsh, vodka laden breath.
    "God almighty, how in Jesus Christ are we to get the fornicating walls broken if we have no fornicating powder!"
    "I...I don't know captain, I'm only doing what I was told..." the messenger, a boy of twelve or thirteen was cut short.
    "God-damn them to hell! Go to the admiral ask for some fornicating powder! God-damn them to the inner circle of all damnation!" The Swede yelled at the top of his lungs, sitting beside his artillery piece. A few months of bombardment had brought down some stone. Assaults had not yet carried the city. Then the Poles sneaked in grain and meat during the battle outside Ryga. The Swede commander had been lucky the Pole Hetman was a total klutz, or the Swedes would be looking over Ryga, at the end of a pike.

    A cannon farther down the siege line barked, followed by a crack as the Ryga wall suffered the impact.
    "Hey captain, they got bread and cheese from Stockholm!" a cannoneer called as he left the tent forest.
    "They always have bread from Stockholm, and the cheese is moldy."
    "Aw captain, your always so pessimistic."
    "Your always happy Garjholm."
    "True captain, true!" The Norwegian enjoyed living to much for Njord's liking.
    "There's no powder from Tallinn, so we'll need to scrape the cannonballs again, get the rust off."
    "They should land at Ventspils, or closer. We control every waterway north of here."
    "Yeah, well they haven't thought of it yet, so shut up!"
    Garjholm smiled slightly, then pulled a piece of bread and ate it.
    "You got your beer ration Garjholm?"
    "In my stomach captain. I heard that cannon four's captain is against alcohol in any form."
    "Yeah, well he's a lunatic Protestant, and it's to bad he doesn't drink. Drinking is the only way I live."
    "Captain, shouldn't you start slowing down on the liqour. That Scotsman, Henry Borne, he died a few weeks back. He drank like beer was his own blood. Doctor said he died of liver problems."
    "Scotsmen are weak. The only way your live through fourty winters is by drinking."

    Johnathon Brook puffed his clay pipe, the smell of tobacco and weeds swirling into his nostrils. Sitting in a tavern south of Ryga, he enjoyed the luxuries not many of the Swedish paymasters enjoyed outside Ryga. The Swedes were busy firing cannons and matchlocks, while his pikemen and musket-men were guarding their rear. News had been mixed after the start of the siege. The Danes had sent a fleet that battled the Swedes. The Danes were even allied to Poland. The Danes were defeated, and the Poles were beaten back, which surprised the pikemen. Johnathon thought they might break through, but they didn't. They did smuggle supplies into the city itself, sustaining the garrison.
    Stretching back, he scratched the short beard he had grown over the summer. The entire nation of Swedes seemed to be beards, moustaches, and some even braided it. Bristol didn't have that many men with moustaches, most shaved it clean off.
    Stomping his feet, Johnathon stood and walked outside. Night had enclosed the tavern and the surrounding buildings. The Swedes had fortified several towns around Ryga, hoping to secure a modicum of protection and security.
    Walking through the town, he entered the outskirts, where tents had grown like mushrooms after a heavy storm. The army of the Swedish were set on capturing Ryga.
    Walking to his tent, a smather of light arrows fell into camp. Some struck tents and fell away. Others hit flesh, resulting in screams and blood. Two of his pikemen were dead of blood loss.
    Damn Poles. Tossing his pipe to the side, he stepped inside his tent and began to undress. Slipping into the sheets, he heard another clatter of arrows.
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    Pan Soloboskyi watched the hundred husaria ride out of the forest. The banner was led by a knight from Tchavassy, Pan Soltyk. A oak of a man, his horse seemed sickly thin to his body. Riding with the eagle feather banners on his saddle, the riders seemed to be crimson and silver angels.
    "Ho, is that Pan Soloboskyi?"
    "Yes, you sly dog, it's me" Soloboskyi rode to his friend, grasping his hand. Soltyk was a gentle man, holding one of the titles after years in the husaria. His wife had given him three sons, all in the Grand Hetman's guard.
    "Were you the one who set the powder off last night?"
    "How did you know?"
    "A little Tartar told me."
    "Mine ran into a couple Swedish soldiers, and the bastard lost his head."
    Smirking, Pan Soltyk pulled out his map of Livonia. Black x's marked his raids. Soloboskyi pulls out his, comparing the x's.
    "Struck that port twice. Caught a couple ships in the harbor." Soltyk smiled again, dazzling Soloboskyi with his whitened teeth.
    "Swedes piled up on this highway. My lancers caught them in the open."
    Nodding, Soltyk circled three spots on Soloboskyi's map.
    "The Swedes have set up depots here. I haven't hit them yet, to many targets."

