Quote Originally Posted by SwordsMaster
It is hard to find critics, believe it or not, specially people who would not only tell you what is wrong but why.
In case you haven't spotted it: there is a small discussion going on in the Mead Hall on how to remedy this (link).

I agree with most of what Banquo's Ghost said, except that the source of the protagonist's anger was clear to me when I read it. He is frustrated with his life: it isn't getting him anywhere.