    Turning their horses away the two banners of horsemen dismounted in a clearing. Here, Soloboskyi, Sotyk, and the dragoon leader, Horodenko. Pulling out flints and steel, small camp-fires cooked the chicken. Soloboskyi had feared the Swedes would see the smoke. Then he stumbled onto a Swedish camp, cooking several swine without drawing his notice.
    After a couple minutes, the dragooner Horodenko rode into camp. His dragoons were muddied, carrying a musket and two pistols.
    After dealing the food out, Soloboskyi met with the three captains. Horodenko was wearing a red and gold coat of the dragoons, with chaps over his trousers and boots.
    "I have word from the Lithuanian Hetman. His army is marching to relieve Ryga. Several cannons have been silenced by our efforts, lacking sufficient gunpowder. The Swedes have built walls to repel our attacks. Luckily, they left a hole. Between Captolls and Ridwya, a cattle pasture that is now a marsh. The Swedes have left it mostly unguarded. The Hetman has placed Pan Solobosyki in command of the three banners on promotion to Colonel. You have orders to secure this marsh, colonel. Then the Hetman will launch the Cossacks and the infantry into the enemy."

    Captain Njord applied the match to the powder. A swift coughing bark erupted form the cannon. A feather of flame shoots out, followed by the sulphurus gas and the sound of Ryga being battered down.
    "Hit. Three degrees up, and we'll hit the break."
    "Three degrees!" The chock blocks were removed from between the barrel and the mount. Swabbing the inside, the crew loaded the cannon.
    "Ready captain!" the gunners chorused, one producing the match.
    "Fire!" Njord screamed applying the match and shuddering with the explosion.
    "Hit captain, we got a hole!" Garjholm cried with joy.
    Smiling slightly Njord awaited the reloading. The powder had been pulled from the fleet. Two caskets had fallen in the water, along with six shots of lead.
    Another roar as the cannon barked lead and flame.
    Marching past, a company of Swedish gunners and pikemen.
    "Increase rate of fire on section eight!" The artillery commander screamed at the gunners.
    "Assault, give'em cover!" Njord yelled at his crew. Moving quickly, the rate of fire began to increase. Muskets were adding to the din of fire. Sharper crashes of thunder broke into the steady cannon heartbeat.
    Then the scream as an assault piled over the battlements to Ryga. The defenders responded. Muskets answered musket. Bows loosed arrows into the assailants. Rocks and tiles flew from the stone walls. Another cannon cough, and his shell struck three defenders. They were blown into body parts, struggling and lurching in their death throes. A pulpy mist covered the nearby defenders.

    Johnathon felt as if he were going against a heavy wind. The storm of arrow, bullet, and rock had crippled some of his pikemen and musketeers. Others were giving cover fire, steady and regular crashes of musketry.
    "Bring the ladders! Ladders! Faster!" Johnathon exhorted his men, calling the ladders. Cannonballs hurtled over their heads, whistling into the wall. Dust and grit covered the soldiers. Baskets of rubble were moved forward, providing a modicum of defense from bullets.
    Movement occured as ladders were pulled up. Pikemen discarded their pikes, drawing swords as they ascended. Pistols added to the fire. Pikemen dropped away. Another crash of musketry sent defenders tumbling down to the ground. Then the ladders fell away with a clatter of wood.
    "Retreat lads, move back!"
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    Nice work, keep it up.

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    Hmm... The names look odd. Almost as transcripted from Russian

    It spoils much in the short story - I am Polish and I have no idea how to read those


    BTW Look at the second post in this thread - the after battle screen shows you a good choice of Polish names - unfortunatelly the proper Polish letters are missing here and there, but with english keyboard you will not be able to write that anyway...

    https://forums.totalwar.org/vb/showthread.php?t=68716
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    I was reading With Fire and Sword, and the names blew me away.
    I'll edit the Polish names, save for Soloboskyi.
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    Colonel Pan Soloboskyi peered through the blazing auburn streaks of sunrise. The cattle pasture was flat, a plate of water and silver. Glistening, tendrils of mist rose from the marsh.
    "Get the riders into three columns. I want the riders to dismount and stay close. If a horse gets trapped, shoot it." Soloboskyi knew his hussars would have a terrible time doing it. He couldn't risk the Swedes opening up of trudging hussars. The Lithuanian Hetman had said Cossacks and infantry, cavalry and archers would follow.

    Moving slowly amongst the pasture, Soloboskyi had become fastened three or four times, the mud sucking him down. The dragoons brought wicker baskets and walkways, laying them down across the pasture. A couple horses neighed, a few men cursed ill-luck. The pasture stretched for miles in either direction. Soloboskyi was surprised it was opened by the Swedes.
    Then the click.

    Captain Njord had been angry that the Swedish commanders had pulled his cannons away from the wall bombardment. Then, as the early mist covered the pasture, he saw it was worth it. Several lines of dismounted Poles. Crimson and silver, gold and leather. Then the click of the muskets.
    Pulling the match to the cannon barrel, Njord bellowed "FIRE!"
    An earthquake shook the pasture. A phoenix of fire appeared, followed by smoke and ash. The entire world seemed to fall apart as muskets crashed amongst the coughing roar of the cannons. Barks and thunder.
    Njord scanned the thick smoke, looking for a sign.

    Pan Soloboskyi swiftly turned to his hussars. Some were confused like children. Others were dead. Horses cried, and men screamed. Turning back to his horse, Soloboskyi mounted . The rest of the hussars mounted up. Soltyk mounted his horses. Another crash of muskets. Cannons also bellowed away. They couldn't see past the smoke, and some flew overhead, others hit the marsh with a splatter of mud.
    Turning in his saddle, Soloboskyi felt an urge.
    "For Poland, for the Commonwealth. Hold your pallasz firm, and your mounts steady. For POLAND!" Soloboskyi kicked his horse forward. The banners followed. Now, his horses wore the eagle feathers, and a harsh whistling sound followed the riders. Mud and water flew past and around. Some riders were hurtled off, their horses crumpling into the ground. The banners were holding the stabbing pallasz sword, and Soloboskyi felt his mount carry him onward. A cannon roar filled his ears.
    Leaping swiftly, the horse struck two Swedes with her hooves. Stabbing into a Swede, Soloboskyi saw red blood fountain and froth. Sending his horse onward, Soloboskyi stabbed and thrust. Pistols cracked with miniature fury. Men screamed in Swedish, Polish, Lithuanian, German, Ruthenian, and many other languages. Muskets crackled into the distance. Swords and clubs, musket butts and axes. Swirling and twisting. Blood and flesh. Leather and steel. Blue and yellow, crimson and silver. Riding onward, Soloboskyi knew his husarias had done good. Turning his steed, the flood of riders contiuned. Charging back into the Swedes, he killed man after man. One captain had stood his ground, swinging his matchstick like an axe. Then he disappeared under a flood of crimson and silver.

    Johnathon pulled out his pipe and poured tobacco and weeds into the cup. Touching a match, he pulled in the tobacco's smoke. Sitting inside Ridwya, he had seen the Swedish foot-soldiers march past, below the battlements. Then the cannons and caissons. The Swedish had left a skeleton force on the wall-defense. The ring of towns were re-inforced. Ventspils had landed a company of mercenaries from France, who secured several fortified town garrisons.

    As the dawn had broken, he heard a distant thunder.
    "Swedish cannons lads, a battles commenced." Johnathon mentioned, still smoking.
    "Should we go captain?" on of the mercenaries asked.
    "We go if they tell us to go," Johnathon spoke out, pulling in the tobacco.

    As the day went on, the thunder stuttered to a stop. Swedish soldiers flooded inside. Cannons went past, crashing and tumbling as they hurried on. Then the Poles. Johnathon had seen the riders before. The battle outside Ryga.
    Eagle wings fluttering, they moved swiftly. Crimson and silver. Blood splattered some of them. They held their swords with the points going down.
    Pulling to a halt before the city gates, the leading rider spoke up in a harsh Swedish.
    "Do you surrender?"
    Johnathon had contemplated such a question before.
    "No, Pole, no." Johnathon spoke in Polish.
    Pulling out his brass horn, the Polish hussar blew upon it twice. Riding on, the Pole contiuned down the road.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Marshal Murat
    I was reading With Fire and Sword, and the names blew me away.
    I'll edit the Polish names, save for Soloboskyi.

    Please at least remove this 'y' - Solobowski will look at least as the proper Polish name.

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